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Will is more than he seems and very connected to the entity in the deep forest. The way Charlie saw it reminded me of when they discovered a unique life form. It was when they house sat for one of the gang’s relatives…can’t remember the exact connection, was it Adrian’s cousin with the piano?
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Then there’s this…Johnny Horton north to Alaska….
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Who Was That Boogeyman I Saw You With Last Night, Charlie Boone?
drsawzall commented on Geron Kees's story in Fiction
My sentemetals exactly -
I found the following to exceptionally well written… asked. “I watched a lot of chefs who explained how and when,” Rachel shrugged, “It makes sense.” “I can’t decide which one I like best,” Ian complained. “Who is your favorite composer?” Joel asked. Ian thought a few seconds, “I can’t choose just one.” “Right,” Joel nodded. “The song is their cake. You can like several. It’s the composer and musician who makes the cake. When you play...say Mozart, you add you as a baker. When you make the musical cake, no one else can duplicate it. When Lunga plays the same song, he and the composer make a unique cake. Both are wonderful.” “Oh,” Ian nodded. “I like them both.”
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Politics is the art of looking for trouble, finding it everywhere, diagnosing it incorrectly, and applying the wrong remedies…..
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Lawyers…can’t live with them or with out them….
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Interesting times ahead for the boys with many questions to be answered…
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Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
drsawzall commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Boy From Argos
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It’s all part of growing up, the only constants in life are change, taxes, and death….
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And they will discover that life is a series of challenges and changes…
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Amen brother…from your voice to the eternal youth fairy!
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Chapter 48: “Assume formlessness”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 48: “Assume formlessness”
In a sense, the only path to pacification is the total destruction of what succors your adversaries. -
Shattered Beliefs, Pt. 1
drsawzall commented on Mike Carss's story chapter in Shattered Beliefs, Pt. 1
One lonely voice speaking in what could be called the wilderness, a place where the truth is and will be despised at first...Hopefully there is an underground movement that can help get the word out... It is obvious his debriefing isn't going to go well, fact in point, he is now a danger to those prosecuting this war and the vested interests.... -
May you live in interesting times
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in May you live in interesting times
Can't disagree with the comment below, money laundering seems at this point to make the most sense... What truly worries me is, by using Ludo and Damian as 'cover' for her nefarious activities did she have plans in place in case she had to scarper, that is to disappear nearly instantly, what if part of those plans were to throw suspicion towards Ludo to buy her time to vanish? -
Rogue accountants and supportive friends
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Rogue accountants and supportive friends
Well, the worritting in this chapter was easily dispelled!!! -
Thank you for this, it was an enjoyable read!!
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Love the comment!!!
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Wondering just where this success in the courtroom will lead…moving on up to bigger fish?
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Teddy is nothing but trouble
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Intriguing to say the least. As to those impatient readers, myself included, can I suggest a bit of help??
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Very enjoyable. Looking forward to more of you have more chapters coming.
