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    Chapter 4

    Well, it would be typical for a Halloween thriller....other than that all I got is
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    Chapter 3

    A very intriguing chapter to sat the least and then if you think about it, the entrance to the space elevator is technically a door.... Thanks, buddy. But I don't see the Door stuff meeting Charlie Boone. Charlie and the gang whiz all over space and time with the help of elves and starships...who needs doors? But now that you mention the Door stories...there is a third one coming. Shh! Now how about a fourth or a fifth???
  3. The operative lesson here is that the devil is in the details, always read the contract's fine print!!!
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    Chapter 18

    What a great chapter, space will be found for Ollie, some may be temporary and as long as the authorities know the plans and David on their side, all I can expect are some minor hiccups!! Simply loved the following...cannot wait to see how all this goes and good on ya Bradley finding your own path!!! “Oh that. It arrived this afternoon. Judging by the sender, it’s electronic or games stuff for review.” “Why haven’t you opened it?” “Because it’s not addressed to me. It’s addressed to the awesome foursome. Each of them.” We both started laughing. “Come on let’s have dinner.”
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    Muster

    What an adventure the boys are having, giving them a better appreciation of life on a cattle station...Not sure I would want the job of placing the Knacker Rings on the young bulls tho!!!
  6. Oh Quigly...youth and inexperience will only get you so far, thank the fates Pickle likes you...perhaps when this is all over, she just may help to further your education...if you could survive her lessons!!!
  7. Looking forward to the conclusion and echoing @VBlew's thought, while highly unlikely, if Aziel is the second angle, would Daniel complete the trinity?
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    Chapter 2

    Witha disparate party of 13, one would think of calling ahead to get dinner reservations....
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    Chapter 1

    Let's not forget St Patrick's Day either...
  10. It will be interesting to see how Quigley crashes and doesn't burn....
  11. Quigley has reminded me of something I've seen folks do when hit or struck by a disaster, almost to a person and while they may have lost everything, they still considered themselves lucky as the family survived...
  12. Do I get the sense that things just may be taking a step or two forward???
  13. Loved this chapter!!
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    Twenty-One

    The more Keith is accepting of himself, the more he sees his life getting better!!! By this time, thoughts of sex had rather evaporated, and it was nice to go to sleep cuddled together. Almost all Keith’s final thought was to wonder what it would be like to do this every night.
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    Chapter 9

    All I got is...
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    Chapter 9

    I thought I might know what was going on but...I did not think Mitch was going to be that type of ...dork!!! It was a side I never would have expected!!!
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    Chapter 1

    John Henry 6,234 Posted 25 minutes ago 4 hours ago, drsawzall said: Nothing like having a plan and seeing it take off!!! Right! Lol Sometimes being a "stupid" jock pays off. What I should have said is there's nothing like having a plan and seeing the clothes come off!!!
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    Chapter 3

    Now we know why she refused all offers to have her driven home...or is it another, gasp...red herring??? Ken needs to reach out to the DMV and ger a freaking photo of this girl sent to his phone or e mail account frigging pronto!!! Let's not forget the DNA test results....I just get the feeling some of Joe's old adversaries are behind all of this....
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    Balfour

    They are on the adventure of a lifetime working on this station making memories that will last forever!!!
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    Chapter 15 S2

    As others noted the footprints were a concern, what about fingerprints that were left on the bad guy's phone and car??? Glad to see that had a nice relaxing fishing trip... As to transitioning to a German Shepard was a scary thought tho the following looks much scarier...oh and @RainbowPhoenixWI is that @weinerdog and the missing shoe????
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    Chapter 1

    Nothing like having a plan and seeing it take off!!!
  22. Oh boy...Is something going to hit the proverbial fan??? It wasn't long before Manny needed to keep one of those guns locked in his bedroom. Next up - "Ending the Trial Period, and Ivan's Associates Appear"
  23. Simply one of your best chapters yet...we see another side of Lyoth and Captain Suoki, one that renders your heart!!!
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    Chapter Three

    Well, just who is the beggar and what powers does he have??? After their meal, they headed back to their apartment, catching a glimpse of the beggar again. As before, intense eyes watched them pass, but this time he was careful not to stare for too long. Regardless, Brohm wasn’t pleased at the attention, and stopped his horse to shoot him a murderous glare. The beggar withered against his gaze. “I see the truth of you,” the man said.
  25. Sounds like Ted suffers from a commonly known malady called stickupyourasssideways.... Dan laughed, “Christ, I hope so. Out of the office and more relaxed, without the poker up his arse, he’s as camp as a row of tents. But he’s not actually said anything.”
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