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The initial hard work has accomplished the first of their goals, now the hard work truly begins...

Thank you for this, 4 powerfully scripted chapters leaving everyone on tenterhooks...so glad to see this story continuing, lest we forget, another young man lays in the hospital... Can't wait to see the next!!!

The devil is in the details and I believe the cross examination of the uncle will pay dividends!!! Glad I was late to the party on this story so I could binge...Hoping Ch 5 is coming quickly as Ch 4 is next to the detriment of chores that need doing!!!

The uncle has some explaining to do it would seem...was Brendon offered a pass, so to speak, by lying for the prosecution?

Well...this has me hooked!!!

Shannon along with Will, combined with Charlie's second sight will prove to be a formidable force. These pooper poppers sound to be like a gang of Juvenile Delinquents....in need of some remedial, corrective action. Barring that if it doesn't work, there is an alternate 'world' where they could go to and co-mingle with some very interesting folks of the same ilk....

I suspect there is much more, and a kernel of truth in the following, and it will turn out to be a very important aspect to the quest Charlie and the gang are following... "The process actually reminds me of the Telzee Route that Max used to get other elves to Lollipop when we were fighting the Beltracians," Kippy offered. "Those elves had never been to Lollipop, but because Max was there he was able to point the way for the others to get to the ship from Earth. In our case, it's Charlie's second presence that gets there first, and shows us the way." "It's an interesting cheat," Ragal agreed. "You can follow Charlie's second presence, and then teleport to his location. But while you have never been there physically, your minds visit the place before you teleport, and so you have the sense of the location as a place. It's only technically teleporting to a place you have never been, because you haven't been there physically." "It's good enough for the record books," Max explained. "It's still never been done before." "I didn't mean to belittle the accomplishment," Ragal returned quickly. "I have never heard of this being done before, either. I was just trying to see it in the way it actually seems to function." "We're not worried about that," Charlie reassured. "You're right on the mark with the way it works. And, it actually surprises me that it hasn't been done before." Max smiled at him. "The second presence talent you have is pretty rare, Charlie."

532 impactful words tell a tale worthy of you attention!

Well done and a very original take on traditions...

Again, thank you for your effort in entertaining us!

They brought this upon themselves by aggressive, ill-considered behaviors...was it overkill? Perhaps but I consider it a form of chemotherapy... Thank you for this, and I look forward to the next in this series... For Henry!

Things seem to be a bit too quiet, calm, and peaceful...Sasha was a nice interlude, a convenient port on the storms in Marc's life... I get the feeling somethings gotta give...

With Zdain finally awake will Josel resume his petulant behavior, and just who is the Masked Thief???

Perhaps some castor oil will help Mom././.. Happy B'day!!!

Teddy needs to be caught, either by an adult or a deadly, infectious disease...

Could we call Roland's death Justice???? And well deserved...

more likely a FOOL.....

The plot thickens to some degree, will the replica scarab be passed off as the original scarab? The man looked visibly nervous, his eyes darting between Omar and the others. "Yes, I want to buy back the scarab that I sold them," he stammered, clearly uneasy. Omar leaned in closer, his voice dropping to a low, menacing tone. "There is no chance that will ever happen. Leave them alone, or matters may get messy," he warned. The man's face paled, and he quickly nodded, understanding the gravity of Omar's words. With that, Omar turned and walked back to his friends, satisfied that the situation had been handled.

Just back from a week in London, watching my NFL team choke the chicken, and visiting the Victoria and Albert, National Portrait Gallery, along with the Wallace and simply not enough time to any of them, justice...much to the dismay and chagrin of my closest friends, I am unrepentantly a museum whore... As a side note, in Marylebone there is a pub called the Cavendish...their IPA's were the cure for hours spent aimlessly enthralled at the wonders on display... and my disgust with my NFL team...nother round please and thanks... Now...I digress...what's going on with the scarab??? G&T's aren't the cure for every tropical disease...

Would the picture of Ralph’s parents by any chance on the poster for the movie/play, “No sex please, we’re British?”…

Well, that was nice surprise and well done

The definition of mixed emotions is seeing a bus full of lawyers going over a cliff and realizing one seat is empty...

Can’t wait to see the property…sounds like bit of Eden….

Wherever you go, that’s where you have been……