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Simply thunderstruck and fighting denial on this sad news. Comicality was one of the very first authors I found back so many years ago. And through him, discovering so many other story sites and resources for our community. He's left a big hole in our writing and story community and even larger shoes to fill, you will be missed and rest in peace... Thank you for showing myself and others that it does get better.

“The point of living is to live.”

Who would have thunk that beings from alternate galaxies, dimensions, parallel universes, and from parts hither and unknown would ever need one of the most basic sanitary conveniences...humm...unless they are used like Dr Who's telephone boxes??? Carefully opening the door, I found a well lit bathroom. There was a port-a-loo to the left and a plastic shower to the right. Well, even ritual murderers had bodily functions. Having a shower in the cold cellar was probably not pleasant. I wondered how they’d transported these things down here through the narrow staircase. As to the cliffhanger....hang in there @Al Norris

Peter, Paul, and Mary, Tom, Dick, and Harry or Bob, Ted, Carol, and Alice???

Could it be...Horton???

Bingo...Asking why!!!! “I didn’t forget.” M said angrily. “I’ve never eaten before. There’s a difference!” “What, were you tube fed your whole life?” Connor chuckled in an attempt to lighten the suddenly tense conversation. “Something like that,” M said quickly. “Look, I told you I was new to the world. It’s not amnesia. I didn’t forget anything. I just can’t tell you certain things.”

And abstinence make parts of some harder.... Just who is after M....

I as @weinerdog pointed out, am convinced M is somewhat playing the innocent game a bit too well...all through the first two chapters we see instances where he 'knows' some things but not other things...makes me go hummmmm

An interesting beginning...

Well...something has to happen, or it is time to start rooting for the bad guys...how much longer is this foolishness going to continue????

Why I am reminded of the following...

Where is Oscar's father in all of this hullabaloo...

It has been interesting to see how the relationship is growing between Phill and Collin and between Jason and Collin...While I never thought I would ever become the age I am, it is amazing to have a chance to look back at some of the defining cultural moments of my generation. I get the sense that despite Phill's moodiness that there is a chance that he just may be able to 'graduate' from this rehabilitation facility and into a small apartment, here's hoping that he does. Still, there are several remaining thoughts, what of his son and house, Nurse Sullivan's son? It is hard to believe that my past is now history, the only thing that remains unchanged are the adult children who populate the many layers of our government and those around the world.

All I got is...

Or does chicken taste like fried astro-serpent?? Where is the 8th location???

Peace, love and whatever passes for dope...far out dudes....

RIP Golvinte, and now the best revenge, take the battle to the A-Holes!!!

Simply brilliant word picture and commentary....

Once again, thanks for introducing paranormal sex into a murder mystery and for sharing this with us!!! Now if there were paranormal red herrings, we might have to head for the hills...oh wait...

Loved this chapter, it seems to be the proverbial calm before the storm(s)??

Well...ifin ya cain't get the prescription in time for the next chapter the following may help...and Karl with this success just might land more clients...

How in the world and the seven layers of HE double LL does Carl even make it back to school, let alone as a pitcher on the JV team??? Quite frankly he should be a starting "catcher' in the juvenile prison league!!! Can't wait till Uncle George grills Officer Stoner, would love to be a fly on the wall for that...it is time for Uncle George to set in place some legal representation for Pete!!! Actually, just how old is Carl, is he close to or over 18??? Speaking of which, how old is Mitch, is he a junior or senior??? The apparent age difference is concerning... Is it time for...

The following was just so true to life!!!! After we finished washing the dishes, Devin and I went in to watch the football game with our dads. It wasn’t that we were interested in the teams that were playing, but we wanted to see what our dads were up to, because we suspected there would be some interesting interactions between them as the games progressed. Our dads didn’t disappoint us either and the banter was hectic at times, but it was always fascinating to watch and listen to them. They were a better show for us than the game.

The following has me wondering why Oscar's mother is acting out in such a manner...there are unexplored issues here....I have to wonder if this is the reason that his grandparents are taking the steps to ensure that Oscar has a future similar to what his younger siblings will have...it makes me think that Oscar will not inherit a dime from his birth parents... “Selena, why are my younger grandchildren asking these questions, you can see that it is causing Oscar some stress, which he does not need to be going through at this stage,” Gran authoritatively asked my mother, “I am sorry that you feel that way Margaret, but my children do have a right to ask their sibling why he is hardly at home any more,” my mother responded. “That is enough you two, stop this arguing in front of the children,” Gramps snapped at both my Mother and Gran.

I think the writer has made the point with this portion of the story, any more of this is useless and not necessary...time for the story to move forward in my opinion...