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Chapter 30 - Through the Forest
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - Through the Forest
Understatement of the decade...and proof stupidity reigns supreme... This is getting worse by the moment... -
My kind of Cliffie...
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I'd like to see that bus driven by Kathy Bates from the movie Misery....
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Well with a phone booth or a porta potty available at any nearby galaxy rest stop, why waste the space???
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I can remember a TV series similar to this story called Kyle XY. To a point this story mirrors that show, at least in the beginning. One defining characteristic was that Kyle XY had no belly button....and it begs the question.... And talk about a craptastic day that was a total shitshow....
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The House at the End of the Road
drsawzall commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The House at the End of the Road
The following has me intrigued and worried, along with everything else that happened prior to overhearing the conversation... “I don’t think it’s funny...” Connor stopped. He looked down the hall, but couldn’t see M. That was his laugh though. It floated down the hallway and Connor tensed up. Who was he talking to? “Oh… Has this place ruined you already? How do you know so much about revenge?” the boy’s voice was soft but Connor could hear the amusement in it. He was definitely talking to someone. “Well don’t do it again. He says he’s missing memories… He was inside that house…” -
If you were going to go to the house, I would have taken Jack with me. So kissing brought on another seizure, dear lord and for gosh's sake...take it slow!!
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Can't disagree, I thought this chapter was brilliant and cleverly written, now...here's an idea...what if Carl gets hit by a bus...full of nuns???
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Chapter 29 - End Vision
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - End Vision
It may be time to reach out to Elethon and acquire the services of the Stealth Witch...it is well past time to put a hurtin on some of these bastards... -
Well, here's hoping they get to the girls in time, hopefully they have enough info to lay the groundwork for catching the perps!!
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Will the witch in the swamp keep to her promise???
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RIP - Comicality - May 1975 -- April 2024
drsawzall commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Simply thunderstruck and fighting denial on this sad news. Comicality was one of the very first authors I found back so many years ago. And through him, discovering so many other story sites and resources for our community. He's left a big hole in our writing and story community and even larger shoes to fill, you will be missed and rest in peace... Thank you for showing myself and others that it does get better.- 169 comments
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Chapter 28 - Alihte
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Alihte
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Who would have thunk that beings from alternate galaxies, dimensions, parallel universes, and from parts hither and unknown would ever need one of the most basic sanitary conveniences...humm...unless they are used like Dr Who's telephone boxes??? Carefully opening the door, I found a well lit bathroom. There was a port-a-loo to the left and a plastic shower to the right. Well, even ritual murderers had bodily functions. Having a shower in the cold cellar was probably not pleasant. I wondered how they’d transported these things down here through the narrow staircase. As to the cliffhanger....hang in there @Al Norris
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Peter, Paul, and Mary, Tom, Dick, and Harry or Bob, Ted, Carol, and Alice???
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Could it be...Horton???
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Bingo...Asking why!!!! “I didn’t forget.” M said angrily. “I’ve never eaten before. There’s a difference!” “What, were you tube fed your whole life?” Connor chuckled in an attempt to lighten the suddenly tense conversation. “Something like that,” M said quickly. “Look, I told you I was new to the world. It’s not amnesia. I didn’t forget anything. I just can’t tell you certain things.”
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And abstinence make parts of some harder.... Just who is after M....
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I as @weinerdog pointed out, am convinced M is somewhat playing the innocent game a bit too well...all through the first two chapters we see instances where he 'knows' some things but not other things...makes me go hummmmm
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An interesting beginning...
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Well...something has to happen, or it is time to start rooting for the bad guys...how much longer is this foolishness going to continue????
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Why I am reminded of the following...
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Where is Oscar's father in all of this hullabaloo...
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It has been interesting to see how the relationship is growing between Phill and Collin and between Jason and Collin...While I never thought I would ever become the age I am, it is amazing to have a chance to look back at some of the defining cultural moments of my generation. I get the sense that despite Phill's moodiness that there is a chance that he just may be able to 'graduate' from this rehabilitation facility and into a small apartment, here's hoping that he does. Still, there are several remaining thoughts, what of his son and house, Nurse Sullivan's son? It is hard to believe that my past is now history, the only thing that remains unchanged are the adult children who populate the many layers of our government and those around the world.
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