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Everything posted by drsawzall
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I thought I might know what was going on but...I did not think Mitch was going to be that type of ...dork!!! It was a side I never would have expected!!!
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John Henry 6,234 Posted 25 minutes ago 4 hours ago, drsawzall said: Nothing like having a plan and seeing it take off!!! Right! Lol Sometimes being a "stupid" jock pays off. What I should have said is there's nothing like having a plan and seeing the clothes come off!!!
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Now we know why she refused all offers to have her driven home...or is it another, gasp...red herring??? Ken needs to reach out to the DMV and ger a freaking photo of this girl sent to his phone or e mail account frigging pronto!!! Let's not forget the DNA test results....I just get the feeling some of Joe's old adversaries are behind all of this....
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They are on the adventure of a lifetime working on this station making memories that will last forever!!!
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As others noted the footprints were a concern, what about fingerprints that were left on the bad guy's phone and car??? Glad to see that had a nice relaxing fishing trip... As to transitioning to a German Shepard was a scary thought tho the following looks much scarier...oh and @RainbowPhoenixWI is that @weinerdog and the missing shoe????
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Nothing like having a plan and seeing it take off!!!
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Getting Used to The Routine
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Used to The Routine
Oh boy...Is something going to hit the proverbial fan??? It wasn't long before Manny needed to keep one of those guns locked in his bedroom. Next up - "Ending the Trial Period, and Ivan's Associates Appear"- 34 comments
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Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
Simply one of your best chapters yet...we see another side of Lyoth and Captain Suoki, one that renders your heart!!! -
Well, just who is the beggar and what powers does he have??? After their meal, they headed back to their apartment, catching a glimpse of the beggar again. As before, intense eyes watched them pass, but this time he was careful not to stare for too long. Regardless, Brohm wasn’t pleased at the attention, and stopped his horse to shoot him a murderous glare. The beggar withered against his gaze. “I see the truth of you,” the man said.
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Sounds like Ted suffers from a commonly known malady called stickupyourasssideways.... Dan laughed, “Christ, I hope so. Out of the office and more relaxed, without the poker up his arse, he’s as camp as a row of tents. But he’s not actually said anything.”
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Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
drsawzall commented on Alan2's story chapter in Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
it is early days yet as Liam is slowly being acclimated to his new surroundings, I remain curious to see if this so-called Covenant is a force for good or a cult... -
Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
With the following I rest my case your honor... "Fine, I'll probably have enough trouble learning to play tennis. What about school?" "It's summer. School starts back up in late August. You'll need to enroll me; I don't want to be home-schooled anymore. That worked with mom, but I'm guessing, I'm already smarter than you." Bass finally spoke up, "Rocky. Manners." "What? He's a bartender, not a rocket scientist." "It's okay, Bass. He'll find out how smart I am over time. I'm a bartender, Rocky, because I enjoy being around people and not having a difficult job, one without a lot of responsibility." "So, you're lazy?" Bass rolled his eyes -
I agree, there are some suspicious...ahem...red herrings here...I say trust in DNA testing... Then there is the remotest possibility...
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What more can be said other than this truly is a sweet, poignant tale of the misadventures two scamps can get into!!! Need I say more??
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Loved this and having read some of your other works elsewhere, I would be remis in not joining the chorus in asking to see more of you here!!!!
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As others have noted, Pete is a young talent, in many different areas, he's consciously respectful with his peers and adults, takes direction well, listens...learns...and applies. None of this is happening in a vacuum, Coach sees it and notices as he has the talent to make the team, later when injured he becomes an excellent assistant coach, so good that his replacement, just may be better than he is... Then there's the food aspect...forced into a difficult situation by the thing that spawned him, he becomes self-taught in the ways of the kitchen, and we see how that progresses in his meeting with the owner of the restaurant, and most notably passes the garlic test... I, like @JamesSavik, learned that lesson at a later age, what I took from learning that lesson is my garlic now comes in a plastic bottle that allows me to distribute just the right amount!!! Mitch...you were hoping to hang with Pete...WTF??? !!!
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Well...when Betty White puts you in your place, ya gotta know the sign for your exit says Shitsville....
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My thoughts exactly!!!
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The boys made sure they were ready to make the arduous trip to the new job, I am hoping in the recovery gear they bought was the inclusion of a "come-a-long" which is a hand operated winch, or a winch for the vehicle, it may come in handy!!! Sounds like they are off on an adventure that will create memories for a lifetime!!
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Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
Rocky is certainly full on himself...I suspect it is a defense mechanism... Bass, could he be called a 'largemouth Bass??? As to the family business, it ain't ever finished...at least till the fat lady sings...- 52 comments
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Calvin...Calvin...Calvin, it is abundantly clear that you ain't...not even in the same league, zip code, or tri-state area... Then there's dear ole departed Mom's thoughts...
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Thomas, if you can say and think the following, you can face work!! Thomas says what he thinks. He has nothing to lose. ‘I know you care about me Zack and I know there are reasons I probably don’t understand as to why you can’t be with me. But I just want you to know if you ever can go out with me, all you have to do is ask me.’
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Talk about starting off with a bang!!!
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I love watching the two of these guys growing their relationship!
