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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well, this is a great start, looking forward to how the boy's work out their differences, should be very entertaining to sat the least!!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable and thanks for sharing this with us!
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    Chapter 20

    Could/were Burke and Martina be working together??? And for something completely out of left field, what would a DNA test reveal about Micco and Burke???? Mind y'all, I'm sober as I ponder this...dang it all to heck!!!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 35

    This is setting up to be quite entertaining...Clearly the estimable Judge Arthur is past his prime...I sense he will create all sorts of havoc before he F'*ck's the proceedings up....
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    Chapter 7

    One feels a shiver when hearing the following words, and lord help the well intentioned.... I confirmed that I would start looking after William then. After all, how difficult would it be to look after a baby for a day? After Easter I would find out.
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    Chapter 20

    So much more to be revealed, what was it that had the wolves keeping Micco from moving forward???
  7. Well, you've just gone and added another item to be added to my bucket list @Robert Hugill, I've always wanted to see the Swedish Warship Vasa, link included below, and now I will have to combine with the Viking museum. I remember my first trip to a nude beach when I still in high school with friends, it was Cranberry Pond outside of Amherst Massachusetts. I was nearly undressed when the boy my own age, he was drop dead gorgeous, bent over in front of me, setting off a reaction. It took a moment or two thinking of my sister and grandmother before it felt safe enough to enter the water. Afterwards we got to know each other a bit better in a game of frisbee...and yes, there were shady trails and woods!!!. I like the way the two of them are learning to take interest in what the other finds interesting...it bodes well for their relationship, that and having that big fuck-off washer!!!! Something still tickles the back of my cranium concerning the family business, I strongly suspect some serious financial hanky-panky.... Joe must have done something right, both with the essay and working for Colin, after impressing his staff as well!!! Another great chapter... Swedish warship vasa photos - Search (bing.com)
  8. While not onto bondage or pain, bless those who do... Carey, just what have you gotten yourself into???
  9. drsawzall

    Invitations

    Hoo boy, something to look forward to...as an aside, thanks for taking the time to create this and share it we readers...it is appreciated!!!
  10. Dom continues to amaze me, so wise and yet a child for all his few years... It would appear there may be storm clouds gathering on the horizon... "Not a problem. I'll tell Dad to come over." A heavy sigh came through the speaker. "Yeah, about that." "What?" He lowered his voice. "I never mentioned it before because we seldom got together, but for whatever reason, Patty doesn't like Dad." "What do you mean—whatever reason? What possible reason could she have?" "Okay, I know the reason, but I’d rather not discuss it on the phone. I’d really appreciate it if he wasn't there when we arrived." I frowned. "No worries, but he'll want to see you at some point." "Oh, of course. I just—” Dave audibly swallowed. “Well, just don't tell him we're coming. Please?" I was getting more and more confused, "Yeah. Okay."
  11. drsawzall

    King Maker

    Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely....whither goest Simon??? “From slave to king-maker in just a few days,” Yidian adored, “Just imagine what we could achieve.” “I am,” Simon thought as a wicked smile crossed his face, “and I like it.”
  12. Will Connor find and meet up with Simon???
  13. Well, it went the full 12 rounds and a TKO by Elijah...While I am not sad to see the back of Tyson, we saw for a brief moment a glimmer of humanity, and then...ooops...it vanished... Well done, tho I see it is not marked complete, hopefully there's more??
  14. Including @drpaladin...
  15. Pride goeth before the fall...
  16. But wait...there's more... Deia looked at Maio and said, matter-of-factly, “He’s a god.” “I’m a what now?” I said. And then came the echoes. ‘Fall! Fall!’, they said. Like… like in my dreams. “Can you hear that?” I was frantically turning my head, trying to ascertain the direction the voices came from. “What?” Maio said. ‘NOW FALL!’ “Something’s very wrong. It’s the voices from my dreams,” I said.
  17. No matter the station in life, once the clothes come off...they're just empty suits...and naked predators preying on the vulnerable...Will our intrepid hero survive this hormonal swimming pool????
  18. My opinion about Russ is evolving as the following will attest to, Brian, Toby, and Gordon prove to humanize the man... Brian pulled on his jeans and dashed down, closely followed by Russ who apologised and said that it would be his driver. Russ had organised a surprise for dinner, but had lost track of time, something he never usually did. So much so, that the occurrence seemed to disturb the man, but Gordon simply joked that it showed how much he was enjoying chilling with them.
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 29

    I found the following so very interesting; it speaks as to what we have devolved to...criticized if we get up and walk in the morning and criticized if we get up and run in the morning...damned if you do, and damned if you don't.... Amber was left alone in the room, with the news blasting Aaron for not caring about his mother. She couldn’t see a remote anywhere, and there was no way to shut the tv out. She sighed, resigning herself to putting up with the obnoxious human on the screen. One point did make her smile, no matter how the tv attacked it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Humph....I'm not convinced or buying it just yet... “Lord Sarin was gracious enough to suggest a break for lunch,” Aaron smiled tightly. “I have to be back in an hour.” “Despite all appearances to the contrary, Lord Sarin is a good man,” Amber admitted. “He and I rarely saw eye-to-eye, but his views were nonetheless rooted in Astara’s best interests.” She echoed Aaron’s tight smile. “With the exception of the pay increases he likes to give himself.”
  20. Sarah needs to curb her enthusiasm and temper her outlook, understanding that the world and will not bend to her individual will. Not at the young padawan's age that is...World domination takes time along with careful consideration and planning...
  21. Loved this chapter, sadly we are taught, thank you, you F'ing Puritans, that nudity is abhorrent and we should never appreciate , or see our bodies as we should...I loved the tenor of this chapter and the pacing, I hope this relationship works for both Dylan and Dom's sake... Hoo boy, it is about to get interesting to say the least for a certain @weinerdog...just saying...how can you not luv a mug like this????
  22. drsawzall

    Oslo bound

    This is a good trip for both of them, ironing out the bumps one can expect when traveling together. Many important lessons learned, and issues easily smoothly resolved....I think of this as a warm-up to the vacation the two will take to Italy...while it could be phrased a bit differently, it is gratifying to see Colin 'growing' into his body and accepting the same!!
  23. drsawzall

    Round Six

    Now will have to read Heart and an epilogue would be a treat... I can't help but admire your skill with dialogue as @Gary L pointed out and your rejoinder. I for the life of me suffer from the gift of gab but struggle with writing dialogue, I love writing vivid descriptions and scene settings, it comes so very easy to me, perhaps a mind meld al la Star Trek?
  24. Yea...what he said!!!!!!
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