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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    And we're off on another magical mystery, who dunnit, tour full, I'm sure, of red herrings... And away we go!!!
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    Chapter 9

    The path towards forgiveness and redemption begins with accepting and forgiving oneself... An excellent chapter with much to think on!! I agree with the following, very well said... Trust your paperwork is in order, and verify that it is so... He stared worriedly at me and asked, “Does you son have access to your accounts?” “Do I look stupid?” I laughed. “That’s another reason my son hates me so much. I wrote him out of my will years ago. I’ll be damned if I leave him a penny when I die.” “Excellent,” smiled Colin. “I’ll check about getting you a new cellphone. That is if you want one.”
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    Twenty-Three

    Another fantastic chapter, loved the idioms and the vernacular. Even better is the growing bond between Thomas and Keith and it is a pleasure to watch Keith slowly come out of his shell as it were... One of my employers at the end of each contract for renovations to the facilities, would sit in his office at the end of each completed project with the contractor and myself and would go, "Let's sharpen our pencils, shall we"? as he tried to nickel and dime 'savings' off the overall costs. I heard him described by many something very similar to the following...a phrase sometimes used was something about pinching pennies with the muscles in his posterior.... “Fat chance of that. Guy that owns it skimped on the work something rotten, tight as a pig’s arse.”
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    Emu

    Whatever do you mean???
  5. What will become of Simon as is returned to the land he came from, and what will become of those who used/harmed him???
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    Chapter Six

    I had thought Cormac was the beggar as well, Tarn was a broken man and was on a path to self-destruction, the question now is, what becomes of Cormac???
  7. They should contact the folks who gave them the list of ingredients and find out if they have enough blood... While the party goes on, and I am not opposed, the I.C.U.A. still needs to be dealt with is the most slow, painful way possible...
  8. Don't think the pirates won't make another attempt to retake the place.... Something needs doing about the ships that got away with at least 10 Godstrolls....
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    Chapter 1

    Pulling a @weinerdog and making a guess, the stalker is Grayson...let's see how bad my prediction is!! Intriguing start!!
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    Emu

    Suggested poster for Jarred's room...
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    Out and about

    A very interesting chapter to say the least. I also have to wonder about Heyward finances, there's a lot of smoke but very little fire. It would seem that folks are making conjectures with very little to go on... Obviously, there remains much to discern between the lines... In my job, when I was hiring or asked to review resumes of prospective employees, and the same applied to potential vendors, we were always on the lookout for those who seemed just that little bit too good!! When we came across one of these intriguing resumes, or proposal for services, we would note in a cover e mail or phone call that the respondent suffered from occuflation...
  12. If I counted correctly, from the 19 that the The Bocian Contingent had 19 Godstrolls, 8 are now a messy fertilizer...of the 3 starships that were in orbit, one is presumed to be destroyed, burning in the ocean... What of the other 2 remaining and the cargo freighter? Are the other 10 Godstrolls in orbit? As noted above, who is paying for all of this, the pirates or the massive A-Holes who are responsible for the deaths of billions and so many worlds??? Would it be possible to collect enough blood from those killed to make up what they need? What is going to happen with the one in hiding, trapped and then drained?? Lastly, what happened to the planetary defenses...sabotage??? So many things to think about, not ignoring the following which has me curious......
  13. Oh Manny...your world just began to get rocked... And Rocky, discretion is the better part of valor...don't assume others will appreciate wiseass responses or that they are helpless to defend one's self...
  14. I'm loving the story but at this point it needs to move forward...
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    Chapter 11

    Mitch saying in response to Pete's question, "I have my reasons" rings hollow considering his other actions. Notice Pete did not bring up what he knew and that speaks volumes... Looking forward to seeing just will happen at the dinner!!!
  16. Somebody better send a warning ASAP...and how many are coming???
  17. Do they actually need all the blood???
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    Chapter 6

    Let's see, 2 weeks in South Beach, all sorts of young men in grape smugglers lathered in coconut oil... Right...nuthin is gonna happen....
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    Staff Troubles

    Jarred spotted a tsunami??? They did get snorkeling gear!!! Seriously I bet he spotted something interesting...
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    Conception

    It comes to me the only one that can face down the MIB is M...Remember he 'killed' one back in the trailer...Nice to see Mother proves aliens aren't the only ones with a messed up bureaucracy...
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    Chapter 16 S2

    See...right there that is the freaking issue!!!! No one wants to deal with her and it is sad...Gramps and Pops need to grow a spine and calmly let her know enough is enough...to mind her own business, if not...sell and find a new place....simply put, by not dealing with the issue, it will never go away or get any better...
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    Conception

    Well, one thing is clear,...Connor shouldn't be driving while the tracker is still in his head.... Mother it would seem, is no match for MIB, neither is M... Photos are a great idea, put Greg out on the street... Other than that, this miserable group of humans and part aliens all deserve each other, perhaps a visit to charm school is in order....tea and cucumber sandwiches anyone???
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    Tension

    Well...it's gotta happen, M is preggers....
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    Beach Party

    They could all use a big ass case of "Grow The Fuck Up"!!!
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    M's Secret

    I got one, actually a couple so I raise you one...including @James Baxter Lee Wilson 13,329 Posted Sunday at 12:29 PM Popular Comment On 5/12/2024 at 12:12 PM, Cane23 said: Or maybe cock-eyed. Oh, wait. That’s too descriptive. That’s my kind of deli.
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