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    Chapter 3 S2

    Louella Parsons - Wikipedia
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    Chapter 3 S2

    Always had a crush on young JJT...the nosy next-door neighbor may be a city clerk but as one her powers are limited; however, it is he contacts within the city administration could prove to be problematic. it is a shame they can't figure out a way to raise the height of the wall or if needed, plant a few larger spruce trees... functions of a city clerk - Search (bing.com)
  3. Well it looks like the benefits are better than working at the lighthouse...the question is, can Bell be the person Toby needs? Then there's Carey, and how does/will Micah fit in to this assemblage??? Better yet, where does Toby go to college, if he goes???
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    Chapter 6

    The following says so much... I think I got flushed, hot in the face again. And, before I knew it we were back home. My parents were anxiously waiting so Charlie did a hello and goodbye l, leaving me to tell them everything I did at school. Dad was joyful asking me about Myra, and mom kept asking about the teachers and how helpful they may have been. All I could hope for, at that point, was things to mellow out, and be just like everyone else in the world going to school.
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    Chapter 5

    Why do I get the feeling there's another shoe to drop??? Will Toby come to the realization that he loves Charlie in the same way?
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    Chapter 4

    Mucho caliente...ay caramba amigos..
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    Chapter 3

    There can be no doubt that Charlie is moving over to the gay side of life, will it last one wonders. Toby it would seem is a not too reluctant passenger on the voyage of discovery...
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    Chapter 2

    Could not say it any better than this!!
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    Chapter 1

    I'm new to this story after finding it a bit late, I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for taking some of your precious time to gift us with your work, it is appreciated...Thank you!!!
  10. Well, there's a roller coaster of jumbled emotions...I thought the chapter worked well!
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    Two

    There's an old cartoon strip called Pogo that had a panel that sums up Keith's predicament. While the setting has nothing to do with the world Keith lives in, the sentiment expressed could/should apply to Keith. Pogo is looking out over a littered landscape expresses a cogent, pithy thought...
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    Farewell to Edward

    I was referring to the boy king, is he still not with us?
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    Farewell to Edward

    Did he not sneak out and was on his way to sanctuary?
  14. What needs to be done is to give these foreign interlopers a case of Fuckitall in handy 16-ounce beverage containers...
  15. Where might this be located?
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    Family Matters

    Keep in mind an axiom of one illustrious Benjamin Franklin..." Fish and visitors smell after three days"!!!
  17. Oh my, oh my, oh my....just where could this possibly go????
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    Chapter 3

    Jimmy hasn't learned much if not anything...It's gonna come back to bite him in the a$$!!!
  19. Looks like a need for some Bounty paper towels and Windex...
  20. Well, that was/is a kick in the pants, what is needed is some source of information of the military capabilities of the forces aligned across the channel...
  21. From Sun Tzu's Art of War... • He will win who knows when to fight and when not to fight. • He will win who knows how to handle both superior and inferior forces. • He will win whose army is animated by the same spirit throughout all its ranks. • He will win who, prepared himself, waits to take the enemy unprepared. • He will win who has military capacity and is not interfered with by the sovereign.”
  22. When one door opens, another closes, or vice versa...So the time of the boy king is coming to an end, what havoc awaits??
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    Chapter 36

    Some interesting observations and reveals in this chapter, makes one want to know more...loved the following... “And the queen of melodramatics,” Kenny said. “Serious, Babe, could you at least take the volume down. I'm sure the characters in the other stories can hear you.”
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    Chapter 21

    So many questions had answers revealed, all of the comments above are spot on!! Having said that, is Long Ears a changeling or was Micco able to, for the lack of better words, cure it? That it was immune to bullets is the stuff of nightmares!!! Martina got what was coming to her, sadly she acted on emotion and frustration, not a good combination when plotting to murder and absconding with a fortune... We still have the worst part of the hurricane to get through, thankfully the rest of the wolves are ok, I worry about the panthers, or did I miss something?? While it is fantastic that Micco was able to rise above and conquer his fears and rise above a life-threatening situation, what is left are questions regarding the loss of his family in the fire, who, how, what, and why??? One of your best chapters yet and there's still the ubiquitous red herrings...
  25. Gonna show my age here a bit, the stash of brown paper parcel-era gay porn @Leslie Lofton brings back memories of growing up gay in the 70's and 80's just after the dinosaurs extinction...for someone of my ilk and age at the time, it was how many of us were exposed to the wider worlds of gay sex and the mechanics involved. I can remember many a afternoon perusing the 'selection' of magazines from straight to gay, some of the cutest boys were sadly straight...but to see their bits in stop action photos...double wow...then when I got brave enough to enter the dank, sticky floor, thread bare seats, bleach smelling theater, well some things are best left to imagination...along with the requisite 'gentleman in the London Fog rain coat... Like others, I also hope to see more of Toby and Ha-Joon and I also thought Harper would make an appearance...fingers crossed she does...or reconnects with Carey...a photo shoot with the two of them would be hoot...talk about cementing one's reputation... Actually, I think the sequence of the chapters works well as they are!!
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