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  1. drsawzall

    One

    A great start to what will be a very interesting story! The following rang so true to me…. The guys were not explicitly homophobic, just woefully unaware of what else was going on around them and profoundly myopic in their world view. It tended to be casual cruelty rather than deliberate aggression.
  2. drsawzall

    Sparks Igniting

    Could someone from off-world be after our sly little fox??? A long distance marriage could be fun, just think of the joys of welcome home sex... “Mateio, why did you ask me to check the food?” the elf asked suddenly. “I thought I smelled arithal in it. That’s a poison from Egara, though I have no idea what it would be doing here.” “You’re certain you didn’t bring any with you?” “Of course not! I don’t trade in poisons. Besides, no one can get into the ship without me.”
  3. Talk about an auspicious beginning to this tale, change is never easy and unplanned events can be quite disconcerting to say the least!
  4. drsawzall

    Epilogue

    Thank you for the time and effort to share this tale with us. I am remis in not reading the previous segments and will do so! I hope good fortune allows us to follow King Aaron, Itumak, and Captain Darren in future adventures. This was well done, brilliantly conceived, and a joy to read!!! Thank you!!!!
  5. drsawzall

    The Summons

    You miss so much by not starting at the beginning....well worth the time!!!
  6. drsawzall

    Family Matters

    I can get it on Amazon, it comes in a can like sliced peaches in a sugar sauce, it is good for baking in upside-down cakes and whatnot!!!
  7. drsawzall

    Calvert Escapes

    Well, if you wanted to impress your sovereign, I can't think of a better way to do so and lay those nasty rumors to rest!!! A fortuitous sequence of events...now...how in the heck did Calvert pull this one off??? It is going to take every bit of Dr Jackson's skill to pull this one off...all sorts of debris gets caught with the bullet as it goes through cloth and decorations... Loved this chapter!!!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 2 S2

    The following may help to explain in better detail what a "Karen" or "Ken" is...a sad commentary of where we are as a society today!! How 'Karen' Became The Name For Rude, Middle-Aged White Women (lifehacker.com.au)
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 2 S2

    I have to wonder if the 'Karen' next door has a husband named 'Ken"...or is he a henpecked minion...It would be wise to keep tabs on her and the property line, video cameras would go a long way to diffusing any issues or trespassing concerns...
  10. drsawzall

    Family Matters

    I think Joe is going to turn out just fine!!!
  11. drsawzall

    Family Matters

    Hey now...I happen to like rhubarb straight from the garden, made into sauce and used as a pie filler with some strawberries...oh...wait...as a name....no.... I have some friends who have sons of a certain, tender age where Pillock or Dolt would be more than appropriate...I can remember a couple of the other species where Badger would have sufficed and been appropriate as well...
  12. drsawzall

    Ensnared

    At their age and the hormonal swimming pool they are bathing in, like I was once, a stiff breeze was more than enough to make me fall in love with the closest living and inanimate objects that piqued my fancy... One has to hope sensibility factors in after a short, hopefully so, cooling off period... Is it wrong of me to hope Mr Clancy gets hit by a bus/freight train???
  13. drsawzall

    Ensnared

    They say nothing lasts forever, is it wrong of me to wish Mr Craig a fatal coronary??? Craig, I hope you find your testimonials, here's a hint...if you've warmed up, they should be dangling between your legs...
  14. Well...I had to go with wow...talk about a dichotomy, Carey had the pressures of financing college erased and a tidy sum for when he turns 21, as well as finding out he may share certain proclivities with his grandfather. While I don't necessarily believe in coincidences, the invitation from the naughty/kinky professor, to the photo shoot and the discovery of the porno's in his grandfather's safe, makes a person wonder... Oh Bell...whatever is happening to you and will your future have anything to do with the other naughty/kinky professor???
  15. Humility must be her middle name and a town called Humble must have been the place she was birthed... If you look up the definition of a "See Ya Next Tuesday girl, her face appears next to the definition I'm willing to bet.... One has to wonder just what it will take to see her realize the world don't revolve around her... And as an aside to Dave...those dangling orbs between your legs, they are still there...right??? I think some testicular fortitude, just a wee bit mind you, is called for... Is the witch related in any manner or fashion to Lacey's sister...go to the same schools...members of the same coven???
  16. drsawzall

    Chapter 34

    Somehow, someway I suspect the portfolio will be growing by four and obtained at bargain basement pricing.... Thank you for this chapter!! Sure, it will take time to fully recover, although to be fair, some might not. That is the reality of the times we live in" Andrew rested his head on Ryan's chest. "That's the part that really bothers me. What will be left when it is all over? I know, without a doubt, that Devlin-Major will be fine, albeit just a little bit poorer. But I also know that there are at least four lodges in the portfolio that will not be around when things open up again. And while I know it has nothing to do with anything we have done, I still feel guilty for allowing it to happen. Can you understand that?" "Andrew", Claude replied, "You surely cannot believe that. I suspect I know of the lodges you refer to. And you did everything you could for them. You bent over backwards for them. But they refused to accept the Devlin-Major way of doing things and now it will come back to bite them"
  17. I can't say it any better than the comments above, and a heartfelt thanks for taking the time to share your creative work with us!! Eagerly awaiting the next instalment(s) of this story!!! Thank you!!!
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well, this is a great start, looking forward to how the boy's work out their differences, should be very entertaining to sat the least!!
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable and thanks for sharing this with us!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    Could/were Burke and Martina be working together??? And for something completely out of left field, what would a DNA test reveal about Micco and Burke???? Mind y'all, I'm sober as I ponder this...dang it all to heck!!!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 35

    This is setting up to be quite entertaining...Clearly the estimable Judge Arthur is past his prime...I sense he will create all sorts of havoc before he F'*ck's the proceedings up....
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 7

    One feels a shiver when hearing the following words, and lord help the well intentioned.... I confirmed that I would start looking after William then. After all, how difficult would it be to look after a baby for a day? After Easter I would find out.
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 20

    So much more to be revealed, what was it that had the wolves keeping Micco from moving forward???
  24. Well, you've just gone and added another item to be added to my bucket list @Robert Hugill, I've always wanted to see the Swedish Warship Vasa, link included below, and now I will have to combine with the Viking museum. I remember my first trip to a nude beach when I still in high school with friends, it was Cranberry Pond outside of Amherst Massachusetts. I was nearly undressed when the boy my own age, he was drop dead gorgeous, bent over in front of me, setting off a reaction. It took a moment or two thinking of my sister and grandmother before it felt safe enough to enter the water. Afterwards we got to know each other a bit better in a game of frisbee...and yes, there were shady trails and woods!!!. I like the way the two of them are learning to take interest in what the other finds interesting...it bodes well for their relationship, that and having that big fuck-off washer!!!! Something still tickles the back of my cranium concerning the family business, I strongly suspect some serious financial hanky-panky.... Joe must have done something right, both with the essay and working for Colin, after impressing his staff as well!!! Another great chapter... Swedish warship vasa photos - Search (bing.com)
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