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Killian needs to better understand how to use and work with his ability... Good on Chris...complete honesty is not only necessary, but needed!! Who was the mysterious tenant that vacated the apartment below Paul's? Could he be a red herring of ill intentions?
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Friends, family & future plans
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Friends, family & future plans
Another fantastic chapter, I had to look up Carl Giles and Vera, and was stunned with what I found, again my thanks for opening my eyes, his work, while different, reminded me of Walt Kelley's Pogo... Carl Giles: Britain’s Greatest social cartoonist -
The sooner Mason reconciles himself to the world around him, the better off he will be!
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Captain America - Alex & Max
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Captain America - Alex & Max
An interesting peek into a painful background. I would try to rehome the books!! -
A great story for the season!!
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Chapter 13: How the Second Adventure Began
drsawzall commented on PrismaFox's story chapter in Chapter 13: How the Second Adventure Began
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A reading lesson for Joel... Invictus By William Ernest Henley Out of the night that covers me, Black as the pit from pole to pole, I thank whatever gods may be For my unconquerable soul. In the fell clutch of circumstance I have not winced nor cried aloud. Under the bludgeonings of chance My head is bloody, but unbowed. Beyond this place of wrath and tears Looms but the Horror of the shade, And yet the menace of the years Finds and shall find me unafraid. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll, I am the master of my fate, I am the captain of my soul.
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I thought this chapter was forced....and it did not work for me...
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Thank you ever so much for your wonderful comment. It is greatly appreciated!!!
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your comment and the constructive criticism...I may have just found a beta reader!!! Again THANKS!!!
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The house I bought is just outside the center of town, where they have a Trunk or Treat on the town common. After the kids raid all the goodies on the common, they wander up my street. Last year I had over 300 little and some big gremlins coming up my driveway. The house at the beginning of my street had over 600 costumed devils.... I start buying candy in September...
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Thanks, you just brought a smile to my face!!!
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Same old, same old…at some point the ice dam breaks?Or not?
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Sorry, I am still team Dailin! Marvin comes with a lot of baggage…
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Chapter 3: Willz, 8:45pm
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 3: Willz, 8:45pm
Hope springs eternal... I smirked at him. He smirked back at me. He took a step forward. Maybe I wouldn't have to use these toys all by my lonesome, wanton self tonight! -
Thanks Gary, I truly appreciate your comment and thank you for reading!
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Thanks Andy, I truly appreciate your comment and thank you for reading!!
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Thanks Bill, I truly appreciate your comment and thank you very much for reading!!
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Thank you, it is appreciated!!!
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In more ways than one, thanks for reading and commenting!!
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Baking day – 23 December
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Baking day – 23 December
From your keyboard to the powers that be... -
Impatience is a bad habit and hard to break, Andy. Would you sacrifice a lifetime with Joey over a few innings?
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A rousing success, what will inspire them moving forward?
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Well...it's your own darned fault....just sayin!!
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And we have our first red herring....
