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In with the corporate land sharks, let’s see how well Will swims!
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Thank you for your wonderful comment. Despite the advantages of today's world, I miss the simplicity of my small-town life!!!
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For a first attempt at writing a book, well done as you can infer by my comments….
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Well…at least Scott will pay a price!
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I think you hit the right notes, a bit rough in a spot or two, but on the whole, well done…Brody still pisses me off tho…
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Words to live by, and I really like rhubarb… Brody followed him inside, "Hell no," he said eagerly, "one rule, don't rub another mans rhubarb."
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Could not agree more…
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My former employer called me on the morning of my father’s funeral, not to console but to ask me to save the sports pages from the Boston Globe as he was going to be out of the office for a few days…And to remind me of things he expected done…. Ya think of all sorts of things to say at the moment, however, I calmly explained the sports pages were available online and hung up. Scott is like one of those bad rashes that just won’t go away….
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Sort of sums up this chapter…. As long as he could deny the existence of death it couldn't claim him. But God's plan was a simple one: in the end he killed everything.
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I don’t disagree…
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Poor Killian, nothing is easy...isn't it....
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There's more than meets the eye here; our prisoner is more than the sum of his parts...there's a prophecy afoot...
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Takes time to break in a young stallion, it will be interesting to watch and learn more about each other's backgrounds.
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Chapter 6: Hot Deep Water (Jonas)
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 6: Hot Deep Water (Jonas)
Amen brother... "There's nothing wrong with you," I said firmly, hand cupping his bearded cheek. "Nothing. You've just been waiting for the right spark. And this? Us? It's real. It's good. Doesn't mean you were broken before. It means you were searching. And now you've found something." -
I'm liking Eileen more and more, and her take-no-prisoners manner...she's a breath of fresh air! Like others, I can't wait to find out more about Graham the dodgy one!!!
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Chapter 4: Closer Than Comfortable
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 4: Closer Than Comfortable
Still waters run deep and the intensity of buried feelings will be hard to ignore…. -
With the exception of Demi, these Orinovians are insane….the fact that nobody wants to deal with them is telling….
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As long as the mystery holds Arlo should be somewhat safe… My church would never work with a dullahan,” Sera denied vehemently. “We tried to return you to your rest. It worked. Pharasma saw fit to allow you to return. So now we watch, and wonder what your secret is. You were stolen from the River of Souls, you vanished from Magnimar, and now, several months later, you exist within a new body. It’s like a druid cast [Reincarnation] on you. What is it? What is your secret?” “I tried to tell someone once. They died in front of me. I suggest you drop this line of questioning, because I will not repeat that experience.”
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Looking forward to a continuation as this begs for more!
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Oh wee that was hawt!
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Summer and Small Beginnings
drsawzall commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Summer and Small Beginnings
I’m loving this story and the intensity of their burgeoning friendship…I may be wrong but, I sense a possible slight, thawing of Kitt’s father… Kitt hesitated—but only for a second. His father had watched his race quietly, told him Good job with a rare gentle smile, and when Kitt asked if he could stay at Matt’s, he simply nodded. “Be respectful,” his father said. “Call if you need anything.” -
Our heroes have found shelter from the storm, while our traitorous knight walks a precipitous path in his carnal desires.
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And now for something completely different …
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Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 5: Stormy Weather (Jeff)
Too late…🤔 We broke apart panting, foreheads pressed together. "Sauna first," he murmured. "Get you all hot and sweaty." -
Chapter 3: The Weight of Small Talk
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Weight of Small Talk
Feelings…nothing more than growing feelings…
