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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    So what is the priest up to???
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    Chapter 12

    The person with the gun was already in the apartment... This makes me believe that Razzle Dazzle called someone to intercept Killian while he was traveling to the apartment,... @Summerabbacat raises a good point, is the picture Jake has the item that Paul's apartment was ripped apart for? Is the person with the gun connected to the escort agency?? Here's hoping Killian goes by the book....
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    Chapter 37

    As @Summerabbacat noted, Nick needs intensive therapy and a mother who "sees" her son and the time he needs from her... What a remarkable transition from the very beginnings of this story...it is almost as if Nick has become Jack, and Jack, Nick... “What if we start to annoy the crap out of each other?” I asked. “Or get bored?” Jack chuckled. “Then we annoy each other. But we work through it. That’s what couples do, or so I’m told. Besides, we already live together every day here. I think we’ll survive.” “But we’re, like… just teenagers,” I pointed out. “Teenagers who’ve been through hell and back,” he countered. “That earns us at least partial adulthood. And hey – if we fight, there’s always make-up sex.” My face went nuclear. “You are becoming a sex fiend.” He grinned, totally unashamed. “You always bring out the best in me, Nicky.”
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    Chapter 6

    Humm, secrets abound and are revealed...iI like Marvin but lean more towards Dailan...
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    Chapter 13

    Depends on the mood....
  6. Found the following so telling and very humerous... Arvid was not coming with them, but he had managed to persuade his parents to drive up on Saturday. Evidently, they were combining the visit with something more worthy. Freddie had rather rolled his eyes when conveying this, it seemed that Arvid was not looking forward to it but was knuckling under on the understanding they would spend Saturday afternoon in Southwold and have fish and chips. So, that was my place in the world, I came equal to fish and chips.
  7. What a sweet and romantic story of love!! Well done!
  8. drsawzall

    Prologue

    Jeepers...am I ever gonna catch up??? Don't forget the signed copy of your soon-to-be-published first edition...
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Oh well...potato vs poh tay to
  10. UGGGG.....
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    Chapter 13

    Two down, will Greg be next? Should be interesting, will Declan want a repeat and Mack as well fairly soon?
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    Chapter 9

    And what game is the lady playing as well as Vance? Where did the heart go??
  13. At the end of all this, what will all those videos show???
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    Chapter 38

    A delightful chapter and happy birthday!!
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    Prologue

    Here's hoping your publishing deal comes thru, I'll be buying the book...signed copy, however.... I'm a bit behind as to the denziens of this tale, as I am still reading thru your cannon as time allows. So, with that in mind, where does El Coyote/Enrico Alvarez appear in your series of books? I think I need to catch up on earlier stories before continuing on with this one... Thanks, and BTW...I'm hooked!!!
  16. I have to suspect that the times of that era have something to do with the hesitancy... The world was just so backward and different then...I was 14 going on 15 then, and I clearly remember those days....
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    Chapter 2

    I've worked for a person such as Banjo's boss, as my department was responsible for building operations; he never liked my not being totally at his whimsical beck and call. He actually had the nerve to call me the morning of my father's funeral to ask me to save him the sports pages of our newspaper, and mind you, he could have easily gone online to read them while on his vacation... This was a great chapter. Any chance of sneaking on board the F5, the 60 ft Foiling Catamaran?
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    Chapter 5

    I'm not sure Marvin is crushing on Creek; I think it may be more about finding a friend. Now, for Dailan, it's 100% crushing...
  19. It takes all kinds to make the world go around, and to each...their own, it's just so simple. To me, Sam is a tad overbearing, and spanking the monkey as he was doing in the gym shower is/was the height of reprehensible behavior. As granddad always said, "There's a time and place for everything"...
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    Chapter 11

    Strangely, Micah did not provide a photo of Paul, considering every phone has a camera...as to who the younger man in that photo is, is worrisome; if it is Paul, Jake is in deeper trouble than he suspects. Was Paul killed because of an assignation with an extremely powerful man, albeit a politician, a high-level businessman man, and saw or found out something that would ruin such an individual? That his killing was not random?
  21. We are so lucky that so many talented authors share their works with us!
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    The Letters

    They are married to the butler....
  23. Careful, it could be a trap...
  24. Will all these, split personalities interact as in a group?
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    Chapter 8

    Things that make you go hummm
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