Cailen
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I would, but only if everyone was alright with the circumstances, some couples part well and there are no hard feelings, others not so much... i wouldn't want to create tensions so i would only if it were okay.
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They keep getting stranger and more perverted... The once was a queer who liked art He made signatures all al a carte They thought they all ruled not because they were cool but because they all came from the heart
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I think your signature is sexy Maria, but honestly i have always been attracted to peoples minds, stimulating emotional well thought conversation is something that i find appealing over looks, behavior and material things.
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There once was a boy called Mark Poor lad couldn't sleep in the dark So he stayed up all night, and slept in the light And now he's a loon and a lark
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There are so many things that i could say to this chapter, there are so many emotions that come to the surface and that i just can't express fully, so i am going to revert to my standard review macro. Cailen Poem Rating OVERALL: 10/10 Content: 10/10 Powerful and emotional Flow: 10/10 rhythmic and dynamic Poignancy: 9/10 honest and strong Grammar: 10/10 well reviewed Frosty, good job. You are Loved Mark, you are loved. Cailen
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Get married in mass, there are a slew of places you can do it like Coggshall Park where I got married... pretty isn't it. besides that... I'd get to go and lets face it, it's not everyday I'd be able to go to a celebrity wedding! keep me posted if you need Massachusetts advice.
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HAPPY BIRFDAY!
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they allow fighting because it is better than the alternative, bashing each other with sticks.
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watched it, loved it
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Anti-Gay Group says it's losing the war against Gay-Marriage
Cailen replied to Andrew Q Gordon's topic in The Lounge
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Happy Birfday boy lover
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Freedom of speech, freedom of stupidity...
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Would You Allow Your Son To Play With A Barbie Doll?
Cailen replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
Sure I would, at the age where kids are playing with dolls they don't attribute things sexually anyhow so it really doesn't make a difference. -
I find like with all things the old idiom "when in doubt, don't" really applies. I've given some author's a 4,000 word breakdown and others I've simply said good job. A find that the reviews are good to let the author and readers know who the chapter is being received. If you find errors or feel like there are major issues wrong then it is best to pm the author and give a private review that way. In my case i know my story isn't edited, sending me reviews saying i need an editor are not helpful. stay alert and as always if in doubt, don't. Cailen
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Floating in blackness, pinpricks of light floating around me Dancing, as I float alone in the void, I reach out They pass through me, and I feel empty There once was a dream here, there once was love But the dream has left me empty, and I am grasping at the light I don’t know what happened, it was there But suddenly it was gone I look out into the void and try and see your face, but I can not I long to hear your voice, but I am broken with unbearable silence I shout yo
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Even in our darkest hour, it is important to remember we are never alone.
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I for one hope it's true
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Falling into the dark oblivion, night blacker than poets dread Pinpricks travel down my skin, knife glowing against the red The rain falling from the sky, stinging against my tears Washing away the pain struck down, of a thousand years The flowing blackness rushes past and travels down my skin I wonder if the same thoughts traveled, with my fellow kin I look deep into the blackness past, and my soul release a cry In all my pain and suffered life, at last I’m free to die
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Since everyone who has posted wishing you a happy birthday so far has had a signature done by me, i figured i would say happy birthday as well, and add another.
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Your fantasy lover is extremely lucky, your mind must be extremely sensual to come up with such a vivid poem. I imagine you must be making someone extremely happy. Cheers on another great work. Cailen
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Love it, super fantastic awesome! (just like you)
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In a land in a dream, perhaps a memory I sit beneath the shade of the bluebell tree I cast my glance beyond the sea of green The grazing cattle can be heard, not seen I lay back lazily against the wood And my smile widened I dared it could A man approached his dog in stride He waved to me and my heart sighed He asked ‘what I was doing out all alone’ I said ‘to be here on my own’ He smiled asked if I ‘wanted company’ I told him to stay awhile with me
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Cailen Poem Rating OVERALL: 9/10 Setting: 10/10 We know exactly where you are Content: 9/10 Well developed and strong Flow: 9/10 Only a few hiccups in continuity Poignancy: 9/10 Extremely moving Grammar: 8/10 Needs so work A lover is someone who would suffer any reality, only to turn around and offer anything for love. Like so many things about you, you amaze me, wonderful work. Cailen
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I'm glad we resolved the issue, looks really good and thanks for the props. luvs Cailen
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I like the first one... oh snap...
