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  1. CassieQ

    Chapter 9

    Tibial's world isn't a friendly one, that is for sure. If a young viable human isn't willing to help produce children, then society has no use for them anymore. It's a horrible way to think and live.
  2. CassieQ

    Courante

    Tristan found a new friend. Here's hoping that sparks fly!
  3. CassieQ

    Sarabande

    I liked the little details you had in this chapter, with the early morning routine. It gave it a very warm feeling that was a pleasure to read.
  4. CassieQ

    Prelude

    Intriguing start, looking forward to learning some more about these people
  5. That so sounds like something I would do! We are too much alike girl
  6. CassieQ

    Chapter 8

    One of my favorite things about Tibial is his determination. He never backs down. Thanks for reviewing
  7. HAPPY BIRTHDAY RENEE!!!!!
  8. CassieQ

    Chapter 1

    Thank you. It was fluffy. But I'm glad you like the story and the characters. I'm glad I left it off where I did too, writing the deaths of these characters would have been too hard.
  9. Happy Birthday!!!
  10. A few weeks ago from my friend Red
  11. I agree with Myiege. I used to beta for a writer whose native language was German and he would tell me the exact same thing that you are going through. He also tried writing the chapters in his native language and then translate it, and that didn't work for him, so he would have to write it in English as he went. As a person who is not good at languages besides her own, I admire anyone who is bilingual Hopefully, the more you write, the easier it will get. Good luck.
  12. In response to what Daithi said, I thought it was odd that Jo did notice the swelling and bruising, since earlier Jeremy was wearing sunglasses to cover it up. I like the description of both of the men in this chapter, they sound delicious.
  13. CassieQ

    Chapter 7

    Yep.
  14. CassieQ

    Chapter 6

    It is a dangerous game they are playing, but love and caution rarely go hand in hand.
  15. CassieQ

    Chapter 1

    Thanks Yettie. I go for the literal sometimes This is probably the only time I will happily endorse a massive snowstorm The boys needed something to push them in the right direction. And I'm glad to see that you enjoyed it, even though it was something different than what you expected. I appreciate the review.
  16. I will go ahead and say that I read this particular story on Literotica, not Nifty. But I assumed it would be found both places.
  17. This sounds a lot like The Human Condition by jfinn, except for the ending, so I'm not sure if this is the one you are looking for or not.
  18. CassieQ

    Chapter 5

    It is very bittersweet and a very sad chapter. Thanks for the review.
  19. CassieQ

    Chapter 3

    You're spot on about most of the details. Values are placed primarily on how many healthy children can be produced, for males and females. And homosexuality is strictly forbidden, true. Thanks for reviewing
  20. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
  21. Oh, what the heck. Writing Angel Writing Crashed Writing the Fall Anthology piece Beta work for Myiege Beta work for Stellar Beta work for Joann Also working full time And I have a housewarming party tomorrow night. But nah, I'm not that busy
  22. CassieQ

    What the . . .

    Awesome!
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