Tibial's world isn't a friendly one, that is for sure. If a young viable human isn't willing to help produce children, then society has no use for them anymore. It's a horrible way to think and live.
Thank you. It was fluffy. But I'm glad you like the story and the characters. I'm glad I left it off where I did too, writing the deaths of these characters would have been too hard.
I agree with Myiege. I used to beta for a writer whose native language was German and he would tell me the exact same thing that you are going through. He also tried writing the chapters in his native language and then translate it, and that didn't work for him, so he would have to write it in English as he went. As a person who is not good at languages besides her own, I admire anyone who is bilingual Hopefully, the more you write, the easier it will get. Good luck.
In response to what Daithi said, I thought it was odd that Jo did notice the swelling and bruising, since earlier Jeremy was wearing sunglasses to cover it up. I like the description of both of the men in this chapter, they sound delicious.
Thanks Yettie. I go for the literal sometimes This is probably the only time I will happily endorse a massive snowstorm The boys needed something to push them in the right direction. And I'm glad to see that you enjoyed it, even though it was something different than what you expected. I appreciate the review.
You're spot on about most of the details. Values are placed primarily on how many healthy children can be produced, for males and females. And homosexuality is strictly forbidden, true. Thanks for reviewing
Oh, what the heck.
Writing Angel
Writing Crashed
Writing the Fall Anthology piece
Beta work for Myiege
Beta work for Stellar
Beta work for Joann
Also working full time
And I have a housewarming party tomorrow night.
But nah, I'm not that busy