Thank you so much, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. I will admit that I was a tad overambitious with this and there were a lot of concepts that I wanted to explore that I ended up dropping because it would be too much, so it's a bit of a messy read and not as streamlined as I would like. I appreciate all of the comments and feedback, I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the series.
A phobia is an abnormal or excessive fear though. I know that a spider is quite unlikely to kill me, especially with our current level of medicine, and that they are even beneficial in killing other insects. But if I see one on my kitchen floor, I will still jump about a foot in the air, and kill it with extreme force and malice.
Thank you. Your comment about Reyansh made sense and was spot on. I didn't want to break them up, but they couldn't keep going like they had been. Reyansh is smart enough to recognize they need space, and loves his boyfriend enough to make that happen. Thank you for reading and commenting!
That's so sketchy. I'm fine with a writer who asks for payment for a bonus chapter or something like that, but not something that directly relates to the events happening in the main (free) story. That's just wrong.
I love Brandon's parents in this chapter. It's true that the boys have only gone on one "date", but Brandon only has eyes for Jordan at this point, so considers him as his boyfriend. Thanks for commenting!
Interestingly enough, when I had this story up on another site before I came here, I actually had some comments from readers saying that they found Keith sexy. They liked his confidence. Brandon goes to him just for sex, but it's not a healthy relationship, and I don't think Keith wants it to be. Perhaps they are using each other.
You'll see more of the mysterious woman later on. Thanks for commenting!
Brandon's working his way through his grief, but it's going to take time before he can see things clearly, based on how close he was to her. Jordan has the kind of emotional distance that gives clarity, Brandon is not there yet, but working on it. Thanks for commenting!