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  1. Wow. This week has been crazy, but we made it to another Friday. You know what that means? No, not a night out and no work tomorrow! It means I have prompts for you. Prompt 774 - Creative Tag - Doppelganger It has been a long week and you decide to treat yourself to a nice meal. You spot this nice restaurant as you go home and decide to give it a shot. As you walk in the door the loud noise in the place becomes suddenly silent. You pause as you fear the place might be in the midst of a robbery. You notice everyone shooting glances at you and then toward the back of the place. Wondering what could be going on you follow their glances and find … yourself? Only your doppelganger seems completely different somehow. What happens when you meet? Prompt 775 - Creative Tag - List of Words Use the following words in a story - a pair of glasses, a torn tee shirt, a cup of coffee, a crying child, and a slice of pizza. So do they give you any ideas? Please feel free to share your stories on the prompt page. Until next time. Remember to read, write, like, and comment.
  2. We made it to another Friday. That is reason to enough to celebrate, but it also means I've come with new offerings for you. Prompt 772 - Creative Tag - First Line The rain has been falling for hours, soaking my skin, and wiping out my tracks as I do my best to leave the pain behind me while I try to escape before anyone notices I'm gone. Prompt 773 - Creative Tag - New Day You went with your friends to see the fortune teller that they had booked as a evening's entertainment. However, when the fortune teller spotted you she ignored everyone else and demanded your hand. It freaked you out a bit, but when she grabbed your hand you tore it from her grasp, catching your finger on her ring scratching it deeply. As you looked at her, a drop of your blood fell onto her deck, hitting just one tarot card which she immediately flipped over. When she looked at you she said, "It will all begin for you when you next awaken to a new day." Your body shook and you felt like a an electric pulse went through your body as you rushed outside into the rain. You left your friends and hurried home only to collapse into bed. The next day you woke to a whole different life. What happened to you on that new day? So that is this week's new prompts., I hope one appeals to you. Until next week, read, write, comment, and like. Be well.
  3. Never been sprayed by a skunk. (Have no desire to be sprayed either!) Never have I ever picked up someone at a bar. (So not a bar person to begin with.)
  4. Been a long time since I've worn the shiny. All mine. Lol
  5. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAOdlgFJDAI&list=FLEb0icsns41ot58RmIVCRZw&index=30
  6. comicfan

    Chapter 52

    I'm very pleased to see Jay healing. The whole thing was messy, scary, and one hell of a ride. I am so grateful to have been allowed to follow such a wonderful story and will happily wait for the second tale told by Jay.
  7. comicfan

    Chapter 50

    Sorry, Nephy. Just love your work and it never hurts to ask for more. I find the worst that happens is someone says no. Lol
  8. Well, ladies and gents we have made it to August. The year is just flying by. Hopefully, you are finding time to write, and because it is Friday time to offer up some new prompts. Prompt 770 - Creative Tag - Fallen Everything about him is wrong. He is too much of an opposite, and you fight with him every chance you get when you do see each other. However, if you see him near anyone else you feel angry and possessive. You can't deny it anymore, you've fallen, and fallen hard for him. What happened and how did you fall for this guy? Prompt 771 - Creative Tag - First Line The screams of terror drew you like a moth to a flame, but while everyone else ran away you ran to save the one bleeding on the ground before you. So that is this week's selection. Did one of them interest you? James Savik took a shot at 769 - and new comer Talo Segura took a shot at 764 - https://gayauthors.org/story/talo-segura/short-stories-inspired-by-prompts/1 Hopefully next week we will have some other stories to highlight. Until next time. Remember to read, write, comment, and like
  9. Can't wait to read them.
  10. Wow, another week is nearly over. Mother Nature has been baking Europe and sending storms everywhere. I have lucked out with moderate temperatures today, but I hope everyone is okay. If you have been lucky enough to be able to relax, well I have some new prompts to entice you to write. Prompt 768 - Creative Tag - The Arrow The arrow lay on a pillow under glass. You remember it always being on the mantle of your grandmother's fireplace in her den since you were a child. No one in the family would tell you the significance of it, but it always fascinated you. Last week, you buried your grandmother and today, along with the rest of your family, you've gone to clean up and close down her house. As you walk into the den there is a flash of light and the arrow is suddenly embedded in your chest. What happened? Prompt 769 - Creative Tag - First Line The sound of moaning drew my attention, but the last thing I expected to see was the beaten half naked body facedown in garbage behind my job. So, did one of them catch your attention? Hopefully, you will share it in the Prompt thread. Until next time, remember to read, write, comment, and like.
  11. Congratulations Northie! Sorry, I'm late but so happy for you.
  12. comicfan

    Chapter 50

    I get the feeling that so much is still going on and after seeing your note can only conclude that many of the strands will be tied up in book two. Amara is facing a long road. PTSD, his mother, his father, and pressure to tour are just some of his issues. Here is hoping that he will get all the support he needs. I'm sort of worried about Aria too. He seems to be pushing himself too hard. Just because he seems to be bouncy and fragile, people seem to wrap him up and ignore his issues. Between the kidnapping, his brother being shot, idiot parents, and trying to be more like Amara for Drew, his issues peek out now and then. Hopefully, his doc is a good one. Poor Drew. He is torn between the boys. They both mean so much. I pray they can make this therouple thing work.
  13. Enjoy your vacation.
  14. comicfan

    #765 The Mackerel

    It's as @Valkyrie constantly tells me, expand and more. Lol.
  15. It is finally Friday. So my turn to offer up a little inspiration to you. Prompt 766 - Creative Tag - First Line The ring sparkled in the moonlight as he stared intently at it, trying to find the words he desperately wanted to speak. Prompt 767 - Creative Tag - Gifts In an age where magic is barely exists, there is a village where everyone is born with some sort of magic. However, there is small little orphaned boy with mismatched eyes who seems to have many gifts. Who is he and what are his gifts? Hopefully you'll attempt one and share it with us. Until next time read, write, comment, and like. Be safe.
  16. comicfan

    #765 The Mackerel

    Hmm. I'll have to see what this week's prompts are to inspire you. So the statue turns him into a merman or mackerel? He leaves a lover behind? You really need to give us more.
  17. comicfan

    Chapter 49

    Well, at least Jeff is setting Drew up for success. Drew can't protect and be the boyfriend to both boys. Lady Jane is slowly getting to me. I'm happy to see how she is behaving towards the twins now. She is putting them and Drew first. She is even accepting of Drew's family. Now she needs to work with Jay. Speaking of Jay, I really want to see them happy. So there will be new guards and Amara will be heading out on tour soon. No rest for our little family of five.
  18. Hello old friend. It's just you and me now. They are all gone, but their words repeat unending. I hear their words, but they're long gone. I don't care, I love him, I cant stay, you're uncaring, you're worthless, you're unlovable. Hello old friend. I have my plastic smile in. Their shades haunt my days and torment my nights. If you smile while you cut all ties they dont notice. You're alone, you're unknown, you're unremarkable, they don't see, they don't hear, they don't care. Goodbye old friend. The clock stopped, and no more alarms. Each day a new pain, a new scar, a little death. I curl up on your tombstone now. Who is the frail figure? What does he want? Where are his friends? Why is he alone? How did he become this? Goodbye old friend. I stand here one last time. There are no tears or hugs for me. There is no warmth in this cold December. There is only hard acceptance in the end.
  19. Hello. Sorry everyone, sort of an issue on my end but finally getting the prompts out. As the saying goes, better late than never. Hopefully, one will catch your fancy. Prompt 764 - Creative Tag - First Line The tears were still falling as he grasped the doorframe watching the dark figure disappear into the rain. Prompt 765 - Creative Tag - List of words Use the following words in a story - a boat, a statue, a flock of seagulls, a rain coat, and a blue blanket. So did you find a prompt you enjoyed? Please share your tale below. Remember to read, write, comment, and like. Until next time.
  20. comicfan

    #762 More Angels

    No, thank you both for using this prompt to enrich the world you've created. This was simply beautiful and answers some very important points. Nicely done gentlemen.
  21. Oh, after a long break... I'm back! Hopefully, everyone read and enjoyed the anthology. Time now to flex your mind, look at the prompts, and perchance write a little something. Here are this week's offerings. Prompt 762 - Creative Tag - First Line "You're early," stated Death as they set their newspaper down and turned to face me. Prompt 763 - Creative Tag - Celebration Last night you went out to celebrate with friends. You remember drinking, eating, and a set of beautiful gray-blue eyes. This morning you woke in a strange room, naked, with a ring on your hand that you can't get off. What happened at your celebration? Way back in May, Aditus took a shot at both of the last prompts. Here is the link to one of them, prompt 761. https://gayauthors.org/story/aditus/prickly-prompts/2 What do you think? Leave him a comment. If you have written a piece feel free to share it here. Remember to read, write, comment, and review. 'Til next time, enjoy your week.
  22. comicfan

    Chapter 47

    Even these little breaks allow us a more in depth view of all of them. Amara, the star, who is rarely home. Aria, the homebody, who likes to focus outside the limelight. Jay, the observer, who is as deep as the sea. Certain, the traveler, with a huge heart. Jeff, protector, and father figure. Lady Jane, grandmother, is trying to keep some sort of relationship going. Finally, there is Drew. Somehow it seems he is the one stumbling around and still not comfortable in his own skin. 'Til next time.
  23. comicfan

    Chapter 43

    Okay, I'm commenting on both chapters because it took six tries to finish and then onto this ... bloody mess. First, I hate how Jay has had to act for two chapters. Nothing worse than seeing a victim revictimized and used. My heart breaks for him being used first by Ben then by the woman who birthed the twins. Second, Ben is dead! It was too kind. Hopefully the bitch won't get off so easily. Third, go boys. Amara continued to show his strength. Aria is just as bad ass and maybe stronger. He just lost all faith in the woman he always tried to please and is going for the jugular. Fourth, Drew better find his stance. The man needs to decide in or out. He fights for them and freezes when his training should kick in. He needs to back up his boys and be the man they require. His sis was doing better. Finally, what is the story between Lady Jane and the butler. The bitch suggested there is a lot more to be told and I want to see her standing over the bitch's body. The only one I feel sorry for is the unborn child. I want the bitch and her mysterious friend to pay in spades for what has been done.
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