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  1. comicfan

    Chapter 2

    comicfan commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2

    The twins are a hard read. You can tell they don't trust anyone but each other. That is sad in so many ways. Time will show more, but you feel for them already. Drew is going to have to step back and look at what is happening. You know he has a heart, but goddamn is he an ass. If he stops prejudging everything and everyone and takes a moment, he might become a decent human being. Ben is a wildcard. He claims to be the bitch, which I might agree to. He rubs you wrong, but knows his job. He seems to know what is going on, but seems ready to drop it on Drew's lap and let him take charge. All in all, just want more so I can figure out who is who, as well as who is out to harm the twins. 6 more days ... sigh.
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    Oh this was my dark story. Surprised a lot of people with this one. They were all so good. If you haven't read them, well, now's your chance.
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    Chapter 1

    comicfan commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    As usual, we hit the ground running. I can understand Drew's attitude. He was deliberately not given all the facts, was chosen partially because of his looks and not his abilities, and is finding out that the 'cake walk' might be anything but. You really have to wonder what he is about to get into. All the intrigue is set up, so can't wait for the story to unfold.
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    Ok, so from the other comments I see I came into the middle of a story, not just a person caught between the real world and sleep. You felt the horror of being unable to fully wake or move. Considering how voice irritated him, I'm glad his mother was there as well. Nice chapter/story.
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    Amanda Reynolds

    comicfan commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Amanda Reynolds

    Val, you know I'm a sucker for a good story with a twist. The only thing I'm going to say, and it's your usual request to me, More! 😂 Great story.
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    You never know what an encounter will bring. Sometimes you just have to take the plunge. Glad you enjoyed it, Caz.
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    This was fun. I remember all the betrayals. Lol
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    I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I see this as the start of something good.
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    I'm glad you enjoyed it, Deville. I always like to toy with those getting to know you, or the taking that next step. I find myself to be a people watcher and hopefully that translates into believable characters and situations. Thanks for commenting.
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    Thanks for all the help. Hope you see how I tied it into the topic.
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    Glad you enjoyed it. Dialogue is always a way into a story and is something I try to work on. Thank you for the comment.
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    Glad you enjoyed it, Chris.
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    I expect they will. Thanks for the comment.
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    Recently was talking with someone and it's that whole awkward getting to know you thing that happens when you meet someone that I tried to echo here. I agree with the chicken tacos. Sort of a safe easy choice for a shared meal. Glad you enjoyed it.
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    Thank you. Always happy when my story is enjoyed.
  16. comicfan
    Been a few years but can see the echo with Accidents. Glad you enjoyed it.
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    Yeah. I figured with so many in NYC for Pride, running into someone was a simple idea.
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    The Interview

    comicfan commented on Disjecta Membra's story chapter in The Interview

    Wow. That was great. I felt Carter was going to get away with it, but sometimes people surprise you and make sure the right thing is done. Great story.
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    Interesting take on the topic. Hope you come back and expand this. Would really like to read more.
  20. comicfan
    This story was created for the Newsletter Game : Pride Month Headline! My headline was Major Changes for this Sunday's Pride March. From that I created the story of Terrance "Terry" Burgess and his adventure on the day of the NYC Pride Parade. Enjoy.
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    I always feel people should come out when they are ready and hopefully they will find people waiting to support them. Loved how the coach made sure everyone knew he expected nothing but support. The whole thing made me smile.
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    Out of Bounds

    comicfan commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Out of Bounds

    You are always innovating Delores. You got the sense of your headline, but I just want more
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    I think we all need friends like Tom, who push us out of our comfort zones and force us to live again. I loved how Pete and Geoff met and just sort of took off. There was nothing forced and I loved the bit about bus fare. Made me smile. Love how it all tied into your headline.
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    The story

    comicfan commented on northie's story chapter in The story

    This was really sweet. I loved how you went back and forth showing how Josh was looking at his first Pride event, knowing if a whisper got back home his world would be over. He was scared feeling he wouldn't be accepted. On the other side you had Conner and Alex. Here is a young gay couple freely enjoying their adventure at Pride. They see Josh and go over to help this man. You are left feeling happy. Oh, and you tied in your headline perfectly. Really enjoyed it because you allowed me to feel all of the excitement and worry.
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    “Goddamn it!” Terry muttered as he tried to rush through the busy New York City streets. At first he couldn’t figure out why it was so crowded when he wasn’t even near Stonewall yet for the parade. “Watch it, asshole,” someone screamed at him as tried to push his way toward the corner. “Sorry,” he yelled back as another woman shot him the bird. Terry only really stopped when someone grabbed the back of his shirt. “What the,” was all he got out as the yellow cab blew through the s
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