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Hmm. Well not much for me to say. You have so many already loving your story. I just can't wait to see how this all unfolds. Hope you don't mind if I just sit back to watch as Percy knocks himself out for Max but needs to discover how to make this work.

So hard on a guy who is busy trying to keep his sex life on the DL. I don't know why people put up with it. Waiting to see where you take Percy and Max.

After using lines of it in another thread this has been on my mind.

I'm late to the party but Happy Birthday Nephy. I hope you had a blast.

Michael, Don't ask what happens in the terminals. We don't have that kind of space and this is supposed to be a rated g page. LOL. Anyway I'll add the Madame Tussaud's Wax Museum, Museum of Modern Art, New York Public Library, any Broadway show you can get into, stop into Macy's if for no other reason to see the one they talk about in every Miracle on 34th Street Movie. If you have time the Museum of Television and Radio is another fascinating spot to go. I'd say the Statue of Liberty but I believe she under repairs again. Ellis Island if you have any desire or know if you family came through it.

Because Scott's Christmas present is sitting unwrapped in the middle of his living room. He wants to surprise Scott. Sometimes you enjoy the romance of it all. Besides who said he wasn't planning to curl up with Scott all afternoon?

Thank you Mark. Glad you liked it. Get ready though I am about to put Seeon through hell.

So he is guilty. You think anyone is going to be unhappy with the results of this? Honestly, Andy, that is what everyone was hoping for. Nice to know that even though it looked like a slam dunk, our prosecuting attorney was nervous until the end. It made me smile to know that here was someone in the justice department who truly was worried about the victim and getting justice. It was also reassuring to know that the judge would take little joy in sentencing someone so young. Of course I'm a little blood thirsty and want him and his parents to pay through the nose. Of course that will be the civil suit. LOL.

Lets see - Day 1. Met cute Preacher's son, got into a fight protecting him, might have outed himself to the whole school, made an enemy of the school bully, and is off to see the principal. Well, if the rest of his days are like this you better write faster cause people are going to want more. Nice Job.

Okay, I listened to you whine that you didn't think anyone would read your work. By the time I get here you have a page of glowing reviews. Nice job all the way around, Billy. Naturally because I came late to the party I get to see immediately what you have up your sleeve.

Hell, KC, I've expanded since you made suggestions as the beta. Thanks for commenting.

I was wondering when someone was going to ask what a Ma' Nee was. All will be explained in the next chapter, Renee. Thanks for commenting. I was afraid people just didn't care.

Chapter 1 – A World of Change Prince Seeon was the fifth child of the High King Toleran Maon. Being the youngest meant he had disadvantages his older siblings did not. His oldest brother, Prince Henot, would inherit the crown and rule after his father died. His second oldest brother, Prince Semon, was the Warrior Prince. He often was sent to deal with the necessary problems and acted as the face of the kingdom to the outside forces. It was heard whispered by the royal servants t

Seeon Toleran is the fifth child of the ruling royal family. His life was one of study and devotion to his Gods. Then war came and the world Seeon knew ended. There were decisions that were made for him which drastically altered the direction of his life. Suddenly the world of the priesthood is gone as an option in Seeon's life. Instead he is made Ma' Nee. What will this mean to a youth who has known neither love nor choice? Will this end his world or open new vistas? Time will tell.

Okay this is literally what I have as my check list this week. 1) Complete Chapter 29 of AH - Done. In fact it is one of the longer chapters. I'm nearly done with 30 now. Thank goodness. 2) Complete work on Seeon - We have successfully broken him up into chapters, expanded upon areas that were weak, and he is going for his last look over by the editor now that the beta and I have cleaned him up. Hopefully I will be posting chapter 1 later today. Remind me that prompts are supposed to be short stories. This thing kept growing, and growing, and growing. Three days and 47 pages later, a Seeon is born. 3) Try and get past the midway point on Jonas - I am up to Chapter 6. I have no idea if that is midway or not. 4) Finish 2 beta projects - Well those are both done, but I understand one of my regulars has his anthology completed and it needs a going over so one more project was picked up. 5) Nanowrimo - Okay, Granted we are presently five days into the month and the supposedly the novel. I um, well, I have only five pages done. With everything else going on I just haven't had time. 6) Complete Thanksgiving Cards - I bought them, that has to count for something right? 7) Wrap up and mail November Birthday gifts - Well one person is complete and partially wrapped, my father's is bought, and I haven't a thing yet for my sister-in-law and hers is on the eighth. Would I be a bad person if I just ordered something off Amazon and had it delivered? Oh well. Wishing all of you a good day. Keep your chin up and keep going.

LOL. Yeah, I'm sorry. No one can really read Charlie if they are hungry. Too much food talk. Christmas is up next. Thanks for staying with me Frosty.

Oh I am writing more. Just not a lot more to write for Charlie. Just Christmas and New Years Ele and it is over.

Zenobia, Glad you have stuck with me. When you read the story starts in September after the kids have gone back to school. Then there is the accident. The meet again in October and go on their first real date. Just you have had to wait a bit to get it all but the story so far has spread just a few months. It all ends on New Years.

I'm glad you like them all George. There have been problems along the way but unlike some stories there really isn't a bad guy. Only two chapters left. Hope I don't disappoint you.

Chapter 29 – Christmas Eve Party Charlie’s last day of school was a breeze. There wasn’t much being done. He had planned a class party. The class was only due to be in school for three hours, and part of that timethey would be in gym. Wednesday, he got in early and set up his class. He had something small for each member of the class that they would be able to use. They were simple pencils and bookmarks, but he didn’t want to ignore his students. Once the classroom was set up C

Thank you Billy. Words can raise you up or tear you down. Labels only seek to box someone and keep them from being who they are.

I'm keeping up so far. IF it gets to be too much, well I have time on the novel but lets see what I can do.

I doubt you could call Gabriel (Wow, talk about a fallen angel) a boy. Beautiful and seductive leading Cyan down a path to oblivion. poor Cy, he never knew what hit him. I kept thing vamp, but he was out in the daylight. Then the seduction, the lost time, the lair. Nephy, you are just cruel. In the end poor Cy didn't even get to die as he wanted. Now I understand that confused little intro you had that got me to read it. lol.

The movie is a nice story. Just like most of the others based off the Titanic tragedy. Cameron's Titanic was in 1997. - sappy love story Titanic in 1996 was a TV mini-series with a wild story line. - known for Tim Curry's character attacking and raping a stewardess. In 1979 came S.O.S. Titanic - Cloris Leachman as Molly Brown In 1968 was A Night to Remember -This is the one most historians agree is closest to the actual story. The Brits made this one. In 1953 Titanic was released - A Selnick film starring Babara Stanwick, Clifton Webb, and Robert Wagner. Got to also mention The Unsinkable Molly Brown - Debbie Reynolds in musical version of the life of Molly Brown. I have seen all but the TV Mini Series - My father is a Titanic nut and has all of them on DVD. I know there are a few German versions as well but don't know them off hand.

Okay, so it has been a busy month. Oh yeah today it just day one. LOL. Let me explain. First, Happy Birthday Mark. Now I screwed up and didn't get his gift out in time it seems so he didn't have it today. The joys of dealing with many different postal services. But that just begins it. This month I have family birthdays - my sister-in-law, and my father. Various other friends, oh and any international gifts I plan to send for Christmas I was told by the post office to make sure were in the mail not later than the 15th. My Thanksgiving cards are bought but I haven't had two seconds to write them out yet. However all my Christmas gifts are bought. I just have to wrap. I am in the process of finishing Accidents Happen, sorry to my readers, work has been nuts and my father took a fall so didn't get a chance to write as i wanted to this week. I have Seeon back from my beta, needs to be redone and then for a change I'm going to ask if he wants to look it over again to makes sure it all makes sense before it goes to my editor, if she has time at all. Then there is Jonas who is still in the overhaul stage trying to get that ready for when Accident is over. I really have to thank Andy for all his hard work on that with me. He has shown me new ways to write. Oh yeah I have two other stories I wrote in my notebook. (I'm not sure about other writers but I always carry one to jot things down in. Well wrote two stories on my break on Monday) Those two stories I have to get time to type up. Did I mention I sketched out my idea for Nanowrimo? Somewhere I have to find time to do that because, oh yeah, that story is going for the Anthology next year. If I can get it completed that means I just need to find an editor and beta and that is one less thing on my plate to worry about. Oh yeah, I have a few beta projects to complete as well. So I do apologize for being a bit behind. Sometimes the best laid plans go a bit astray, but I do have lots to get out and it probably going to happen almost all at once. Thanks for caring though.