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  1. comicfan

    The Act

    I guess I answered your questions. Yeah, mom isn't the best. She let her pack, her alpha, and most importantly her family down. Yeah, the pack seems to forget that the Alpha and the Elder always take care of the pack. They put everyone's health and safety first. If Dan had done something that would be detrimental, he wouldn't have been able to stay.
  2. comicfan

    Taking A Fall

    Thank you. I was afraid no one was reading. Hopefully, all your questions are answered in chapter 2.
  3. comicfan

    The Act

    I see it as the Alpha had an open door policy where he thought his pack had enough faith in him to ask if they didn't understand or believe in something he did. Basically, his biggest failing was in putting too much faith in people to do the right thing. When the truth comes out, well, not everyone smells like a rose.
  4. Very different story, but well done Thorn. I enjoyed seeing angels fall in love. Thanks for the notes on the history from your research. It added another layer to your story.
  5. The angels seem to agree that love is good. All except for Metatron, who seems to have lost his way. I hope Jair keeps his love.
  6. OK, so I waited so I can go chapter to chapter. I like how Jair handles everything. Joseph has some growing to do, but I wonder what his future will bring. 'Til next time.
  7. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Nothing like the nice guy not finishing last. I was happy to see Bas get his happy ever after. Just wish Troy got what was coming to him. Loved how Colin looks out for Liam. They are really sweet brothers. Beautiful story.
  8. comicfan

    Squall Line

    I feel for Philippe. It seems everyone has fallen to the wayside and he is left alone. You see the friendships fall away. I was ticked at Gerald. First he leaves Philippe alone while they are on vacation, only to try and renew the friendship on a whim. Gerald has a family and needs to decide what he wants. In the meantime, Philippe is entering his golden years in a house he wants, but alone. Sad situation.
  9. I raced away from the mess and flew down the stairs heading toward the front door. The sun had yet to crack the horizon and the full moon was evident in the sky. I could see a car approaching through the autumn trees as it seemed to almost fly across down the roadway as the leaves rose like crashing waves around it. The long black SUV glided to a stop before the stairs of the pack house. Brandy stepped out and opened the rear door. Out stepped Cassandra and two figures in robes. Cassandra
  10. I knocked so hard on Elder Underwood’s door I nearly knocked it off its hinges. “What the …Daniel?” The Elder took one look at me and stepped back. “Come in and take a seat.” I could barely see. I’d run here on pure instinct. I hadn’t even noticed the tears, but once I sat down I began to sob uncontrollably. It took a few minutes ‘til I realized a blanket was draped over my shoulders and a steaming cup of tea sat before me. “Daniel, you need to tell me what is wrong before I ca
  11. I can hear the whispered comments from the whole pack as I make my way to the front of the stage. I know they hate me and I’ve fallen from a pedestal I never asked to be placed on. They don’t know the sacrifice I’ve made or the pain I am in constantly. All they see is the abomination they believe I have become over the last three years. Four years ago this all began. Four years and only three people besides myself know the truth. First is Dennis Underwood, the Elder. He helped me plan this
  12. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    I always think it is up to the couple involved.
  13. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    I have learned to never say no.
  14. Congrats Carlos.
  15. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, @Nana Atuwa. This was written for the anthology, so by definition it is a short story. I have occasionally come back and filled in the gaps, so I'll never say no, more like we will have to see.
  16. Well, here on Long Island it uas been rain and sleet. Tomorrow they are saying snow and icy mix. Expecting a trace to three inches. The city goes three to six and beyond that snow and mess. This is the first winter storm here on LI. Sorry for @Myr and @Renee Stevens. Oh and welcome back @wildone.
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    Maybe Later

    I think it is easy to allow work to fill up your life until someone makes you reevaluate your life. Pat suddenly has Trevor messing up his usual schedule and taking notice of parts of his life he has let slide. Thank you for the comments, LadyDe
  18. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Thanks Gary. I am just glad everyone is enjoying this.
  19. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Thank you, Lomax. Im glad you enjoyed it. Trevor is sure of what he wants and will most likely end up teaching Pat a few things. You never know when love will walk in and flip your life upside down.
  20. comicfan

    Chapter 1

    Mooooore! Ok, so we have wait. Like others I find Aaron to be abrasive, but also wonder if he might have some level of disability. He needs everything done his way. Even while in Malcolm's house he does things his own way. And while taking photos truly put me off, he doesn't do it to make fun of or put it out there. He goes to Fran to clarify. Almost seems like some student's I've had. Even with the short introduction, I really did enjoy Fran's take on life. Fran seems like she will do her best to make Aaron see what is possible in life, opening his world view. Malcolm is a sweet individual. You can see so much is going on in his world. I hope things become easier for him. 'Til next chapter and more answers. Great start Northie.
  21. Well, my short one came out this week. My longer one will be out later. People seem to enjoy it. At least i haven't gone completely rusty. Lol. Worked everyday and am not off 'til Monday. So going to try and read the Anthologies beginning tomorrow. Can't wait.
  22. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Thanks, Aditus. Glad you enjoyed it.
  23. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Thank you, Thorn. I am glad people are enjoying it.
  24. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Thank you. I think life sometimes gives you opportunities for love and it is up to you to seize it. I think Pat will.
  25. comicfan

    Maybe Later

    Sometimes the most you can do is imagine how it will be. Lol. Thanks for reading. Might come come back.
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