Thank you Cannd for such a descriptive review. I might yet squeeze more than one more chapter out, but really trying to bring both Seeon and Jonas to conclusions. Originally Seeon was planned as a two to three part series. Unfortunately, events in my life have kept me from writing as I would like to and I am desperately trying to bring closure so that readers like you don't sit and wonder if that is all there is or what the ending could or should have been. I promise to do my best to answer as many of your questions as I can in the final chapter/chapters.
Seeon's life took a drastic change in becoming Ma'Nee and then marrying Mika. His past and his future are vastly different as he is slowly learning. Thanks for reading and commenting Llina.
I never planned for Seeon to be miserable. He is a survivor even if he doesn't know it. The family he has become a part of will help him to grow. Wait and see, Puppilull.
While the powers in general are fairly rare, they do run in families. Remember both of Seeon's sisters had powers. Seeon's powers are something he doesn't even realize he possess. The priests however wish they had known so they could have tested him or gone to the extremes that his sisters were put through to end their ability to use them.
Thank you for the in depth review Dr. Paladin. Seeon began as a prompt, where a character is given as a wedding trophy to end a war. For me that character became Seeon. I just wanted to see what happens when you take someone who for the most part has been totally isolated and now they are dropped into the middle of a large family that is loud, loving, and as opposite of Seeon's life as you can get. Just glad you are getting so much out of it.
Mika sat with Seeon going over the various foods. Seeon still refused to take anything until after Mika had filled his plate. There were challenges that were going to have to be overcome yet, Mika noted.
“So, did you enjoy the foods? Which were your favorites?” Mika watched Seeon look over the foods that covered the table.
Seeon thought of the foods he thought Mika enjoyed and tried to point them out. “This was very good.”
Mika watched as Seeon