carringtonrj
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Expertly done, of course. You manage the twist skillfully, so that it becomes increasingly obvious, bit by bit, but never totally clear until near the end. Enjoyed.
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This is really original and different. Also a horrible nightmare! But very well handled. Interesting to read something in the second person. Lots of intriguing details. A real stand out piece of writing. Thanks for the read.
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Very neat little story. Nice build up of daft pranks leading to the end line perfectly. Enjoyed it. Nice to read such a joyful story.
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Neat little story, F. Thanks for the read.
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Interesting. You structure the play well. You have a good range of characters and a really intriguing central idea - the devil in disguise. The whole thing hangs together very well and leads towards the following acts, which I hope you'll post soon. Nice to see a different type of text - first play I've read on GA. Thanks for the interesting read.
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nicely developing relationship with interesting elements to their situation: enjoyed.
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Emotional and thought-provoking. Enjoyed.
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I liked it. It's original and imaginative. A nice spin on the Mayan prophecy theme. When are they are making the movie?
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Elethiel (A Fairy Tale)
carringtonrj commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Elethiel (A Fairy Tale)
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Conversations with Strangers
carringtonrj commented on Menzoberranzen's story chapter in Conversations with Strangers
Interesting. You go deep into things and leave the reader guessing, but in a good way. You have some interesting things to say about love. Somehow it all seems so familiar, but so strange. I want them to understand each other; perhaps they do. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks. -
intriguing.
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Interesting characters and interesting developing situation. Thanks for this.
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Fun story. Nicely put together. I like the ending - inspires lots of possible thoughts! Thanks for this story - or should I be more careful about offering thanks?
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Lovely writing. Love the Dylan references! Beautifully built up. Does feel that there is more to come. Is there? Hope so.
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Weekly Update Weekly Wrap Up 2/27-3/3
carringtonrj commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Just to say, I think these blogs - whether written by Lugh or Cia or Renee or anyone else - are really good. They help to create a real sense of community for GA. A great idea. And yours are very pretty Cia, what with the lioness at the top. -
Good for you, N. Fame and fortune beckon!
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You're an expert writer of sex scenes. Extraordinary!
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Beautiful piece, N. So poised and precise and controlled, but also so wildly passionate. Some of your best writing - which is really saying something!
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Some lovely descriptive touches - you make the two guys sound really attractive. Sweet romance. Real imaginative understanding of the characters and their feelings. Your usual skilful stuff!
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Edward II (Lament Of The King)
carringtonrj commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Edward II (Lament Of The King)
Interesting and emotional. Great to reflect on these interesting historical characters - two of the great historical gays! Some clever weavings of language too. Enjoyed it. Felt longing. -
Sorry to hear that things aren't going too well right now. You know you have many friends here who care about you, so that's one bit of ongoing good news, I guess. You're a talented and imaginative writer and a thoughtful and good-hearted person, so that's more good news. In the end the love you make ... So just wait and you'll get your good news big time, I'm sure!
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Strong opening. Scruff of neck has been grabbed. I was hurrying to the wedding reception, but now ...
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Great story, J. I think your writing is getting sharper and more precise all the time. This is so neatly done.
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Stave 1: Christmas Eve
carringtonrj commented on Phoenix1977's story chapter in Stave 1: Christmas Eve
A really fun take on the classic tale. It took some adjusting to at first - sex and Dickens seem an odd combination, somehow! But I think it's great, and I'm interested to see how it will develop with the sex/money interchange. Well done with this!
