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The extraordinarily vivid last two chapters took us closer to the actual battle 215 years ago than has likely been done since the battle was new. I've always liked a rousing story about battle in the great age of sail, but this one is among the best I've ever read.
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Uzzi's back, finally, ...and now they're supposed to be a trio with super rainbow power? It's all mysterious to me. I'm grinning over your image of God being a white-headed adolescent in a top hat. Of course all this makes me wonder what's coming next.
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Freaky storms popping up all over! I'm glad you're OK. Michael is sensitive, no doubt about it, but that's something I hope he can deal with as time passes. The big question is: Can his relationship with Asher survive this stormy phase?
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George truly shines in this chapter with his perfect poise, grace, and determination he tames the renegade Travers Sr. and sets him back in the right place. He is a masterful opponent. I'm certain Nelson is overjoyed to have him drop in at exactly the right moment. He's a lucky man. Now all he needs is a spare frigate to turn up before engaging the French!
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Chapter 43 - Through the Looking Glass
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 43 - Through the Looking Glass
What is going on? This place is a labyrinth, and full of traps and deceptions. If Pasha can't feel Uzzi anymore, and is starting to have those feelings transferred to Gabriel, then it's really a trap. Somebody's out to sever the bond, but who? And just who is that annoying white-headed kid? Seems I'm all questions today. -
What a literal cliffhanger! The next chapter had better come soon.
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Whew! All this spy business is nerve wracking. Now I'm real curious about this actual communication with the parties involved, and wondering how the Freedom leaders and Cadre crews will react to Wirrin. The nerve of K74 trying to kidnap Freedom; -is that irony or what?
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What a long, strange trip it's been. - I loved every moment of it. Thanks so much!
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Planet Obsidian, ...could that be the Arbiter's home? It would be appropriate. Evil, intolerant things, aren't they? This has been an effort well spent, I'd say!
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I want to pass Shay a big, sharp axe.
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This is just the right chapter to come at this point in the story, - a moment of calm before the next storm blows in. We're seeing all these characters start to settle into the situation and make the bonds they'll need to deal with what comes next...
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Confessions of a guilty man
Stephen commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Confessions of a guilty man
This news comes as surprise. Like Asher and Michael, I didn't expect big problems with the upcoming trial. I wasn't even sure that it would be a feature in the story. Now it looks like it will be a big ordeal, -a hotshot lawyer and a biased judge! Meanwhile, our guys have only had a kiss or two. It doesn't seem fair, but life isn't, is it? -
This is a nice start to a big adventure, with complicated characters that already have my interest. All different sorts, and emotions and motivations to match. I like it.
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I am relieved that the whole matter with Jardines has been resolved, at least from George's perspective. Jardines can now accept his role as less shameful, and might forgive himself and stop letting his past eat away at him. It's amazing how time and thoughtful consideration can change one's viewpoint. But then again, a good fuck can do that too, even though it may hurt just a little in this case.
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Now that's a cliffhanger! This chapter, so full of love and the wonder of the first time for both boys, had us lulled into almost a stupor. Then Jesse goes missing. This space station is quite a dangerous place. Did the nasty matron collar him?
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Chapter 41 - Nothing Is As It Seems
Stephen commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 41 - Nothing Is As It Seems
This is all very strange. Who's that servant boy? Is Uzzi really in that box, or is it just another illusion? I'm puzzled but relieved that there's still hope that he's still alive...somewhere. -
A quick ending to the story, but not the one that the secret order had in mind. Off to Argentina the nasty cowards go, just like so many Nazis before them. At least Jason and the poor monk can now rest easy. Thanks for the captivating story!
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It's down to the wire now. Geraldine is such a wicked bitch. She wants to see Jason's dead body. Time for the boys to defend themselves. Such suspense!
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Dmitri is such a horny old goat! I credit him for at least being honest about it though. He's not even apologetic at all. A shameless old goat. What has Gunni got himself into? In this environment he's certain to lose his innocence, -it happens to everyone. I'm ready for a chapter from Gunni's POV.
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Tension. I almost feel sorry for Mr. Lambert. Too late for him though. His regret makes him human, but that's not enough. He's like the fourth monk of 1000 years back. To little too late.
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Alec is clever, -very clever. But will that be enough?
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Lambert is having second thoughts? I hope so, since there's not much time left. Maybe Alec can shut his computer down.
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This scene is so real. It's a family going through a sudden loss, and then a new baby, and all the details that a funeral involves. Little Maryanne's choosy about who she likes, isn't she? It's amazing how babies are like that. I already feel attached to these people.
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Damned truck drivers! We have a family dynamic about to change big time. And it's just begun.
