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The trio and Sonic are fearless. I was half expecting something to pop out of the labyrinth. There's no way I'd have nerves like any one of those four. This chapter seems to have awakened something in Sonic. Really all four of them seem to be growing up. You say there's a surprise coming? -Imagine that!
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What a way to end this chapter! So we'll all just go nuts until we know who this pathological crazy person is...
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Chapter 1 An Anniversary Gift
Stephen commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1 An Anniversary Gift
I've never heard about the green and yellow acronym, -that's fascinating. Thanks for sharing your experience with your family. Since every family is unique we know that there are no real generalities, but it's encouraging to see that you came away better from the experience. -
I like this chapter, despite it's brevity. I'm happy Trey wants to move forward and have Mark meet his family. That's a big thing. Carrot cake? I love it and make a killer carrot cake. You've planted the seed here and I may just need to make one.
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This is an interesting story. Weird? Yes, but I like your style but I don't understand the terminology & abbreviations. A little background info would be nice. Hiro is sweet, and devoted to our bugman.
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Margret is so consumed by her bitterness that she's become an angry ball of dust inside. Her soul is dead. She is to be pitied, since those kind of people won't change and there's probably no hope for her. I worry about the harm she does to the people around her though, how far will she go to poison the lives of everybody else?
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I love a good mystery, and this one has a ghost too. Perfect for the season. I have suspicions now, but won't say what they are until chapter 2.
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That last scene was too funny, - loved it!
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The Buckle? Isn't that where Eli works? Hmmm...so much for not seeing him again.
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Has Talleyrand met his match? I'm excited that you've included him in your story. He isn't really a challenge for Granger, but Talleyrand was a remarkable survivor for his day. The fact that even today he is spoken of at all, tells us he was unique. This could be fun...
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Remorse, Guilt...There's nothing quite like them, - not if you have a heart. I'm glad this tale ended happily, I couldn't help but feel Peter's pain.
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This is a beautiful story about devotion and love,- and obligation. Hypocrisy and bias figure large, as well as does sacrifice. Oppression is something we are all familiar with, and how it can shape our lives and maybe even ruin them. Mostly it's about love though, courage, and family. Love rules!
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Things don't settle down for long around the ranch, do they? Jesse's scumbag father is stirring up trouble, - for money. The slimeball is going to fight dirty too, since that's his MO. Feel free to kill that one off if you want, with my complete approval!
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At the end of the last chapter, I thought there was a 50/50 chance something would happen with the guard after that meeting. Yes, no, yes, no, absolutely not! Then you surprised me. I like that.
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This reminds me of Hyacinth Bucket. I love a good parody.
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I read this expecting the worst, and it all ends well. Thanks for the pleasant surprise.
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Sad? -Yes, but there's love and hope enough for them to persevere. Of course, time will tell. I'm curious to see where and when Alexi and Josh meet up again.
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Simon=besotted. Poor guy! That first scene is priceless, cruel, and hilarious.
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I'm hoping these Oberion water frogs are a worthy gift for Parliament. Are you sure they'll measure up to the politicians' standards? Will they be horrible enough? If the frogs are just slimy, then they'll hardly be noticed, - even if it's poisonous slime.
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Things can be better the second time around, can't they? Davey's really settling into his past at this point.
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Hmm, - a kidnapping! I can think of four suspects right away. I feel sad for Dylan, since he's been living as a victim for so long. He's just begun to get back his confidence and I hate to think how this will affect him. Of course, this may be a test, and serve to make him stronger. We'll see, won't we?
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I'm enjoying this interlude with Winkler and Jacobs. It's been easy to relegate Winkler to the background and take him for granted, because that's essentially his function as a servant. I've always been curious to know more. His name is Joshua, and now we know more about why he's been so devoted to Grainger. He's also younger than I'd imagined,- only 18. Jacob's wife in New York shouldn't be too much of a problem if there are no children. Well, I'll wait and see.
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I like this haynin creature. I have a picture of a gentle sasquatch. Our two travelers have suddenly acknowledged their love, and that's sweet, - not that I didn't see it coming...
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Quite a welcome to the new planet! I find it strange that John and the girls would leave Karl alone to fend off the mother wolf. That would be hard to forgive. The whole helpless female routine won't do. I hope something eats those two useless girls soon.
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I wanted to scream -'Danger Noah, don't listen to the kids at work! NO NO NO!' ...And get your parking space back.
