Aditus
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Hi Cole, and welcome back! *waves*Sometimes the weather matches my feelings and I used this to accentuate Jonah's mood and situation. I'm glad it worked for you too. Thank you, Cole.
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I waited in front of the departure gate, shifting my weight from one foot to the other. Of course Chris was nowhere in sight. We had to work on that communication problem of ours when it came to airports. I could barely keep myself from hopping around, because it was so freezing cold. Damn! Fuck! Just when I was ready to grab a cab, I heard someone calling my name. "Jonah! Hey, Jonah… over here!" Michael was waving at me with what looked like a grass green beanie. I would take that in a minute
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Oh how I understand you! I spent hours in different shops to try out keyboards. On top of being a writer I'm also a gamer and I wanted a keyboard for both. I hate switching keyboards. The same with my mouse. It's dying but I can't let it go. I'm the only one who can use it (Speedy), because it's so fast. And yes I schlepp around both devices almost all the time. But even if you would take that away from me, I would write. With pen and paper or even on my phone.
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Well, Matteo is Rick trained, maybe that helped. Thanks, Lisa.
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Jonah is always honest. He writes his journal down to every embarrassing detail, he told Ren what happened with Eric, why he hates cheating and that he always runs when it gets too much for him. He told Sandro exactly where he stands before they start their relationship and of course he tells him what really happened at the restaurant.Thank you Lisa!
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Maybe he's afraid? Thinks if he does the deed once he'd get addicted?Thanks, Lisa!
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Chapter 6 Double Solitaire
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Double Solitaire
The moment I read how stressed out Kendall was by his job, plus what we already know (missing Michael, shoving said Michael in the back of his mind) and the should I/should I not with Chet, I knew something like this would come. Bring overexcited Michael into the game and boom. So I guess either it was my inner Kendall, or it was a good setting up for their confrontation. I like the chapter. -
Happy Birthday!
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Please excuse that I answer your review so late. I'm glad you're on Jonah's side and you understand him and his motives. Also thank you so much for your nice words, AzPolarBear55. There is no greater praise than reading you can literally feel the emotion or the dialog is true to life.
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I thank you, Gary for your ever thoughtful comments. And again I'm glad you trust me, although reading the story thread... You ask who does Jonah run from...and who he runs towards. Maybe Jonah is done running? And as that he is the villain now, he never pretended to be anyone else, but himself. He has been honest with his history, with his flaws. Ren as well as Sandro knew exactly what/who they got. Well, three more chapters to go.
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And again I agree with you on both points, Dave. Thank you, I really appreciate your comments.
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I'm glad you found RRS eventually and got hooked. This story focuses mainly on the different characters and their interplay, so it maybe seem contrived at some points. Still, I often think if I would use what I hear in the news or my family in one of my story, the readers would think exactly that: unrealistic/contrived.Thank you, Ozymandias for your honest comment.
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Is it bad that I like that you don't have a clue? *evil*I'm glad you like my story so much that you read the chapter at 4:00 am. I'm honored. Thank you for the nice review, Val!
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Thank you Lit! To be honest, I didn't like this chapter and have been a little neglectful in certain parts, but Zombie and Cole didn't let me get away with it.Nobody can probably punish Ren as much as he's doing it himself. I love it that you're so fiercely on his side. *hug*
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It's enough. I'm happy you like my story. Thank you!
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Earlier this week US confectionery giant Hershey's declared legal war on its British counterpart...
Aditus commented on MarcW's blog entry in Marc's Blog
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I can't imagine how it felt to hear his mother doesn't want to see him, even though she knows the situation he lives in. Maybe she is too ill, still it must be devastating. It's almost a miracle he still is a good kid.
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It was about time, but somehow the other prompts didn't work for me. Maybe I've been too wrapped up with RRS. And yes, I hope there will be something to continue this little tale next week.Coldplay...since last week I'm listening to them again. Thanks, Carlos!
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Twice the Night Before Christmas
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Twice the Night Before Christmas
I'm glad you found the story, Cannd. After you liked the first, I actually if you read this or not. I know you like vampires. Should I PM you next time? -
Thank you Cannd! I just thought it wasn't important anymore as Lox found something more important, love.
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Wow! You feel almost sorry for Ren? I'm good hahahaThank you, Tim and no Michael wouldn't be that cruel.
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Thank you, Irri! You noticed...!
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Not so short this time, huh?
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Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Ace in the Hole
It's always difficult to get the supposed 'straight' guy seeing his gay best friend as more than a friend. Most of the times it's implausible and sometimes even hilarious. Not with your story though. By describing in detail how special their friendship was right from the start, it became believable. Well done, Gary. A very emotional chapter.
