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Well I guess it's depending on how you feel about the hair/braid: is it a memento or just garbage you'd throw away.But I think we can agree on Ren being very intense in everything he does. LOL Thank you, Lisa!
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I guess he would if he could. He needs to make a decision.Thank you, Dave!
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Good! That's exactly how Ren is and how he feels. I'm so glad you're seeing him like this. Thanks, Gary.
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...and it isn't over yet. There are moments I feel really bad. Thanks, Irri.
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Yes, it's funny but I thought the same. I played the scenario 'what if Ren had heard those words' in my head, but somehow it wasn't right, hence the things I ended up writing.Well, I need Michael for the sequel... Lisa always sends me flavored coffee for my b-day, Holiday Delight is one of my favorite. Thanks for the review, Val.
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I don't think Jonah would have brought Sandro to his conversation with Ren. He offered him to fly home with him, so he wouldn't feel excluded, because Sandro is part of Jonah's life now.Yep, next chapter is called 'Decisions, Decisions'. I can't say this often enough, Lit, but I really appreciate your opinion and thoughts. Thank you.
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It might be an occupational problem, but when I see long, scraggly beards I automatically see millions of germs living on spilled drinks and food...and skin oil, just ew... A nice trimmed, short beard is okay.
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I thought get finally the beach towel off. And it's snowing here, just sayin...
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Chapter 7 Changing the Rules
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Changing the Rules
First things first: I always loved the expression 'he ended up ass over teakettle', I don't know why, maybe because it always makes me smile when I try to picture it. I like how you handle Kendall's character. He is in love with his straight bff for years, can't stand it any longer and cuts off all ties but then not only realizes but owns up to the fact that he needs to at least salvage their friendship. (with Chet's help - I so want to read his story) Argh! Cliffie! Bad Gary. -
Hi Cole, and welcome back! *waves*Sometimes the weather matches my feelings and I used this to accentuate Jonah's mood and situation. I'm glad it worked for you too. Thank you, Cole.
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I waited in front of the departure gate, shifting my weight from one foot to the other. Of course Chris was nowhere in sight. We had to work on that communication problem of ours when it came to airports. I could barely keep myself from hopping around, because it was so freezing cold. Damn! Fuck! Just when I was ready to grab a cab, I heard someone calling my name. "Jonah! Hey, Jonah… over here!" Michael was waving at me with what looked like a grass green beanie. I would take that in a minute
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Oh how I understand you! I spent hours in different shops to try out keyboards. On top of being a writer I'm also a gamer and I wanted a keyboard for both. I hate switching keyboards. The same with my mouse. It's dying but I can't let it go. I'm the only one who can use it (Speedy), because it's so fast. And yes I schlepp around both devices almost all the time. But even if you would take that away from me, I would write. With pen and paper or even on my phone.
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Well, Matteo is Rick trained, maybe that helped. Thanks, Lisa.
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Jonah is always honest. He writes his journal down to every embarrassing detail, he told Ren what happened with Eric, why he hates cheating and that he always runs when it gets too much for him. He told Sandro exactly where he stands before they start their relationship and of course he tells him what really happened at the restaurant.Thank you Lisa!
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Maybe he's afraid? Thinks if he does the deed once he'd get addicted?Thanks, Lisa!
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Chapter 6 Double Solitaire
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Double Solitaire
The moment I read how stressed out Kendall was by his job, plus what we already know (missing Michael, shoving said Michael in the back of his mind) and the should I/should I not with Chet, I knew something like this would come. Bring overexcited Michael into the game and boom. So I guess either it was my inner Kendall, or it was a good setting up for their confrontation. I like the chapter. -
Happy Birthday!
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Please excuse that I answer your review so late. I'm glad you're on Jonah's side and you understand him and his motives. Also thank you so much for your nice words, AzPolarBear55. There is no greater praise than reading you can literally feel the emotion or the dialog is true to life.
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I thank you, Gary for your ever thoughtful comments. And again I'm glad you trust me, although reading the story thread... You ask who does Jonah run from...and who he runs towards. Maybe Jonah is done running? And as that he is the villain now, he never pretended to be anyone else, but himself. He has been honest with his history, with his flaws. Ren as well as Sandro knew exactly what/who they got. Well, three more chapters to go.
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And again I agree with you on both points, Dave. Thank you, I really appreciate your comments.
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I'm glad you found RRS eventually and got hooked. This story focuses mainly on the different characters and their interplay, so it maybe seem contrived at some points. Still, I often think if I would use what I hear in the news or my family in one of my story, the readers would think exactly that: unrealistic/contrived.Thank you, Ozymandias for your honest comment.
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Is it bad that I like that you don't have a clue? *evil*I'm glad you like my story so much that you read the chapter at 4:00 am. I'm honored. Thank you for the nice review, Val!
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Thank you Lit! To be honest, I didn't like this chapter and have been a little neglectful in certain parts, but Zombie and Cole didn't let me get away with it.Nobody can probably punish Ren as much as he's doing it himself. I love it that you're so fiercely on his side. *hug*
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It's enough. I'm happy you like my story. Thank you!
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Earlier this week US confectionery giant Hershey's declared legal war on its British counterpart...
Aditus commented on MarcW's blog entry in Marc's Blog
There's Swiss and German chocolate and there's that.
