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    Week 1

    Aditus commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Week 1

    Poetry-writing frenzy! I like that. Especially after reading those three, Val. I'm a greedy, greedy person.
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    9. The only words I ever heard from you, about tomorrow is, I quote: ‘No chance! Annoying shit!’, and ‘Wasting of my time!’ Quotation ending here. I wonder why, all of a sudden, coming over then. Why asking all those questions? Tell me! Why? Hmm Curiosity? Fat chance! No way! I know you better my friend. Ha! You heard that little rumor. Right? The magic name. I knew it! Jo-nah! So predictable.
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    You like it! That's all I need to know, Lit. Thank you so much. *hug*
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    Spring words Tulip, daffodil, daisy, and snowdrop, All flowers are words when nature speaks spring. Thrushes and blackbirds nest in the treetop, The morning starts early, now that they sing. Strong words With you I can hear the colors tumult, and you help me to see the blackbird’s song. With you this will never be difficult, you just take my hand and I'm staying strong.
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    I didn't know. Thank you for telling me! I'm trying to join in and will also share mine if all goes well. Look out for 'A fool's thoughts'.
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    I'm so glad I got to read the chapter before I'm on Easter vacation. You managed to surprise me. Again. In most stories mothers are easily forgiven, despite what they did, just because they are mothers. From my own experience I know it is almost always expected. I don't agree. Kendall's mother made mistakes, but she earned forgivness, because in the end she did the right thing. It's good Michael saw this. Again. Loved it. Happy Easter, Gary!
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    As I am team Rob: I like protective Rob. It suits him. And you made me think about underwear... This was a light and funny chapter, whatever mall-problems you had, I'd say you solved them just fine.
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    Wow, this all went rather fast. Funny is, I'm totally okay with it. Obviously you did some good reasoning, because usually I always think that's way too fast, that can't really happen. Not this time, though. I can't wait for them meeting Michael and Kendall. *grin*
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    Happy Easter, Gary! It seems Roman studied Martin a lot to know what he needed to do to get him to go out with him. Let's hope for a dinner prompt soon.
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    Roman II #388

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Roman II #388

    Haha, I have a role model for Mason, lol. She loves to stir up sh... er stuff. Thank you for your nice words, Gary.
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    Martin II #373

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Martin II #373

    Maybe you're meeting him at my bar someday and do just that. I bet Alan would be grateful. You only understand regret when you have felt it. Thank you, Gary. After reading your review I want to revisit Alan...after he met you.Thank you, Gary. This meant a lot to me.
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    Roman I #371

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Roman I #371

    Hi, Gary! I'm glad to have you on board. As Martin said, that's not who he is. I don't think I could write someone who'd accepted that offer, to be honest. Thanks for your review!
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    Arron still needs a lot of reassurance and Chet is willing to give it to him. Although Chet has been hurt by Ian, I have the feeling that Arron suffered more because of what Dwayne did. Maybe that's just how he is. Good he has Chat now. Beautiful chapter, Gary.
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    Gym Bunny

    Aditus commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Gym Bunny

    Scary indeed. I miss the music.
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    Maybe Martin's boss knows what loneliness means? You just gave me a story idea... Thank you, Lisa! Dinner, yes, if all goes well I'll be writing that prompt story in Italy.
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    LOL, thanks, Val. Yep, a problem (embarrassment) shared is a problem halved, at least so they say. Let's see what Friday's prompts bring.
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    Thank you, Lit! I bought a colomba, a traditional Italian Easter cake, saw some guys in bunny costumes, and thought why not write an early Easter prompt story. I'm glad you liked it. Now we wait for Wayne...
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    That's scary indeed. Now I can't wait to read yours.
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    “You honestly think I would wear something like that?” Martin stared at the garment draped over his boss’ arm and shuddered. “I do.“ “Well, I’m not. Ask Jessa. She loves stuff like this.” Martin flicked some invisible lint from his dark tan slacks, pulled at the short sleeves of his tight, white, V-neck tee-shirt, and took in a deep breath. He still wasn’t able to shake this little nervousness before he had to go out on the stage, even after all these years. “I already did. She agreed to take
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    Yep. 405 's looking good.
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    That was remarkable self-reflection on Arron's side. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad he did, it shows how important Chet became to him. He was able to push his fears aside. And Chet? He was sleeping? I couldn't have slept after that. Good thing Arron insisted to clear everything up the very evening and was able to wake him eventually.
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    They are still very new, even though they moved fast and thought they had it all figured out. Arron's reaction showed this clearly. You can't build genuine trust in such a short time. It really looked bad. Would Chet have reacted the same way, if Dwayne had been at Arron's house? Who knows? No really, if you've been hurt bad, you always remember this and try to avoid that it ever happens again at all cost, that's not a conscious decision. I understand Arron. So, my trust is in you, Gary. Go fix this! ASAP! Lol.
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    Awww...Only Ian probably still being at Chet's let's me not fully enjoying this chapter. I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. Arron's trust is still a bit fragile I think...God's I'm nervous. Lol I'm an idiot, hahaha. Great chapter, Gary.
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    I'm working on the purple eyes...
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    Thank you, Renee, for featuring my poem.
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