Aditus
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Somewhere near Agrigento, Sicily I stopped typing a while ago when Rick decided to show off his new home and take the scenic route. There were just too many bumpy cross-country roads and my fingers kept hitting the wrong keys. It was lovely though, and the warm air that came in through the windows smelled of summer. I didn’t notice how tired I was until I leaned back, closed my eyes and dreamed of a cool, dark room with a large, comfortable bed and smooth sheets wrapped around me. Hopefully th
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The restaurant with the magnifying glass ceiling sounded awesome. I wish something like this would really exist. I like that Abel III and Dennis want to get to know each other better. It sounds like they are heading into a serious direction. Very good chapter.
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They weren't marooned but they came because their own planet suffered from overpopulation. Too many children for a race that lived that long. Nature had to find a solution and she found one.
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Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
Aditus commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
They need an additional man in engineering? Do we already know just the right one for the job? And not only for this job? -
Free will. Yep. It's a step in the right direction. Still, I will not.
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Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
Aditus commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
I find it fascinating that they can adjust the psychic shield fit into to the outer hull of the ship. I still have problems to imagine how the shield works. The ship's hull is a physical form, the shield is some kind of energy. Why can the hull material 'hide' the psychic shield? Is it visible for the Guardian? -
Don't be. It was my fault for not checking one last time.Thank you for all your help and yes you do that! You know which song I mean.
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Really? Was it good?Thank you Cole! Don't you want to shake some sense into Jonah sometimes?
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Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Ah, you're connecting the prompts with the last sentence! Are you going to do that again next time? Nice touch! And of course as the others said. -
Story Review Featured Story: Joined By Blood By Renee Stevens
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
As did I, but I could so read it again. -
Story Review Featured Story: Joined By Blood By Renee Stevens
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Gah! I have two stories to update, one Halloween story to write and an antho story to plan! And then there is work... You're so mean Cia! -
Jesus! Is that it? I'm extremely shocked.
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Happy Birthday, Dark!
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Happy Birthday, Sui!!!
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Could the world be like this? I really hope so. Something positive and shiny on a dreary day. Thank you Val.
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Okay, I hope I got the last Mark now. It's Eric. I'm really sorry for the mix up. I'm glad you like the story anyway. Thank you for your comment.
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Thank you nostic! I hope it's a good memory. Not everyone is interested in names. Do you know the meaning of your name? Next chapter coming up next weekend.
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Yes I really have to apologize for the Mark/Eric screw-up. I changed the names and I knew this would happen one day. Thank you for reading the chapter anyway. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.
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Thank you Irri! Don't you think they are a little immature. Jeez, they drive me crazy, but they insisted. I'm just the writer. And sorry for the Mark/Eric screw-up. I so hoped it wouldn't happen, but gah! it did. Note to self: Never post a chapter when you're in a hurry.
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Ha! You made my day also. Getting such a comment is motivating and encouraging. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thank you!
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He's so clueless he annoys me and I want to enlighten him but he insists on writing him like this, telling all the embarrassing details. Why? Thank you for your comment and for feeling with Ren. I'm sure he appreciates it.
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Whoa! The sleeping pills where kinda a shock. Is Miles really that desperate? I hadn't guessed. So Steve and Kurt? Hmmm This chapter really is in the middle of everything...room for speculations...or I read the next one.
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I felt almost as good as Jay must have felt. This must have been liberating. Very nice.
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This is so awkwardly realistic you want to touch it cautiously, so that nothing happens. Did this make sense? Anyway, I'm glad there's more.
