Aditus
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Sequel, ma'am yes ma'am. Another member of the Michael fan club. I like 'little diva'. Ren has still some work to do, and Jonah some thinking. Thank you for your thoughts and comment!
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Yes I feel this urge from time to time too, lol, but you don't slap your MC, he could get even more difficult. I'm glad you like the story, Sui. Thank you for your comment.
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Oh yes, and we're not even done yet. Much more to come.I can see I have a fan club for Michael here, lol. Oh my... Thank you Cole! You helped a lot. *hug*
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Mad Hatter? Yay! You're the first who got the whole mad hatter red shoes thing! Who would be Cheshire Cat then?We will see...about mad hatter. I hope the next chapter will be out next weekend. Thank you Dave!
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I'm glad you loved it. I can see you like pissing off jerks; just like Jonah. If you like Michael and his 'plans', I'm pretty sure you'll like next chapter too. Thank you!
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Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (I)
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 323 Can I talk to you? (I)
I'm group Rob. Everyone needs a Rob every now and then to get things going, although we would never say that out loud. All this tip-toeing around...jeez. Okay, so this went well. What's next? -
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Sicily, Italy I breathed in, ahhh... Waking up on a sunny morning to the scent of freshly made espresso was a nice way to start the day, even if it was accompanied by Rick's hyper chipper voice. Tugging my braid he sing-songed, "Good morning, Rapunzel, did you sleep well?" I opened my eyes to see the menace sitting beside me on the bed, waving a little white cup right under my nose. "Good morning, Lucifer. A cup? Where's your trident?" I took the coffee out of his hand before he spilled i
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Oh wow. I don't like my own gym anymore. I want a gym with a view! Great idea Cole! I'm warming up to Mr. Peterson. Wes seems to be very persistent, good for him/them. Chad and Roy are on the way me thinks. Great chapter!
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Whatever you need Jo Ann. Time, a hug, positive thoughts, a talk, you name it.
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Glad you got around to this. Jonah is too nice. He could have said something, but he didn't. Instead he was busy with being 'a good friend'. Maybe it was an eyeopener for him?Thank you for reading and commenting, Carlos.
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Should I put in a warning? Do not read in public places or while drinking or eating? LOLI'm glad you liked it and I write as fast as I can. Thanks for your comment, nostic!
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Thank you avidreader! Yep, clueless is his middle name atm. Jonah has kind of a tunnel view also, together with his impulsiveness, well...
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Like Tim said, but it's so much fun to watch. I agree with you though, Jonah has some growing up to do.Thank you for reading and commenting, Dave.
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So, we have a Michael Fan Club here, me thinks. I'm glad you like him. I think we can manage the friend thing.I have to admit I had fun writing the bathroom scene and inventing fitting lyrics. Yes, that's exactly it. It's an immature game he plays, but it's so much fun to watch. Thank you for your comment. Next chapter next weekend, hopefully.
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Ren can't help himself with being bossy, huh?Sometimes friends have a slightly more objective perspective, though. I'm just saying. And yes, smug and I-know-it-all pisses Jonah off, majorly. Thank you, Tim!
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Is there a Jonah somewhere inside of you maybe? LOL Because that's exactly what Jonah hates. Ren seems to push all the right buttons. Thank you, Tim!
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Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Your characterizations are spot on. I almost said everything we need for our recipe of disaster, don't you think? It seems I can't get away from the theme.Thanks again, I love you raving and ranting at my characters. -
LOL. Aren't we usually? Too hard on ourselves I mean. I have to admit it was fun writing the door slamming. Thank you, Tim!
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A sequel...hmm. Spontaneously a title jumped up in my mind: Warm Winter SocksThank you Nlaudenslager, now I have this idea in my head. And of course, thank you for telling me your thoughts.
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I aim to please. I've been told secondary characters are very important for a story. I'm glad you like him. He's one of my favorite too.Thank you for your interest in RRS, Irri. I love your comments.
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Well, YOU said I should expand the scene a little. I'm glad you approve.Thank you for your comment, Cole!
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Okay, I like Kendra some more now. But thinking a coworker of mine would call my mother! I would kill her, really! Jeez. LOL So Roy is moody? Hadn't thought. But I'm glad they worked it out. Great chapter.
