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Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
I had so much fun reading this! Very good. I'm perfectly fine with the teasing, AS LONG AS THERE IS A SEQUEL!!!! -
Please write. IMO there is no way how one should write, aside from using correct grammar and such. Writing is a personal way to express yourself, YOURSELF, not someone you think you should be. If you are a shy country boy so what? If you don't like to write explicit sex scenes, then don't do it, it will make your story awkward. Write what is genuinely you, and readers will notice and appreciate it.
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In the car between Catania and Agrigento The car ride from Catania to Agrigento would take at least two hours. It meant Rick, Matteo, and I were stuck together in a confined space without any chance of escaping their questions, short of jumping out of the car at a convenient red light. So when Rick turned to me, determination showing in his eyes, I lifted my laptop aka Zach, almost knocking him in the face in the process. “I know you have questions, but I can’t talk about it. Not yet, okay? I’
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The Guardian is an interesing entity. Everytime I think I know everything there is you come up with something new.
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Aww, come on. Now I have lots of crazy ideas, what's in the letter. Very nice chapter, Cole. I especially liked how the Peterson problem worked out. This feels good somehow, although I get the feeling this isn't over yet.
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So my imagination is running wild. Either you continue, or I do. In my head. Tease.
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“The darkest places in hell are reserved for those who maintain their neutrality in times of moral crisis” Dante Alighieri And while we're at it: “The path to paradise begins in hell.” Dante Alighieri and of course you can always delete this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkNsEH1GD7Q
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Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Maybe Chris is so over the moon, he doesn't get what he's doing to Jonah. Anyway, Jonah might finally wake up. Thank you Lisa! -
Thank you Lisa! At least he knows, he's being stupid and he's working on it. So you think it was Ren?
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LOL. I thought Nick was telling Ben how wonderful and gorgeous and witty and hot and... let's call him Vincent was all the time. Vincent is Ben's friend/colleague and Nick admires him from a far. Every time Ben tells Nick to come with him, get to know him more he balks. Ben had enough of this e voila, you just read the result. About the after...maybe one day I write something about a party where some of my prompt characters meet and maybe solve their issues. Thanks Tim. And I'm waiting...*taps foot on floor impatiently*
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Thank you, Sara. I'm so glad you like my story. Thank you for your kind words. I try to update every weekend.
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Creeping out the object of desire....hahahaha Okay do you think he's doing that on purpose? I'm learning new words while writing this: flummoxed, floundering, flabbergasted...You're an attentive reader. Thanks, Irri.
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Make it so.
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What is your favorite supernatural creature to read about?
Aditus replied to sexyinaf's topic in The Lounge
Vampires. No glitter. And Elves. -
So not fair! But we appreciate your efforts. Some day you'll get them.
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I'm glad you're feeling this way as it is what I had in mind. I learned that sometimes you have to listen to the other side, even if you don't want to. I suddenly didn't want Mark to be the plain bad guy in this story. Thank you Tim.
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Nothing comes between a protective sister and her brother, let me tell you this, lol. Sometimes you have to draw the line, haha. Thanks Tim.
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Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Taking the first line as last line also was such a great idea! I love it. I like the story also, it was funny. A little less information on the main character would have tightened the plot even more. I'm looking forward to reading more prompt stories from you now. -
Chapters will get longer the further we go. And yes, I have to make sure you'll come back. Right? Bumpy, yes definitely. Thank you for reading and commenting Dave.
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Thank you Cole! You gotta love Zach.
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I was told every story needs someone to hate, I can see Eric and Chris do that for you. Thank you for your kind words, and we'll see about Chris and Eric.
