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  1. Aditus

    Word War II

    Okay, I hope I got the last Mark now. It's Eric. I'm really sorry for the mix up. I'm glad you like the story anyway. Thank you for your comment.
  2. Aditus

    Word War II

    Thank you nostic! I hope it's a good memory. Not everyone is interested in names. Do you know the meaning of your name? Next chapter coming up next weekend.
  3. Aditus

    Word War II

    Yes I really have to apologize for the Mark/Eric screw-up. I changed the names and I knew this would happen one day. Thank you for reading the chapter anyway. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.
  4. Aditus

    Word War II

    Thank you Irri! Don't you think they are a little immature. Jeez, they drive me crazy, but they insisted. I'm just the writer. And sorry for the Mark/Eric screw-up. I so hoped it wouldn't happen, but gah! it did. Note to self: Never post a chapter when you're in a hurry.
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    Word War II

    Ha! You made my day also. Getting such a comment is motivating and encouraging. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thank you!
  6. Aditus

    Word War II

    He's so clueless he annoys me and I want to enlighten him but he insists on writing him like this, telling all the embarrassing details. Why? Thank you for your comment and for feeling with Ren. I'm sure he appreciates it.
  7. Aditus

    Miles At Home

    Whoa! The sleeping pills where kinda a shock. Is Miles really that desperate? I hadn't guessed. So Steve and Kurt? Hmmm This chapter really is in the middle of everything...room for speculations...or I read the next one.
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    Jay's Sister

    I felt almost as good as Jay must have felt. This must have been liberating. Very nice.
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    A Ride Home

    This is so awkwardly realistic you want to touch it cautiously, so that nothing happens. Did this make sense? Anyway, I'm glad there's more.
  10. Happy Birthday!
  11. I had so much fun reading this! Very good. I'm perfectly fine with the teasing, AS LONG AS THERE IS A SEQUEL!!!!
  12. Please write. IMO there is no way how one should write, aside from using correct grammar and such. Writing is a personal way to express yourself, YOURSELF, not someone you think you should be. If you are a shy country boy so what? If you don't like to write explicit sex scenes, then don't do it, it will make your story awkward. Write what is genuinely you, and readers will notice and appreciate it.
  13. Aditus

    Word War II

    In the car between Catania and Agrigento The car ride from Catania to Agrigento would take at least two hours. It meant Rick, Matteo, and I were stuck together in a confined space without any chance of escaping their questions, short of jumping out of the car at a convenient red light. So when Rick turned to me, determination showing in his eyes, I lifted my laptop aka Zach, almost knocking him in the face in the process. “I know you have questions, but I can’t talk about it. Not yet, okay? I’
  14. The Guardian is an interesing entity. Everytime I think I know everything there is you come up with something new.
  15. Aditus

    Visiting

    Aww, come on. Now I have lots of crazy ideas, what's in the letter. Very nice chapter, Cole. I especially liked how the Peterson problem worked out. This feels good somehow, although I get the feeling this isn't over yet.
  16. Aditus

    Baltimore 1970

    So my imagination is running wild. Either you continue, or I do. In my head. Tease.
  17. “The darkest places in hell are reserved for those who maintain their neutrality in times of moral crisis” Dante Alighieri And while we're at it: “The path to paradise begins in hell.” Dante Alighieri and of course you can always delete this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkNsEH1GD7Q
  18. Maybe Chris is so over the moon, he doesn't get what he's doing to Jonah. Anyway, Jonah might finally wake up. Thank you Lisa!
  19. Aditus

    Running light

    Thank you Lisa! At least he knows, he's being stupid and he's working on it. So you think it was Ren?
  20. Aditus

    Or Colleagues

    LOL. I thought Nick was telling Ben how wonderful and gorgeous and witty and hot and... let's call him Vincent was all the time. Vincent is Ben's friend/colleague and Nick admires him from a far. Every time Ben tells Nick to come with him, get to know him more he balks. Ben had enough of this e voila, you just read the result. About the after...maybe one day I write something about a party where some of my prompt characters meet and maybe solve their issues. Thanks Tim. And I'm waiting...*taps foot on floor impatiently*
  21. Aditus

    Prologue

    Now I'm curious and want to know more.
  22. Aditus

    Running light

    Thank you, Sara. I'm so glad you like my story. Thank you for your kind words. I try to update every weekend.
  23. Aditus

    Running light

    Creeping out the object of desire....hahahaha Okay do you think he's doing that on purpose? I'm learning new words while writing this: flummoxed, floundering, flabbergasted...You're an attentive reader. Thanks, Irri.
  24. Make it so.
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