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So not fair! But we appreciate your efforts. Some day you'll get them.
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I'm glad you're feeling this way as it is what I had in mind. I learned that sometimes you have to listen to the other side, even if you don't want to. I suddenly didn't want Mark to be the plain bad guy in this story. Thank you Tim.
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Nothing comes between a protective sister and her brother, let me tell you this, lol. Sometimes you have to draw the line, haha. Thanks Tim.
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Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Taking the first line as last line also was such a great idea! I love it. I like the story also, it was funny. A little less information on the main character would have tightened the plot even more. I'm looking forward to reading more prompt stories from you now. -
Chapters will get longer the further we go. And yes, I have to make sure you'll come back. Right? Bumpy, yes definitely. Thank you for reading and commenting Dave.
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Thank you Cole! You gotta love Zach.
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I was told every story needs someone to hate, I can see Eric and Chris do that for you. Thank you for your kind words, and we'll see about Chris and Eric.
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Hahahaha. Perfect! Write chapter two? Thank you Timothy.
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On the plane to Catania, Sicily Judging by how much I’d already learned about the love life of the guy who sat in the row in front of me – I don’t want to talk about it - or about the slut daughter of my seat-neighbor’s best friend – what could you expect knowing her mother - it was good I could ‘talk’ to Zach. Quietly. At least as long as I sat on board a plane heading to Catania, Sicily. I was going to visit my cousin Rick. I’m lucky the family loves me, even if I am known as the one who com
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I almost feel as if I could find my way through the 'silverspin'. I really like your detailed desciption, just right, never too much.
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The 'Nature' piece was very good. Summer?
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Well that was fun. This is more a crash course in the Art of Being Gay than anything else, though. Poor Peterson. I'm so curious what else you're doing with him.
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Thank you Renee! As I said before, I have to work on my characters running away all the time. I'm counting on that boat/ship prompt. 'The Mutt' is calling to me and I have no time for it.
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But it's almost the same longitude. Right? I'm glad you loved them. Thank you for telling me.
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It has been fun. Thank YOU for the idea.
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Well done! Fall and winter. Summer and spring are too far away. Right?
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Good! Thank you Lisa. You know I can't resist a challenge.
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Done! Thank you! That's 40 kg Collie-German-Shepard energy.
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That's exactly what I wanted to do. Cool!
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Fall a brief interlude of Four Perspectives
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Fall a brief interlude of Four Perspectives
It's part of my series'Four Perspectives'. Four anthology stories tell an ongoing story from the perspective of four different people. Well, that sounds more complicated then it is. LOL Thank you for telling me your thoughts, now I know I did something right. -
Thank you for your kind, encouraging words, dughlas! I'm glad you're enjoying my work,
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Nature Leaves sail down, yellow dog storms past at breakneck speed the mouse slips away. Urban Ice crystals sparkle, Reflecting the thousand lights, of cars racing past.
