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  1. Aditus
    As I said before, I love the prompts. I could never come up with so many different ideas every week. Oh and don't forget the ship/rowing boat prompt.
  2. Aditus
    Cat! Flip-flops?
  3. Aditus
    Thank you Sly. Let's find a better man for Will, maybe in the next prompt story.
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    And loincloths.
  5. Aditus
    This is quite the power Abel III has. I have to admit I read this with mixed feelings, thinking someone really could manipulate others like he can. And it must be tempting too, if only to play a prank on someone. Great chapter!
  6. Aditus
    And a spoon. Happy Birthday, Ron!
  7. Aditus
    Um, you could have a point here. And the soup is really good, tell me when you have tried it.I'm glad you love the story, thank you for telling me.
  8. Aditus
    Thank you for your thoughts, Irri. Yes it wasn't only caddish (new word for me btw. but cowardly of Eric. And I imagine Ren walking down the stairs muttering words my mother wouldn't approve of.I needed a way to show that Jonah wanted to really prove he was okay with Eric and Chris, that's why he didn't say anything to their somewhat rude behavior. Should I start a discussion thread?
  9. Aditus
    Next is double-chocolate pudding. I'm glad you want more.
  10. Aditus
    I'm glad you're warming up to Jonah. He's one of my favorite characters.In a multi-chapter story a good back story is important to understand better why characters act like they do. Thank you for your encouraging comment, dughlas.
  11. Aditus
    I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I just couldn't wait to post the next chapter, the comments were so encouraging. I just have to work faster. Yes I love Zach.
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    First Impression

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in First Impression

    Your characterizations were spot on. I think in hindsight Jonah is a little embarrassed how he acted. I'm glad you want more.
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    Prologue

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Prologue

    Do you talk to your cars too? I do sometimes. I'm glad the story piqued your curiosity and you want read more. Thank you for your comment, dughlas.
  14. Aditus
    'neural net in the oceans provided by the ancient genus of sharks' What a great idea! I love it. A great chapter which raises many questions.
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    Company's Coming

    Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Company's Coming

    So why is Justin suddenly allowed to vist his father? I still don't like Peterson. And what's with the English teacher? You're keeping us on our toes.
  16. Aditus
    Peterson is weird...hmm. I guess every story needs a Peterson, so that we have to wonder what's up with that guy. Seeing how you write this story: Is he a spontaneous idee? Do you already know what's coming next or are you still figuring it out? Good there's another chapter!
  17. Aditus
    I had lot's of fun with this chapter and walked down the memory lane with the club scene. I ended up on the stage, do I have to say more? I really like Justin.
  18. Aditus
    Dear Zach. The next morning I woke up and didn’t feel all that well. After the initial toast to Eric and Chris, I may have chased the champagne with something stronger, several times obviously. At least the queasy feeling in my stomach strongly suggested that plus the fact that I was fumbling around in the dark for a shirt because the mere thought of turning the light on made my head hurt. People often drink champagne when they have something special to celebrate. Why? I just don’t get all the
  19. Aditus
    I love 'Full Circle' and 'Road Trip'. And I have motorcycles in my mind, for both of them. Maybe I'll try another series. And I'll meet you somewhere on the road.
  20. Aditus
    You should definitely write the second part. Thank you for your comment and speedy edit.
  21. Aditus
    But this way you can make your own (happy?) ending. Thank you for your comment, Suvitar.
  22. Aditus
    This is how stories start for me. A slice of life, a scene, a short film and I ask myself what happened? Did they break up? will he come back? etc.Oh yes please, a rowing boat in the middle of a lake maybe and they are forced to talk this out. Thank you for your comment, Wayne.
  23. Aditus
    But I got you thinking about it. Right? Thank you for your comment, Carlos.
  24. Aditus
    Prompt 356 – Creative Tag – First Line Making a Scene “Since when do I have to tell you everything?” Peter rose and grabbed his messenger bag that was lying beside him on the table. Will jumped from the small wrought-iron chair. All of a sudden it had gotten very silent in the small café, only the hissing of the coffee maker and the clattering of dishes could be heard in the distance. He felt as if the eyes of everyone in the room were on them. “You don’t have to tell me everything, but m
  25. Aditus
    Thank you. Now I feel double honored you liked mine.
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