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    Most of the times I think so also. Thank you for reading and reviewing. And thanks for the *hug*
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    Thank YOU for reading!
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    Thank you Gary, for every understanding word you wrote. It's really appreciated.
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    Thank you Percy. Writing this helped me to sort through my emotions. I've been uncertain to submit the story and I'm glad it was so well received.
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    Thank you for your kind words, Cole. Writing this helped, as did reading all your comments.You encouraged me to post it, I'm glad.
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    Yes, that's why I wrote the warning. Not everybody likes to read this kind of story.The reason for their grudge felt unimportant in the face of what was happening. And I know he will be in touch because he said: I see a core of steel and I fear what will happen when it shatters. If it does, I guess then it’s our turn. Thank you for your comment, Timothy.
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    I wrote a whole paragraph about the reason for their disagreement, but when I read it again it seemed to be superfluous. It didn't matter anymore, there were more important things now. The fight and its reasons were forgotten.Thank you for your comment, Bill.
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    Emergence

    Aditus commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Emergence

    I never liked the name Harold. Sorry to all the Harolds out there. The demolition of the house was a strong symbol. Something horrible and ugly ended, it even made space for something new and beautiful. Great story Valkyrie.
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    Story

    Aditus commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Story

    It's been a wonderful family tradition, but what I really liked was that Tyler and Ean made something good out of the bad news and started their own tree.
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    Bright Thunder

    Aditus commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Bright Thunder

    I have to admit it's been a while since I read something of yours. Your writing got even better. WOW! To have such a relationship...I was the fly on the wall, I saw it all live and in colors, I heard the thunder, felt the rain, smelled the food, but above all I saw love.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I always read the werewolf stories. The fight was exciting, and I agree with Jo Ann: Bill has quite the nose. Maybe I should work on mine some more? Great story Wayne. Thank you.
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    Poem One

    Aditus commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One

    Playing with oppositness, aren't we? Searching... Did you find an answer? My favorite line (besides the title): This egocentric devil I am Honestly Believes He’s the most altruistic angel of them all. Great work.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I expected all kind of things when I read the title, but not that you would take the antho theme so literally! I wonder how long their respective scars were at the end of the story. Great story. Thank you.
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    Thank you for your comment Wayne. I still can't believe I said that, though.
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    Thank YOU for reading. It feels a little like unburden on other's shoulders. It helps.
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    He's amazing, isn't he? Because he is a real person. I'm like you, I always deal poorly with death. This time I tried writing.Thank you for your comment, Cia.
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    This one of the honest things I ever wrote. I'm glad you felt that. Thank you for your comment, Jo Ann.
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    Thank you Lisa! For reading, listening and encouraging me. All the time. xxx
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    Thank you Sasha! Without you there wouldn't have been a story. *snuffle*
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    Into the Fire

    Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Into the Fire

    You already know that I really like this story. Now that I see it all polished, I like it even more. It's interesting to see a part of history I don't know much about. Well I guess I'm learning more when you keep this up.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Chapter 1

    It's the ever present question: What if...? What if they had met at the front? What if they had both survived? What if Owen could have told Todd he loved him? Questions, which can never be answered, which makes them powerful, so powerful they can destroy a life. When I visited Verdun and I saw all those white crosses, I practically felt the lost chances, the unanswered questions, the destroyed hope, the ruined lifes that rested there and elsewhere. You tied all this to a gripping story, made it even more clear, showed what sacrifices have been made.
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    I'll start....hmmm....at the end this time. And when the weather is too nice to stay inside, the dogs, my laptop and me go out. Together.
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    In Sickness and in Health He sat beside her bed, holding her hand. She was thin, too thin. Her skin was yellow, as were the whites of her eyes, a telltale sign of liver failure. Sometimes she would fall asleep for several minutes, and then, when she woke, she had this faraway look, as if seeing something nobody else in the room could see. She was forty years old and dying. According to her doctors it would happen in the next few days. Nothing could be done; the cancer had come back. *** I ha
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    The narrator struggles with the impending death of a dear friend and colleague.
  25. Aditus
    Happy birthday, Conner!
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