Aditus
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Ren can't help himself with being bossy, huh?Sometimes friends have a slightly more objective perspective, though. I'm just saying. And yes, smug and I-know-it-all pisses Jonah off, majorly. Thank you, Tim!
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Is there a Jonah somewhere inside of you maybe? LOL Because that's exactly what Jonah hates. Ren seems to push all the right buttons. Thank you, Tim!
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Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Breakfast and French Onion Soup
Your characterizations are spot on. I almost said everything we need for our recipe of disaster, don't you think? It seems I can't get away from the theme.Thanks again, I love you raving and ranting at my characters. -
LOL. Aren't we usually? Too hard on ourselves I mean. I have to admit it was fun writing the door slamming. Thank you, Tim!
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A sequel...hmm. Spontaneously a title jumped up in my mind: Warm Winter SocksThank you Nlaudenslager, now I have this idea in my head. And of course, thank you for telling me your thoughts.
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I aim to please. I've been told secondary characters are very important for a story. I'm glad you like him. He's one of my favorite too.Thank you for your interest in RRS, Irri. I love your comments.
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Well, YOU said I should expand the scene a little. I'm glad you approve.Thank you for your comment, Cole!
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Okay, I like Kendra some more now. But thinking a coworker of mine would call my mother! I would kill her, really! Jeez. LOL So Roy is moody? Hadn't thought. But I'm glad they worked it out. Great chapter.
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Somewhere near Agrigento, Sicily I stopped typing a while ago when Rick decided to show off his new home and take the scenic route. There were just too many bumpy cross-country roads and my fingers kept hitting the wrong keys. It was lovely though, and the warm air that came in through the windows smelled of summer. I didn’t notice how tired I was until I leaned back, closed my eyes and dreamed of a cool, dark room with a large, comfortable bed and smooth sheets wrapped around me. Hopefully th
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The restaurant with the magnifying glass ceiling sounded awesome. I wish something like this would really exist. I like that Abel III and Dennis want to get to know each other better. It sounds like they are heading into a serious direction. Very good chapter.
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They weren't marooned but they came because their own planet suffered from overpopulation. Too many children for a race that lived that long. Nature had to find a solution and she found one.
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Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
Aditus commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview
They need an additional man in engineering? Do we already know just the right one for the job? And not only for this job? -
Free will. Yep. It's a step in the right direction. Still, I will not.
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Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
Aditus commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 12 In Transit, Part 2
I find it fascinating that they can adjust the psychic shield fit into to the outer hull of the ship. I still have problems to imagine how the shield works. The ship's hull is a physical form, the shield is some kind of energy. Why can the hull material 'hide' the psychic shield? Is it visible for the Guardian? -
Don't be. It was my fault for not checking one last time.Thank you for all your help and yes you do that! You know which song I mean.
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Really? Was it good?Thank you Cole! Don't you want to shake some sense into Jonah sometimes?
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Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 356 Since when do I have to tell you everything?
Ah, you're connecting the prompts with the last sentence! Are you going to do that again next time? Nice touch! And of course as the others said. -
Story Review Featured Story: Joined By Blood By Renee Stevens
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
As did I, but I could so read it again. -
Story Review Featured Story: Joined By Blood By Renee Stevens
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Gah! I have two stories to update, one Halloween story to write and an antho story to plan! And then there is work... You're so mean Cia! -
Jesus! Is that it? I'm extremely shocked.
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Happy Birthday, Dark!
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Happy Birthday, Sui!!!
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Could the world be like this? I really hope so. Something positive and shiny on a dreary day. Thank you Val.
