Don't make him laugh silly, you just can't laugh after your appendix has been removed, it f** hurts, a lot. We should try to make him smile though.
btw it's almost 11:00 am, it's sunny and I think I go for a run.
Me thinks zombies are jittery little creatures, afraid of cemeteries, afraid of dolls, afraid of looking into the mirror... You need a really big pumpkin this year to drive away the baddies .
I liked how you solved the problem of revealing what had happened in the past.With the confession of the boy's father everything went as well as it could after such a terrible event. Oh and the sentencing on Halloween, lol an apt date indeed. Well done. Thanks!
I loved the scene in the family room, when every one got poked, it was funny. Murdering a kid never is funny though, and I really want to know more. I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
Wow, I'm still shocked about what Agent Davis did. I don't know if it is just me, but I was caught off guard and I think a warning somewhere would have been helpful.
I like the dynamic between the protagonists, and the scientific explanation of so-called magical things and occurrences.
I'll be looking forward for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing.
To write this introduction was a very good idea. At first the concept of this story is a little overwhelming, but with the introduction we can go back and read certain passages again or seek out further information.
I love 'Death Note', its art and the story. I'm very curious now about the first chapter.