Aditus
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I want a magic snow globe.
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You might be right, on both points. And now I can't get rid of the image of Kavan throwing a Christmas tree at the former Christmas tree.
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Nah. The former Christmas Tree might make an appearance on Christmas Day? I hope, but work is killing me.
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Then I better start typing.
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Well, there will be some twists.....
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That's exactly I wanted to convey. Thank you, centex. A fitting chapter filled with answers but more questions arose. Well, we have not yet reached the final chapters, there has to be something left.
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Okay, I'm sorry I didn't make this clear enough.
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He was a three to four years old vampire, not human. Maybe he has been turned when he was twenty -four, then he would haven been 27 or older in human years.
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What? I readily admit I don't do always my math writing my stories, but how did you come up with this calculation?
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I really love this part of your comment. Thank you, Parker. Indeed, we're even going to hop over the pond.
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Reality bites. Now he needs to go get his Gideon back. There's a long, long trail... Thank you, Terry!
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Oh yeah, the last word hasn't been spoken. Caspian expects they find danger. Does he have a crystal ball? To you too, scrubber, and thank you for your many comments and sharing your thoughts.
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My pleasure. The Make Up Sex Fantastic for These Two Haha, aren't you a little hasty? The Next Chapter on Christmas Day , Such a Lovely Gift I'll do my best. Thank you for your enthusiastic comment, Johnny.
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Even though a heavy blanket covered me from head to toe, I was cold; my entire body shook with shivers. According to Doc, vampires can’t become sick, so why did I have the flu? Cautiously, I peeled one eye open. Ivory-colored curtains with old rose accents. I’d seen enough. Definitely not my room. “How are you feeling?” Konstantin. Forcing myself to sit up, I looked around. “Shitty.” My sire put the book he’d been reading on the nightstand. “Doc said this was to be expected.” He g
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How could I miss this? Are you supposed to shake fictional characters?
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The Children At Your Door
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in The Children At Your Door
Thank you, Parker! The Ballade is a form I still have to learn to master, yours is impressive in message and execution IMHO. -
Did you watch Lord of the Rings? I love the part where Sam talks about the Shire and eating strawberries with cream when Frodo was ready to give up.
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I love playing with words, it's one of my favourite past times. I'm glad I could make you laugh about such a serious topic.
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Thank you, and welcome!
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Magic is in the air! PT#95 Sam got a magical advent calendar from gran Lulu. So far, the chocolate and marzipan were delicious but magical? What does the calendar’s magic do to Sam? PT#96 Looking for the box with Christmas decorations in the attic, your protagonist pushes cardboard boxes around. Suddenly something strange drops on the floor. After a closer examination, it turns out to be a mechanical arm. After playing around with it for a while it suddenly attaches itself to them, replacing the biological body part. Ooops.
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Now, these are some totally new ideas! As always, I can't/won't comment on this, but I'm thrilled at the perspectives you opened. Next chapter will reveal what really happened.
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This made me laugh out loud and wake the cats.
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Perfect!
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Thank you, Dan. The oily blood has to be Caspian.
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Well, no one has been harmed, yet, in contrary, he was even able to save people. Could he have handled it better? Certainly, but without him Gideon had met his second death. As long as he is able to slide past catastrophes, I fear he won't behave according to your rules. We have a saying where I live, loosely translated it means as long as it went well.... It's not as if I wouldn't understand you, but as @Onim said, Thank goodness our favorite little hard-headed Kav was ready and willing to jump in to help.
