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@Geemeedee not only is she too weak, she’s also too much of a coward. absolutely. If Konstantin had died, I might’ve stopped reading. Lucky me. Why can’t they all just leave? Konstantin can “support” her from afar. I still don’t get it. What would she do without them? She would be killed. I think Konstantin fears to would be understood as his fault - he didn't her support enough. Thank's for sharing for your thoughts with me/us, Gee.
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@CincyKris I think the exact wording of the blood oath will be important. You're right. Kavan needs to figure out a way that mother can be killed without hurting Konstantin. Good idea. Thank you for reading and commenting on chapter five, Kris.
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I totally agree. Only only to chop her head off would be too easy. She has to suffer! I have to think of something.... Thank you, Terry. I love bloodsong complications. I mean the word, not for me. Ugh.
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Now what--Is the Night Clan ended? Well, a few are still left, including Mother. What will Konstantin do? Is he the new leader? That would be the logical consequence BUT, there's still Mother. I don't think she'll agree. I do not want a bloodsong. I want a real mate without the bloodsong complications. Yeah, all this blood drinking and stuff. A agree. Thank you, scrubber.
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I was a shadow melder—or a shadow dancer, which I thought sounded even cooler without understanding the difference at the time. I knew it was a very rare gift. I could hide in the dark, and even vampires had trouble finding me. When Konstantin suggested exploring the city and the surrounding areas and testing out my gift and hunting, I balked at first. As the clan had a donor pool, I had shied away from feeding elsewhere before, but he was adamant about me learning to be independent of clan reso
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I can all too well relate to the feeling of being wordless. One way out for me is music. Sometimes listening to lyrics and their music, any music, helps me to find the right words again, to get rid of being overwhelmed by the need of packing too much in too few words. Good article.
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Let me tell you what I did. When I read music, harmony and some such, I thought this obviously has to be read aloud not only in my head, so I took my phone and went to a place where I could do that. While I was reading your poem I thought it probably sounds all wrong or at least not as intended, with a German accent and a French tinge. This is why I won't/can't comment on the musical aspect of your poem, other than I very much liked it. I would love to be able to enjoy similar poems or any other experimental poetry from your pen, as always.
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You'll see next week why absolutely love the general theme this week. Perfect.
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Yeah, I thought so, but I wanted to be sure. I hate to disappoint my readers. Your comments were very encouraging. You brought the story back on my radar, thank you, Dan.
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Yes, and I still didn't finish this story. It's on the list though. Usually I finish my stories, but at the time I started this one I was still writing another and had to learn about myself that I can't write two stories at the same time. The long-term-hold really bugs me.
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Nope, to keep it exciting...did it work?
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I find this very relatable. This is great praise for this author. There might a autobiographic touch here, including the shirt change.
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Love is patient… Perfect. Thank you for reading the entire series, Dan, I'm glas you liked the conclusion.
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Great! Mission accomplished.
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I'm glad you feel so, thank you for reading the series and for sharing your thoughts, Dan.
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I love you can feel it simmering.
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Thank you, Dan, this story belongs to the first stories I wrote for GA, I'm glad it still gets this reaction.
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@Dr. John NYC Love the shadow merging/dancing gift Thank you, I'm glad. This gift certainly gives new insight into the title of the story and Kavan's (presumed) future profession. Absolutely. it will be interesting to see how parallel the gifts are across the three stories. I'm not familiar with their 'shadow' concept' so you have to tell me all about your research. What I can tell you, is that this story was inspired by multiple Pen&Paper games and the Dungeon & Dragons universe. One of my characters will appear in this story and maybe have their own story eventually. In this series everything 'shadow' will be used to hide (I think). Thank you for this great comment.
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I always thought it's the most fitting name for a cat. I think the need triggered it. The Tavern was an interesting way to introduce the fact that this universe not strictly for vampires only. Thank you! I'm sure I'll play with setting every now and again. Nope definitely not for vampires only. I hope to include this series in a world called Species so there might be stories of many other paranormal species for example. Thank you for following the story, Terry, even though 'paranormal' isn't usually your thing.
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Good catch! Thank you for your comment, VBlew. LOL, nope.
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Featured Story: Boundaries: An Old West Tale
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Well, I usually don't read Westerns, only Gary's, this one is special, and I couldn't wait to finally be able to read it. Now I'm thinking about vampire Westerns....nah.- 13 comments
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I'm glad you think so. I hope you understand I can't answer your very good questions.
