Aditus
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I really enjoyed this story Val, including the evil twist. Nicely done.
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Fabulous Pride Dale scrolled through the news. Bored out of his skull, he drank three coffees and had origamied himself through most of the Pride flyers scattered all over the table and produced half a dozen rainbow-colored boats in different sizes. He frowned at articles he’d normally ignored. ‘Yankees are in serious hot water after loss to Red Sox’. Who the fuck cared about the fucking Yankees? ‘So-and-so changed their hair color from platinum blond to whatever and is sooooo happy with th
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Thank you, lomax. I wanted a nice non kitschy ending.
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Yep, my crystal ball would explode.... I was very proud of Zane. I'm glad you liked the story.
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Thank you, for this comment, drsawzall, I'm happy you liked my story.
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Perseverate - Word of the Day - Mon Jun 14, 2021
Aditus commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Thank you so much, Gary. There are always people who tell you how you should do certain things, but there is nothing more personal than your sexuality. You can ask for opinions, but the decision what to do , when it's time to be you, is always your own. People should respect this. *rant over* Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Gary.
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Your detailed description let me see everything. I'm so glad Craig met James. It looks like Madge was right. You never know... Even if you decide not to continue this story, it makes my thoughts fly with what if.... I really enjoyed this story.
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Your honest descriptions of Zane’s nerves and tendency to plan made him endearing and relatable. Thank you, this means a lot to me. ...but such is the world we live in. Even in 2021, yes. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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If it had been a creep, Zane would have gone home, I'm pretty sure. Maybe the colleague found a good job at an open minded ad agency. Sometimes you don't want to fight, but try again at another place, and maybe do a little research before. Thank you for your comment, Tim.
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He was pretty lucky meeting Fenix. I would go to the restaurant with you an buy you dinner. Thank you for your help.
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Until he met Fenix... Thank you for your comment, Chris.
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Thank you. I'm not much of a planner, outside my job, but I know people who always have a plan, a second plan, and a contingency plan on top.... It's very interesting. You're right, sometimes they talk themselves out of even a good thing. This time it worked for Zane.
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By All Accounts Zane’s sweaty hands clasped the steering wheel in a white-knuckled death grip. Following Google's directions, he flipped the signal, slowed down, and turned right. Three months ago, a brain-splitting headache had forced him to leave the highway and seek out the nearest town with a store that sold painkillers. Today though, he was on the small, meandering road to Warrington deliberately. He left the highway because— He could do this. After a while, the hardware shop with
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Zane is a methodical person. He’s great at making plans for work and for his life. When he discovers a rainbow sticker in the lower left corner of a window, he plans to visit a gay bar, for the very first time in his life.
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885 it is. Thank you, Wayne.
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I'm glad the 'I read it' is gone. I like the 'check it out'. If I read a description and people whose opinion I regard left this reaction, I will definitely check the story out.
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The Carthera stories were among the first stories I read on GA and one reason more to finally join. And yup, I loved the snake too.
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So glad, you liked the forgotten three. April ended, but there will be another April next year, and poems will swarm again. Thank you for reading my poems and sharing your thoughts, Parker.
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Thank you, Val. We had fun right?
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You won't believe how much lukewarm coffee I drank until I parted from Gino. I'm glad you understood.
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Haha, I can't wish for more.Thank you!
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It makes me happy you enjoyed week 3. Don't get me started with berries, they equal summer.
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Can you keep a secret? I love writing food poems. One day I'm going to write a whole set.
