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  1. Aditus
    I like your translation and interpretation, very much. I'm sorry for your loss, AC.
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    Day 1

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 1

    I absolutely agree with you, Gary. It's the condensed version of an hours-long rant, sometimes it becomes a poem.
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    Day 1

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 1

    Thank you, chris. I am, to put it mildly, very angry.
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    Day 1

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 1

    It was a spur of the moment production. I'm glad you like it.
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    Day 1

    Aditus posted new chapter in Foolproofed

    Day 1 This year, the Joker hides his smile behind a mask, dancing on a tomb, he points his scepter via Zoom at those who failed us! 2,82 million deaths are devastating.
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    Foolproofed

    Aditus posted a story in Poetry

    It’s that time of the year: National Poetry Writing Month is on! For those who don’t know the rules, the task is to write a new poem for each day of the month of April.
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    I almost made it on time... *Leans back* I can do this.
  8. Aditus
    I knew when you kinda mentioned Love On The Rocks.
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    K'
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    I'm with Val.
  11. Aditus
    I knew that.
  12. Aditus
    I'm trying to picture an Easter Grinch.
  13. Aditus
    That's because I'm super sneaky and managed to be featured twice.*pats self*
  14. Aditus
    All right....whichever name she suggests, I'll say I'm with Val.
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    Beautiful.
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    Chapter 15 Larkspur

    Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 15 Larkspur

    Well, I'd say everything sounds promising. Knowing you, there will be twists.
  18. Aditus
    It feels like rope pulling, back and forth and back and forth. Boone doesn't allow himself to hope. That can be destructive and discouraging. I'm curious how/if they'll get out of this.
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    Chapter 13 Polecat

    Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 Polecat

    Yep… he was playing with fire, but wasn’t about to complain at being held by the man of his dreams,...I purposefully didn't quote the 'even'. We do have a reason for the punch now. It's good, because I always felt it was an out of character move.
  20. Aditus
    Very entertaining.
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    I'm going to read the next chapter with a smile on my face.
  22. Aditus
    When Coy broke the surface, he came up gasping and laughing, pushing his shaggy mane back from his face with both arms. The sight was too much for Boone, and he forced himself to look away. The little devil on my left shoulder asks," Did Coy that on purpose? Maybe unconsciously?"
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    As others already said, they needed the down time, to heal and to think. For me the most important sentences were: Boone was feeling better than he had in a long time, and not only body-wise. Will, once always a presence in their lives, had become a distant shadow. Will was a constant thorn in their relationship. I hope it will be easier for Coy to consider / dare to explore possibilities.
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    We have a saying: Von hinten durch die Brust ins Auge. Roughly translated it would mean: (Shot) From behind, through the chest into the eye. Sometimes a subtle approach is more beneficial than a direct. The sheriff is a wise man, some things take times to settle.
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    Chapter 8 Salvation

    Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Salvation

    The sheriff knew Coy would follow, I'm sure. Am I happy? I am. Almost dying may help to see a new perspective .
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