Aditus
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Thank you, Val for your help and comment. They might never meet again but I imagine this conversation will have a Butterfly effect on their lives.
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Thank you, Jeffrey! At first I was afraid everyone would guess the saying after having read a few words and it would spoil the story. I'm glad it caught you by surprise.
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Sometimes you can feel it if someone will be a good listener. Talking to a stranger can help to sort out your thoughts. I had someone special in mind, when I wrote Andy. Thank you for your comment, Tim.
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Thank you! ...the man is fully comfortable and accepting of his sexual nature... As Andy said: Because you're not dead. They might meet again and discuss sexy guys who knows, sitting on their bench.
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Exactly! The end of their relationship is painful now, ultimately it might be better for him though.Thank you, dughlas!
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I agree, plus there has to be trust for a relationship to work. Thank you, Carlos!
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Thank you, Gary! I like that you're happy for him. His relationship was doomed to failure, as there was no trust.
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Andy sat on her bench by the lion fountain. Lifting her face to the rising sun, she enjoyed the tranquility and peace of the early morning, before the other joggers crowded the park. Then she heard crunching gravel, she opened her eyes and squinted. She was no longer alone. She’d already seen the man on her second round, near the butterfly garden. Andy hoped he would pass her bench. No such luck. After hesitating a moment, he sat down at a distance with an ungainly thud. With his head bo
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A brief encounter at the park and a saying becomes true to life.
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Wonderful, Gary. I met your mother. I love the contradiction: a simply complicated man As always, I enjoyed your poetry very much.
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Extraneous - Word of the Day - Wed Jun 24, 2020
Aditus commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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I enjoyed the story very much. It was very entertaining, I couldn't stop until I finished the last chapter.
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You briefly played with hope, then you threw me back into the cold, wild sea.To be forgotten by others is bad, but lose myself, that's true horror. Well done.
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You handled a delicate topic perfectly.
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A fascinating tale, in fact, I read it twice afraid I missed something in the first round.
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classic author June Classic Author: Chasing the Shadows by KC
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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*sigh*
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Good morning: A perfect day. Doc confirmed blood work results are great, a very nice review for one of my poems and the sun is out. .
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classic author June Classic Author: Chasing the Shadows by KC
Aditus commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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A favorite word. My characters love to peruse stuff. Don't ask...
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@MCVT Thank you! ~A.
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My pleasure.It's a great story. I know others will enjoy it as much as I did.
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They always make me smile, and now I have a name.
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Yup, it's one of my favorite starting points for anthology stories too, lol. Looking forward to the next one then.
