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Of course I want you to continue. I would love to see Trans kid or a kid unsure of their gender identity added to the story. And, I know I mentioned it before and you ignored this, but some conflict of faith would be nice to see. Adding a character who is Atheist, Jew, Muslim or some other religion or maybe just another Christian denomination and not so keen to going to the Curries' church every Sunday. Another possibility may be a conflict within the Curries' church. Maybe a new priest that is not so keen on keeping same-sex couples in their congregation and will start to add LGBT hate to his or her sermons. Would be interesting to see how the highly religious Curries will react to that. And, I think a conflict between partners would be interesting to see. Maybe even an ugly divorce that would lead one of the original characters returning back to the hotel, possibly even with his own kids. And, please, pretty please, more travelling and trips. That was one of the main reasons I got hooked on Castaway Hotel and I miss it so much in the new books. NO! PLEASE NO! Sorry for screaming here, but I really hate stories with too many narrators. It gets confusing too quickly not only for writer, but for readers too. And I definitely can't imagine this working for such a complex story Castaway Hotel is. Either keep to one narrator or write it in third person. And maybe writing the next Castaway Hotel book in third person is not that bad idea. It will get Bill a chance to write about more characters at once without the narrating feeling so cluttered.

Actually, UK as it is now, is a mumbled mix of Imperial and metric measures. They did not fully accept metric system and with the upcomming Brexit, I doubt they will anytime soon. Actually, I am little worried that they may do a backstep and increase their use of Imperial measures once again, now that they will not have the pressure from Brussel. But even now, the speed limits and lenghts on roads, for example, are in miles, which causes quite a headache to all continental drivers in UK. Maybe even bigger than the left-hand driving LOL Anyway, I got used to use ConvertPad app on my Android phones and tablets, which makes the conversions quite easy. I am pretty sure you can find similar app for iPhone and iPad as well. It really made my life easier 😉

And once again I have to point out a discrepancy, but this time quite big. You wrote in the first chapter that the boys were ten years old when Cindy and Josh left, now you are writing it was ten years since then. That would make the boys 20 years old and that doesn't make sense with the context of the story, where the boys still were in High School. That's a big timeframe change all of a sudden.

A little too late to comment, but I just now found this story. I want to point out one small time issue in this chapter. You gave Josh 2013 Mustang, which he supposedly got for his 16th birthday. However, in the first chapter, you are writing that the day Josh and Cindy left was in 2005 and the boys were 10 that day. That would place Josh's 16th birthday to 2011. How could he get 2013 car unless his mom is time-traveller and bought it in future? I know, it's a small detail, but I am detailist and like to pick these things in stories 😉

That may be true for police. But I am not so sure about Don. First, he previously shown he is strongly against drugs and second, he also shown he has his own laws, not always corresponding with those written by lawmakers.

Yeah, drug raid is very likely scenario here, one that I actually expected since the very beginning, to be honest. And if that's the case, then Robbie is in even more trouble now than he was as a runaway kid. And it would only strain his relationship with Don the Conservative Asshole Actually, that may be problem, because there may not even be any suitable foster families in Coburg, so he'll be moved away to another town, being forced to change school and losing all his friends in the process. Still, IMO, even that turn of events would be better for Luke, especially now, that everyone in small and conservative Coburg will know his family's background.

I guess it's more emotional when you see the reactions on video than when you see them written

Also found this interesting Elders react to In a Heartbeat video. I must admit some of the reactions made me cry as much as the movie itself.

I must admit I had mixed feelings about the story at first, with those constant skipping from past in London to present Cobourg, which was really annoying and confusing to me. Then came that event with Fran and I really practically stopped reading. I eventually returned to reading and now caught up with what is posted, only to wish I didn't. And that's what concerns me most. Does that mean he was in coma for almost a year? Please, tell me that's not the case and this was another dream and Robbie was in coma only for a few hours and did not lose almost a year of his young life, especially now, when things started to look so well for him.

I fail to see how the behaviour of Tax to Regal at the beginning of his POV was an attitude. If a colleague behaved to me like Regal did to Tax, I would've acted similarly, maybe even worse BTW, Regal is starting to be my least favourite POV character in the whole series, beating Jayce from LLL in that position. May even soon be the first POV character I'll start to hate, unless his attitude will change any time soon. Anyway, great chapter. Looking forward to the date.

After reading the first chapter, I really hate Cory's father. He sort of remind me my Chemistry teacher and the way she was with her son, my classmate. At least Cory has loving mother, unlike my friend, whose father, while loving, was banned by court to come anywhere near him and she made sure that will be the case. To these days I don't know how she achieved that, probably bribed the judge, otherwise, I can't imagine any judge to give custody to her, instead of her ex-husband. But I would love to see her face when he moved away from her and went to live with his father the day of his 18th birthday, which ended her child welfare, from which, she did not use anything to the boy anyway. Serves her right for treating her son the way she did. Anyway, I love this story so far. The first chapter build for interesting story. I can't wait to read more.

I must admit I never got to reading Trials and Tribulations before, but after starting with this story, I've got to Trials and Tribulations too. But there's something that doesn't fit with the previous reviews. I am not American, but I always thought US high schools usually have football in fall and baseball in spring, so I guess at this time of story timeline, the football season is already over. With that said, I think when Brent mentioned friends from football team, he probably meant people that played football earlier that school term. So, unless JT is asked to be the one to do something to Sammy and Tony, and I doubt he will be, since Brent most likely already knows he lives with Andy and will most likely side with him, there's not much JT can do. But hopefully I am wrong and someone can stop Brent and whomever he'll get for that deed, from hurting Sammy and Tony badly. Otherwise, I like this story and I like the suspense as well as personal problems (especially the triangle Sammy got caught in ) you are building here and can't wait for more. Hopefully, unlike Trials and Tribulations, you will finish this one.

Oh man, I should have know you'll made it a Second Chances spin-off of sorts OK, so now, the last two of Chosen five are known. But if I remember Second Chances right, the school to which Jesse and Dylan went is in New Hampshire, which is on the other side of USA than LA is. So now, the big question is how will they meet each other? I can hardly wait for next chapter. This is great story with interesting twists. And definitely not as predictable as Riding Lessons series used to be most of the time (at least for me ), which I like either as it keeps me surprised.

This is great story. I am not usually into this paranormal stories and if it was not from author of Riding Lessons, I would have probably not even start to read it, but this on caught me just like Riding Lessons series, so I am hooked. I wonder what's the deal with the twins having these powers. And what is it with Dyson? Who killed his father? Will they try to go after Benji and Alex too? And is Oliver another of the Chosen five? And what is actually the whole deal with Chosen five? Oh, I guess I have to keep reading. But one thing you need to grasp, Andrew, is you British English. You just seem to throw British term here and there and it all sounds like American trying to speak British, instead of born Englishman Oliver is supposed to be. And sometimes, you are using terms that are simply wrong. Fro example: "Just queer little things, mainly around the stables." No Englishmen these days would use the word Queer the way you used it in this sentence, even less gay one. Throughout the years, even in British English, it worked out pretty much the same meaning it has in American English. Even with this small flaw, however, it still is enjoyable story.

I liked the story and was surprised with Drew figuring it all. I did not like, however, that you ended it with what may actually be called a cliffhanger. There surely is a need for sequel, this time with Brandon as main character, though I think it would be even better if you'll write it in third person, writing about more then one character, but the decision is yours what, if anything, you'll do as a sequel.