joann414
-
Posts
6,314 -
Joined
-
Last visited
Content Type
Forums
Stories
- Stories
- Story Series
- Story Worlds
- Story Collections
- Story Chapters
- Chapter Comments
- Story Reviews
- Story Comments
- Stories Edited
- Stories Beta'd
Blogs
Store
Help
Writing
Gallery
Events
Everything posted by joann414
-
Awww, I just found this and love it!
-
Wow, sounds like Sam has father issues. So glad the boys were found, but not before a night under the sky alone with each other:P Great chapter
-
Dum, duh, dum, dum.....looks like Corbin has carried things a little too far this time. I have to agree here. Fun is fun, but hurting someone sux. I think if an apology would have sufficed, if I were him, I would have done it instead of always trying to be Mr. Big Man on Campus I really hates that he drinks to the point of blackouts and I am sure that is doing nothing toward cultivating a relationship with Pete. They both need to spend a couple of days together sober and relaxed. Hopefully, the Dean will just slap his hands and make him write a retraction or an apology. I think Lee may have decided that he is not bi at all, but into men. "mostly Corbin". Great update, and can't wait for more
-
I am eally curious about the precsriptions. The totally opposite personalities of these two are making a great story. Can't wait for next chapter.
-
Dang, I don't know who I feel worse for, Soubi, Ryo, or the poor pregnant fiance. Someone needs to light the straw on Ryo's mom's broom while she is on it. I hope Soubi hangs in there and does not do anything stupid. Great chapter Lil
-
Looks as if they will get to know one another now by default. lol Daniel and Sam need to talk and get more things out in the open. Michael and Mark I think really get along well. Hopefully someone will know how to build a fire or have a candy bar in their pocket. Good job
-
Putting the Plan into Action
joann414 commented on FrenchCanadian's story chapter in Putting the Plan into Action
Stephen and Nathan have better nerves than I do. I would have probably turned white as a sheet when I saw Stephen if I were Nathan. Matt seems like a really good guy and I am glad he and Meghan hit it of. I still wonder a little about Matt and Stepeh tho. Great job -
Ummm, I love surprises Twenty years leaves a lot of things to make up for but they started off making up in the best way GReat chapter, and I can't wait to see why Patrick has to have a suit
-
I don't blame Steve on bit for being perturbed at Adam fo not telling him of his tather's involvement. But, it may be hard for him to talk about since it more or less caused the break up of his family. Can't wait to see what his father has to allow. BTW, pretty interesting that neither Adam nor Steve have a girlfriend Love this
-
I cannot believe that you just did that. Couldn't you have at least let them meet face to face before ending the story? Tess finding out first? What a dang cliffhanger:P This is a great series!
-
I loved the West's going over to his bestfriend's for Christmas. I can remember doing that as a teen. It meant so much. Well, West needs to decide what he is going to do about Sean.
-
Well, what is West going to do now? Come clean, or just let Ryan disappear from Sean? This should be interesting to see how things play out and how Sean reacts to all of it.
-
I am so glad that being around Ryo seems to have made a Soubi a stronger man because he is going to need a lot of strength to get him through this without giving into any of his vices. So sad for Ryo's brother, but I hope his father will let him go back to Soubi because the manipulative mother is all about keeping him with her. Hopefully, Kaito will keep Soubi focused and on the right track. Great writing Lil. Very emotional and believable. Good job girl
-
Wow, this is very interesting. Adam seems like a very determined investigator. I don't think he will got with a lot of assumation. Sorry I am out of "likes" because this is a great read.
-
Thank goodness for Richard and Bernard or Colton would be in a pickle. I feel so sorry for Colton. Can't imagine how he feels, leaving his mom and not having Jack. But he knows Jack is in some sort of trouble and will turn every stone looking for him, ummmm unless Richard becomes more than his rescuer:P Jack belongs to the lawman huh? His mother's heart has got to be hurting so bad. Great chapter Louis!
-
Wow, you talk about going above and beyond, Edward certainly did for Zune. Just for friendship? Don't know if I buy that, but I guess I will have to for now:P The police were taking their time weren't they? I certainly hope Edward is alright and once again, where the hell is Kev? You are doing a great job with this story:)))))
-
Well, seems all are more or less in trouble now, one way or another. Glad Danial and Michael talked though. I would like to see them become friends. Keep up the good work
-
Trying to hire someone to kill their lover. How stupid is that? Geldin was so worried about causing harm to Kenard that he did not even know right was right under his nose. This was a great story. Enjoyed it very much
-
Chapter 1 - A Beacon of Light
joann414 commented on Autumn Dream's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Beacon of Light
Decided to read this one first, and I loved it. Plan on reading more of you writing though. YOu sound a lot older than you actually are, meaning you write very well. Good job, and great story. -
Wow! I loved the battle and the dialogue between the two men, but the fact that Nysion and Tek found love as mortals was also a plus. Awesome read girl! So glad I found this today. Made for a better day! Btw, glad the lion got a good meal also.
-
I feel so sorry for the poor young man, but Tek seems to be trying to care for him, leaving the man completely in awe of him. I am having a hard time commenting because I am so engrossed in the damn story. Great writing and wonderful story. I keep saying that I know. lol
-
Umm, sorry, but I was enthralled reading the first chapter that I forgot to review or anything. I was just going to take a glance at this and I was finished with the second chapter before I knew it. What a mind gripping story. On to next chapter!
