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Chapter #4 - This Changes Everything (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #4 - This Changes Everything (Cont)
Kyle's mom, Michelle, is the best I love her too And your right, she may be a bit clueless on gay sex. This is only the first life lesson Jacob will learn, many more to come . As for Jacob's mom, Sarah, I suggest you wait and see. Will it come out next chapter? Or 10 chapters later? Hmmm About the hinting about bad things happening, vs, good things. I can't neither confirm, nor deny. Yes payphones still exist. Kyle's mother is a single parent a cell phone would be an extra cost, money is tight. As for Jacob not having one... his father has one, but he doesn't feel their responsible enough for one yet -
The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
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Chapter #4 Released! Take a look if you must, leave comments if you may, rate to keep my editors at bay..- 47 replies
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Chapter #4 - This Changes Everything (Cont)
podiumdavis posted new chapter in The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #4: This Changes Everything (Cont) Time line: Friday Jacob couldn’t help feeling somewhat lonely while he walked by his lonesome all the way home, he was already starting to miss Kyle very much; it was in his mind that their souls had somehow become connected into one solitary being, that it was just too unbearable for him to be away from Kyle for too long. He figured, at least within the complexity of his fragile mind that their shared dream,- 12 comments
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I'm in awe. It's very good, and lines right up with what I'm writing too. Wow.
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Good Witch Vs. "Evil" Witch (The Lies of the Wizard of Oz)
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The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
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Chapter #4 is on the way, already deep into Chapter #5 editing. Anyone looking forward to it? This place has been so quiet..- 47 replies
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Childs play... I used to compete in NES (old school console) in Street fighter, etc. Also used to be a HUGE quake 3 player, which is competitive to say the least. You can play it for free now on quakelive.com hehe. Anyway... As of current is Modern warfare, Batman Arkham city, Trine, Skyrim etc. I have over 100 titles on steam, plus a book full of older games. Quake 3 was my favorite, was really good too! PC Gamer all the way.
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This is amazing! This in so many ways supports my underlying message within my story J&K, eventually that is. But there's more to it than just that. hehe. I love this video! AWESOME!
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Chapter 6: Sue the Dinosaur
podiumdavis commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 6: Sue the Dinosaur
And now I'm caught up. Chapter #6 is quite good and getting better. I wonder the possibilities of Gary's character, what is he really after? Is he eventually going to give into what he desperately desires to do? Or is he going to be the man, he wishes, to just help boys. But I think there is more too Gary than what is being let on. Nemesis seems to have done a totally 360 turn and turned from hurting to helping, which is good. But where do his goals lead him? Is killing his objective, or is it mere cause to action? There is much murky water; one I hope comes to light in regards to their (partnership). Although I feel that it will lead to more, in regards to what Dike had said. Keep them coming -
The grim reality of the justice being dealt out, one who's been the tormentor, turned tormented in hell is quite an interesting one. I found it rather intriguing and well written, although a bit short for my liking... (This coming from someone who writes a book per chapter, take it as a grain of salt). I think the prospect for much more is definitely there, and I would encourage you to continue writing, (as I still need to read the next chapters). But my question to you would be, “Is the 12 year old boy his perception? Or was the boy portraying himself in that light to gain his attention?”
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I was literally blown away from the story, once I got my butt down to read it, I couldn't take my eyes off of it. The scene with Jordy being beaten up was very traumatic for me, (I thought please don't kill him!) The anger that Paul (the alternate ego) showed was very emotionally draining on me. The ending was great, and had I not read some of the other comments I would have never realized the multiple personality. A true work of art. ♥
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Chapter #1 - The Best Day Ever
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #1 - The Best Day Ever
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Chapter #3 - This Changes Everything
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #3 - This Changes Everything
You mean the third chapter right? The thing's that happened to Kyle comes out in Chapter #4, so the wait won't be too long. The dream's .... read the first block in the chapter. Yes the boy's do get along quite well, not so much bickering and the likes, which is good. -
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Chapter #3 Released!- 47 replies
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I thank you all for sharing. It's such a liberating experience to know, "I'm not the only one." It's good to know that we can share and support one another if need be. ♥
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What would a controlled cat even dream about?
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Would a controlled cat really want to talk about sleeping?
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Does sleep know how to control a talking cat?
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Do sleeping cats even know how to talk?
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What are wet cats even doing standing?
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So when did you first realize you were different? Being gay, transgendered, lesbian, bisexual. How did you first come to terms with this? Were you one to shun the idea, or did you just know who you were? What age did you finally realize you were who you were? I knew I was bi-sexual by the age of around 12. I kind of shunned the idea as a phase of self exploration. But as I grew into my later years; I came to realize that what I felt was who I was and there was no denying the facts of what I took preference to. I never told my father or mother, so no one basically knows in my family. That’s by person choice, not because I believe they will chastise me, but for my own comfort ability I suppose. Care to share your story?
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It is truly a sad day. Over the past few years we've lost so many greats. Michael Jackson, Amy Winehouse, and now Whitney. All a powerhouse in their own rights. It's a tragic loss for many fans, myself included. Forgive me if I missed any other great's that we've lost. But I consider these three people the top. We can all hope and pray though that this was not due to drugs. Although her past may say otherwise R.I.P WH
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Chapter #3 - This Changes Everything
podiumdavis posted new chapter in The Journey of Jacob and Kyle
The Journey of Jacob and Kyle Chapter #3: This Changes Everything Time line: Friday Jacob could feel the bitter cold trying to penetrate his skin like pins and needles. The air surrounding his body felt damp and cool to the touch, which caused his entire body to start shivering uncontrollably. Naturally his body reacted to these cold frigid temperatures by turning every part of his body into goose bumps. Considering that he didn’t have any idea of wher- 12 comments
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Chapter #2 - The Best Day Ever (Cont)
podiumdavis commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #2 - The Best Day Ever (Cont)
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Pet Peeve: Ignorant drunks that like to be your buddy. I just wanna punch them. LOL.
