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I like this story and the people, but I love the kits. It gives me something to look forward to on Wednesdays.
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A lovely story for the holiday.
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Chapter 24 Puppies and the Deacon Trust
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 24 Puppies and the Deacon Trust
Good chapter. I liked the baby explanation, simple and to the point. Many people don't realize that kids will easily accept such an explanation. I also would have loved to hear Alfy's explanation. -
Great chapter. Carson and Gina are both good additions. Looking forward to next Friday.
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I really enjoyed reading this and I like the dynamics between the characters. I look forward to reading more and learning the back stories.
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As always, a great chapter. Love these men.
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Awwwwwwwww!
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Chapter 23 - Mishief, and Playing Cupid
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Mishief, and Playing Cupid
Fun chapter and I'm pleased to have played a small part in it. Good instincts shown in how to handle the climbing incident. I definitely would have panicked. Look forward to more. -
Great chapter. It's interesting to see CJ's political views develop. Like those Chinese menus, one from Column A and two from Column B. Look forward to more. I could easily see CJ headed some day for the White House except I think he's too smart to want such an impossible, thankless job.
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Good start. A basic set-up that can go in many directions. I'll be interested in reading which way this goes.
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It's good to have CJ and company back. With some of the story focused on the election, it should be a very interesting ride and I sometimes found myself idly wondering what CJ would think of this event or that; now I'll find out. This forum is not the place for a political debate, but I am 100% in CJ's corner.
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Lots of curiosity about Kohen, where he came from and what he went through. Lakshou seems like a good person; I hope he is for Kohen's sake. Look forward to next Wednesday.
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Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
avidreadr commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
A wonderful chapter. It made fun out of moving - a horrible thing I've done about four times. I also want that house! I think I'm in love with Mrs. B. She is a wonderful character. I look forward to more.- 196 comments
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This story is a prime example that the length of a story has nothing to do with its impact. This is a strong, complete, wonderful story with great characters I wouldn't mind seeing again. And, for me, it has the required HEA. Thank you.
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Great party; he so deserves it. Look forward to hearing more about Leah. I'm also wondering if more is going on with teacher Jones than just a burnt out teacher.
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Very strange. Sort of reminds me of that old movie, Gaslight. Seems like someone is trying to drive Jake crazy or back to drinking.
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Chapter 3 - 1.800.273.8255
avidreadr commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 3 - 1.800.273.8255
Just started reading this story and I will definitely be following it. I like the situation and the characters and I look forward to reading the rest. -
If this story is that painful you obviously need to end it. I feel bad that you do have such bad memories. I hope that, in time, this story will help act as catharsis to work out some of the pain. I wish you well and nothing but better memories and happiness in the future.
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A good story with good people. I loved the epilogue and the way their lives turned out. It was good that Don got enough back to be able to walk around the house. A very satisfying story all around. Thank you.
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Chapter 22 Bad news comes in threes
avidreadr commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 22 Bad news comes in threes
Yes, three deaths but, except possibly for Dane's grandmother, nobody anyone will miss. Dane does seem to have a pretty good handle on things and I think, since they had their little ceremony, he will start feeling move secure. I find myself wondering what sort of mischief he might get into when he does feel more secure and doesn't feel like he has to stay good all the time. Hopefully, there are some fun times ahead. -
Oh, wow. What a plot twist. Poor Jam. How much more does that boy have to put up with?
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Thank you for this story. I enjoyed it a great deal. Enjoy your vacation and I look forward to your next story.
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Coming Home from Christmas
avidreadr commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in Coming Home from Christmas
I agree with all the others. Good start and I'd like to read more. I'd like to hear Jeff's explanation and see them work it out. -
I think all Michael needs is his mother. Creepy. I love Nate; he seems to be the perfect younger brother. Look forward to more.
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Great chapter. I'm so happy for Don, and for Louis. I think Harry got a bit pushy there and needs to back off. Actually, what he really needs is to find his own man! Look forward to more and to the Toronto marathon. Thank you.
