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  1. lilansui

    Silver Ice

    Thank you Timothy for reading!
  2. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    IHi Sacred, I just saw this review. Yes, Jaesun is someone most people won't like, lol. As always, my villain is unpopular, lol. The next chapter is up, lots of Dan for you, maybe even some kissing.. I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks so much!
  3. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    IHi Sacred, I just saw this review. Yes, Jaesun is someone most people won't like, lol. As always, my villain is unpopular, lol. The next chapter is up, lots of Dan for you, maybe even some kissing.. I look forward to your thoughts. Thanks so much!
  4. Music Like Spring Jae walked into Jade Entertainment awed by the progress Dan had managed in their absence. Their offices were on Gangnamro Avenue in a three-story azure glass building. He paused at the receptionist’s desk; she was busy on the phone. Taking off his dark glasses, he leaned on the counter and looked around the waiting area. Posters of the Jade Entertainment musicians and actors decorated the walls. He noted in disappointment that there weren’t any Rebellion posters. “How ma
  5. lilansui

    Chapter 7

    Yes, you're right about Jaesun, he's the kind of guy to make a decision in the heat of the moment to satisfy the immediate needs. Finding later he should have taken his time. I think that's the quality I don't like most about him...lol. But, we'll see where it takes him. As for Jae's mum, she has a sixth sense about Jae and Dan, you're right about that too. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts Daithi, thank you so much.
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    Chapter 7

    Jae is protective toward his mum, so I feel he keeps a lot of the ugly stuff he goes through from her. I find he's into taking care of her so much...lol Thanks for reading Lisa.
  7. Spicy Gimchi and Old Wounds Jae drove home to Gong, his thoughts centered on Dan and their scorching kiss. Dan liked him, enough to kiss him, Jae mused. A sigh escaped and he gripped the steering wheel tight. This wasn’t a good time to think about relationships. He and Dan, they had business together, there was Rebellion’s plan, and he couldn’t allow anything to jeopardize that, not even for a stunning kiss that had left every cell in his body trembling. He hadn’t known a kiss could fee
  8. lilansui

    Chapter 6

    You've made me crave chocolate **going to find my stash** lol. Dan is loveable isn't he? The kiss was unexpected, but it felt right to put it at the end. Lisa's accepted to edit for me, so she has the next chapter right now. I'll post it when she gives it back. Sacred, you're awesome!! I'm happy to read your reviews, they make me smile. Keep studying, wish you the best in that.
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    Chapter 5

    Yes, the leap seemed important to put in there. There was just so much I needed to get through and skipping a few years ahead felt the best way to cover it all up. Glad it worked out for you. "The Plan", hmm..still plotting that out by the way. To come in the next chapters. Lol,
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    Chapter 5

    Dan and Jae moment coming up!!lol. thanks for reading Joann, and for reviewing. Truly means a lot to me.
  11. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Jaesun is a user, he doesn't stop to see who he's hurting ever, just takes what he needs. Dan was the hero in this chapter,
  12. lilansui

    Chapter 4

    Poor Jae is right, he's had it rough on this chapter. Dan the doctor, lol. Great one! Thanks Joann.
  13. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    I knew you'd like him, he's so out there isn't he? Congratulations on guessing right, lol.
  14. lilansui

    Chapter 3

    Dan is a fun character to write, he always has everything handled. That one guy you can count on..hehe...he'll be good for Jae.
  15. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    N-sang is trouble, and there's is always that one person who should have stood by you but didn't. Lol, Jae is not yet ready to give up. Thanks for another review.
  16. lilansui

    Chapter 2

    Yes, home is always gives you this reboot mojo, and heals the pain, right. Thank you, Joann.
  17. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Thank you Sacred! I've missed you! hehe. Yes the first chapter is all about Jae's happy place. Glad you liked it. I should PM you, wish you the best with your studies.
  18. lilansui

    Chapter 1

    Hi Joann! Great to see your review on this story. Thanks so much for reading!
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    Chapter 6

    Dan's special talk is awesome...lol. I haven't forgotten the cabbages, lol, and there are so many N-sang probs coming soon. hehe Thanks for always reading Daithi.
  20. lilansui

    Chapter 6

    Haha,...thank you for pointing that out. Hey, check your pm, tell me what you think, would love your help. Home is where the heart is, I suppose, though it would have been awesome to keep them in Boston right? You're awesome, gal.
  21. My plan, Your Plan, Our Plan Dan beamed impressed by the sight of Jae, Junghee and Andre on stage. Their sound had changed; he’d consider them a rock band now far from the pop music band he remembered two years ago. Rebellion had broken into the formidable rock genre, exploring hard rock and metal with Jae singing lead vocals, Junghee playing guitar and Andre playing bass or piano. They’d hired a drummer to complete the feel of their music and written all their lyrics in English. Jae cro
  22. I think this is the best quality about you, Lisa. You're no 'pain-in-the-ass reviewer' , lol. Lisa has been in my corner since I started writing on GA and that makes her really special to me. She leaves great reviews and I look forward to reading her thoughts because she ends up challenging me. She's given me a few suggestions, and I always go like 'Oh why didn't I think of that before?'. I love it when she points out an error, because my brain has probably been auto correcting it when I read. My favorite part is when she connects with a situation in my stories, she'll leave an anecdote of her experience in the review and I'll go, "Ah, she really knows what my characters are going through." That makes writing so much fun. Lisa is GA's gem, and I'm glad she stumbled on to my stories, and the reviews she tirelessly leaves for me. Thank you, Lisa.
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    Chapter 5

    Beantown lol, you make my day Lisa! I'm hoping Jae is thinking of Dan too deep some where.. thanks for reading
  24. lilansui

    Chapter 5

    The icecube bath was fun to write..hehe...i'd be spitting mad myself. I feel you in terms of N-sang and Rand. Thanks for reading.
  25. No! I won't watch you mope Dan helped Jae into the bathroom in the master bedroom. He settled him on the toilet seat and turned on the shower in the huge glass stall. Making sure to regulate the water until it was lukewarm. He turned back to find Jae bent over the toilet bowl heaving. Dan held back his own urge to puke when Jae let out the contents of his stomach. He always ended up puking in such situations. His mother called him a sympathetic puker. Jae hugged the toilet bowl and he
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