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Awe, That was cute. I wanna know what else happens. For some reason I always end up liking stories with Joshs and Justins. Not really sure why. The fact that yours are well written helps too! I also had completely unrelated thought because of your Charlie Brown icon. We have a little guitar dude smily but we need a Schroeder piano player guy. No idea what made me think of that but I just did. oh well right.
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Oh wow. Didn't know Min would be taking on a nutty mother in the run too. She is a really interesting character. So is the sister that is now coming into play. I am curious to see how that all plays out. As for Young Jae, He seems to think his kisses are magic. He uses them as a hush tool all the time. Its pretty cute actually. I want to see them get together and be happy. In a lot of ways, Young Jae has so much control over his emotions that he is just going to let Min play into his arms. Min may not know he wants to be there yet but he will soon. I really like this story. I can't wait for more. This weekend, me and my dongsaeng Jessica are going to a concert. Woohoo, shake our booties to really loud music. Then off to a comic con. Shall be fun!
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Don't look now but Pete may be finding his balls or something. Baby steps you know. I think Corbin is taking the right track with Pete but holy cow did he goof it up with Lee. He shouldn't have called him out like that. I know he is pissed at him and I would be too. I would like to say it was an alchohol brain idea so we give him the benefit of the doubt. Plus, I really like Corbin. He is not by any means a bad guy,he is just young and trying to figure out life. I am actually mostly proud of him because he does manage to get so much done in between trying to drown his poor liver. Anyways. I hope this Dakota chick is helpful to both of them. I rather think she will be. I think she will be the catalyst to make one of them get their ass moving in the right direction. I am glad we will be back on track for chapters soon. I hope you had a wonderful time wandering around everywhere. P.S. I totally used my Linkin Park playlist from The Thousand Suns cd to look up the spelling for Catalyst. It made me giggle. P.S.S. As always, I so enjoy your work. I'm glad you take the time to share it with me. I bet there is enough here to create an HBO Sex in the City type show. I bet it would be way more fun for people. hahhaha.
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Part of me says that Adrian made a mistake. While it was a very big mistake, it is fixable. It seems though that he has made a project of using Alexi. This can go two ways... Alexi can realize the poison that Adrian is in his life and kick him to the curb, or Adrian can realize what a prince Alexi is and mend his ignorant ways. My personal favorite is for Josh to be with Alexi. I think Josh is less about himself. He seems more down to earth and less concerned with money and material things. I think he could be the one who loves Alexi just for Alexi. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Yay for travel! I enjoyed this little nibble. I like these two boys. They have a good thing going. Also. The line about "wending his way through boxes" worked well. Wending was a good choice to add flavor without adding snobbery. I always enjoy your work though.
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Hi There! I had seen you posting in comments around here and on several of our other mutual favorite sights. I did not realize that you were a writer yourself. Now that I know this I will be happliy chasing after your work! Your story is very good with a lot of dramedy. I love the vibe the three boys have together and I adore the relationship between Eric and Little Man. I do hope that Ogre and Little Man get fixed enough to tell Eric. I also have to say that your story reminds me some what of Revenge of the Nerds. That is one of my favorite movies of all time so this is really close to my heart. The way you are telling your story though is different of course. I am so glad that I bumped into this last night and I can not wait to see it all unfold. Again, your story is so wonderful. I hope it goes on for chapters and chapters into after college and marriage and mini-humans. YAY!
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Poor confused Billy, I think we all have an "AJ" regardless of if we want it or not. I am curious to see where it goes with him. He is a teenage boy. It is going to be quite mind boggling for him. Anyways, I am glad to see these guys popping back up again. Its one of my favorite story lines. Good job as always.
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Men are so silly! I am glad the goobers got back on track. They are such a sweet couple. I love the fact that they are a matched set yet they are quite different. I had a thought while I was reading this... Do you have any more Carthera stories in the future? I have read all the other ones and need more imput!!! As always, you are wonderful.
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Oh my. What a tasty little snack this story is turning out to be. I like Angels. I like yummy ones even better. I still want to know where the angel is from dang it. Oh great. Now I have that stupid Forgeiner song stuck in my head... I want to know what love is. Must.Turn.On.ITUNES! Thanks for a great story and I can't wait until next week. So much fun! <- seemed fitting. hahahahaa.
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That was very well done. Thank you for that. People forget how much our precious soldiers are going through and how much it takes for them to live every day. Good job here. Very good job.
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I am so glad you started updating this story again. I have really enjoyed the boys and the view point of the story. It takes a lot of talent to write "dear diary" story. It has been so much fun watching everything unfold. I hope you have more saved up.
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OOh OOh! Where did he come from. Oh boy! I know I guy named Angel. He is sex on two feet. He beats the crap out of the Sarah Fricken McLaughlin ( SP) song. I like the world you have created here. I can't wait to see what happens and find out where mr sexy wings is from.
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Wow. Change is so very scary. I hope the guys stick together and get a faboulous place together. I like this story. I am glad you kept it going.
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Lovely, simply lovely. I like the pace this story is moving at. I love the fact that Young Jae underestimated Min and now he is stuffing down his throat. HAHA! Two strong men are really fun to watch. Fireworks waiting to happen. Nice Job.
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Story Review Featured Story: Never More Lonely
Carrie76 commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Ahem. I would like to add Pumpkin Spice Eggos too the list. Holy Moly. Those things are awesome. Dare you to try to resist smearing them with the brown sugar flavored cream cheese. Yummy. Oh and Cia dear, you are always one of my favorites. I am glad you decided to add to this story because it is a good one. I want to know what happened. Also, I bought Pricolici Saturday night on Amazon. I love that story. I loved Tuckers markings when he came into his power. It made me want to go get another tattoo though. Of course that is always an issue with me. More, more,more. ) -
RAWR! Silly Corbs, The only way to get what you want in life is too ask for it. Damn it. I feel bad for the goober because everytime he screwsup his courage to move forward, something pushes him back. I do hope he gets it in gear soon. I am also starting to get a little curious about this David dude who I want to keep calling Morrissy. There is something fishy there. I am not entirely sure that Lee was the baddy in that little shananigan. I am interested to see where everything shakes out next week. Good Chapter. Keep up the oh so wonderful work.
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I like stories I can learn new things from. This one is wonderful. Good job. hehehe. I bet when it all comes down to it Min wraps Young Jae around his finger. It will be interesting to watch unfold.
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O.M.G, That chapter was flipping awesome. Amanda and her friends are the coolest people ever and I give them gold stars for being so human. I wish everyone could be that way. The most important part to me was the fact that she stood up to the others with strength but did not resort to name calling or anything like that. It was all positive. I remember now that this was one of my favorite points of the style of your stories. The other part of your stories that I love is the gaming references. As a gamer, it makes my little geek heart go pitter pat. I have played ( and died repeatedly) on that MW2 map so that especially cracks me up. Linkin Park is working on the some of the soundtrack for the next Modern Warfare so I will have double reason to buy it... That is if I ever come out of Borderlands 2. I adore the boys in this story. I just want to give them big hugs and tell them everything will be just fine. I think with the new support system the bullying may not stop but it will be handled better. I think poor sweet Jacob will stay in his right mind if he doesn't feel so alone. Kyle and Matthew will make sure that stays true. So, again, this is an amazing chapter. I loved the flow of it and I can't wait for the next one. These boys are amazing and I shall share them with my other friends too. Keep up the amazing work.
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So I had a thought. Is there a proper amount of time to wait before writing the review? I mean, this was posted at like 10:30 or so. I read it then. Do you suppose its ok to review it then? Does that make me look like I am just sitting around on the internet? I mean, I am but does it make it obvious? I was just wondering so I waited a bit and digested the story more. Now I can give an intellegent review... WOOHOO that was fun. Hehehe. Sometimes I truly feel that Corbin needs his ass smacked. I think he and the brit are moving at speeding iceberg speed towards a relationship. I feel somewhat bad for Pete because he knows what he wants, he just seems too afraid to make that last leap. They are sneaking up on it though. He shows jealousy about hearing about Corbins visit with the Cadet which is good but he doesn't seem to know how to tell Corbin to knock it off. I sure hope they figure it out soon. I am fairly sure at some point that Corbin's liver has tried to punch him in the ribs for abuse. Corbin must be part fish as he drinks like one. I know this is part of college and I guess it is ok. I was glad to see that Corbin not only knew where the library was, but actually used it for something other than a place to get out of the heat. I love the fact that Corbin is so involved with the goings on of campus and I can't wait to see how he gets out of the whole mixy mix mess he has caused with the sorority houses. He thinks well on his feet. He will figure it all out splendidly I am sure. P.S. I was just thinking today that I had not seen a new chapter from you in a little while and then poof! There this chapter was... I think I am off to think about having more money and see if that comes true as well.
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Interesting. So what is up with Adrian. Is he really as bad as he seems? Joshua sounds rather sweet but even sweet can be bad for you. I am very interested to see what will happen next. I also think everyone needs a Lily. She takes good care of Alexi. I hope what ever happened with his credit card not to troubling. He doesn't need anything else to deal with right now.
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YAY! I am happy to see a new story from you. I love the way it is starting out. So exciting and all sneaky like. I am ready for more.
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Oh Corbin you silly fool... This story is so fun. I have to say I was really proud of Corbin in this chapter. He could have had Lee just for a tasty snack and he didn't. I think maybe Pete is becoming more to him than what he thinks so right now no other flavor will do except for Pete. As for Cadet Snobby Pants. La dee fricken da to him. The sad part is I think I like him as a character. Mostly. It is apparent he is trying to find himself but on the other hand I feel like maybe he is a little full of himself. It is partly Corbins fault though because he runs over there like a person with a cell phone at 8% looking for a charger. I guess we will just have to wait and see what happens.
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Chapter 8 - Monsoon Party
Carrie76 commented on bashfulpie's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Monsoon Party
This was a really funny chapter. I believe this is my favorite one. You are doing so well. Keep chugging along. I agree with Cia. I want to see this story move along. Keep up the good work. -
I don't think it is a one time deal either. For some reason Madonna's Open your heart is going through my head right now. I want to see the key turned.
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This story is very hard to read. My parents were foster parents from the time I was about 16 and still are today. I like your style and I will continue to read it. I think the lettering of the parts is a little confusing to start but I am starting to get a better feel of it. Keep writing. I want to see what happens next.
