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Rich, this story is an incredible look back at what life, death, love, marriage, work, and play were in a bygone era. You have masterfully captured the language, described the trial and tribulations, and recounted how close to the edge people lived not so long ago (and even now, if truth be told.) It is agonizing to know that in less than a year they will be hit by the Great Depression. I looked back and saw that you have had few response and I am sorry that you are not getting the support and approbation that you deserve for your work and your skill at storytelling.
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I am glad you did decide to post this here. The dialogue is authentic in content and in tone, you have captured the life of millworkers and rural life as well. This is a thoroughly real, insightful and enjoyable read. Good work!
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So great to have you and the boys back! Intriguing start!
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Confessions and Revelations
starboardtack commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confessions and Revelations
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Fascinating juxtaposition between the horrors of the fire and the party atmosphere of the others.
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That last paragraph, especially the last sentence really caught me. So very touching.
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In some ways this is going to be a hard read as my son was deployed twice. Not sure I want to “know” but very sure I want to read what is shaping up to be an excellent work. I am not worried about being triggered — just an “ignorance is bliss” kind of situation.
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Isn’t there some kind of Writers Guild Code of Ethics that prohibits members from giving their readers heart attacks? LoL
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Your recounting of the way things “were” is a great reminder and the story is very well written. Looking forward to more of your storytelling.
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I am an adoptive father and this chapter really touched my heart! Thank you.
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I have only one complaint -- your stories end! Thank you for another beautifully written addition to the lives of these characters. I look forward to reading more work by you -- whatever the story line.
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Thank you for a great great adventure!
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Welcome back. You were missed.
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Welcome back to all of you!
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I guess Jared’s death was mob justice??? Sorry, couldn’t resist.
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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Great chapter, laughed out loud at the Don Quixote-esque image of Rick and the plunger sword. But now you have a dilemma — to steal a line from Fiddler on the Roof, a bird and a fish can fall in love but where will they make their home? Curious to see whether you have painted yourself into a corner and whether (how) you give them a future together. Good luck😂 I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters (Please!)
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More! I want more! Don’t wanna wait! 😂
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I just came across this today. It is developing into an interesting story. You have a very nice, accessible writing style. I look forward to see where this takes you.
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Thank you for a wonderful read. I am going to miss this but I trust you will be back soon?
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Please don’t be a stranger around here! Come back soon. You are good company.
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You are one of those very rare authors who I do not want to see posting stories — because it means we are one step closer to the end. Another beautifully written chapter.
