starboardtack
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Sorry for the double post
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Fascinating juxtaposition between the horrors of the fire and the party atmosphere of the others.
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That last paragraph, especially the last sentence really caught me. So very touching.
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In some ways this is going to be a hard read as my son was deployed twice. Not sure I want to “know” but very sure I want to read what is shaping up to be an excellent work. I am not worried about being triggered — just an “ignorance is bliss” kind of situation.
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Isn’t there some kind of Writers Guild Code of Ethics that prohibits members from giving their readers heart attacks? LoL
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Your recounting of the way things “were” is a great reminder and the story is very well written. Looking forward to more of your storytelling.
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I am an adoptive father and this chapter really touched my heart! Thank you.
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I have only one complaint -- your stories end! Thank you for another beautifully written addition to the lives of these characters. I look forward to reading more work by you -- whatever the story line.
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Thank you for a great great adventure!
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Welcome back. You were missed.
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Welcome back to all of you!
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I guess Jared’s death was mob justice??? Sorry, couldn’t resist.
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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Accidentally hit post twice
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Great chapter, laughed out loud at the Don Quixote-esque image of Rick and the plunger sword. But now you have a dilemma — to steal a line from Fiddler on the Roof, a bird and a fish can fall in love but where will they make their home? Curious to see whether you have painted yourself into a corner and whether (how) you give them a future together. Good luck😂 I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters (Please!)
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More! I want more! Don’t wanna wait! 😂
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I just came across this today. It is developing into an interesting story. You have a very nice, accessible writing style. I look forward to see where this takes you.
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Thank you for a wonderful read. I am going to miss this but I trust you will be back soon?
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Please don’t be a stranger around here! Come back soon. You are good company.
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You are one of those very rare authors who I do not want to see posting stories — because it means we are one step closer to the end. Another beautifully written chapter.
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Your descriptions of the villages and countryside are so on the spot. It is a truly a gift to have this story back.
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What a delight to have you characters, villages and you back. I am looking forward to reading this.
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Fantastic!
