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In some ways this is going to be a hard read as my son was deployed twice. Not sure I want to “know” but very sure I want to read what is shaping up to be an excellent work. I am not worried about being triggered — just an “ignorance is bliss” kind of situation.
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Isn’t there some kind of Writers Guild Code of Ethics that prohibits members from giving their readers heart attacks? LoL
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Your recounting of the way things “were” is a great reminder and the story is very well written. Looking forward to more of your storytelling.
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I am an adoptive father and this chapter really touched my heart! Thank you.
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I have only one complaint -- your stories end! Thank you for another beautifully written addition to the lives of these characters. I look forward to reading more work by you -- whatever the story line.
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Thank you for a great great adventure!
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Welcome back. You were missed.
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Welcome back to all of you!
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I guess Jared’s death was mob justice??? Sorry, couldn’t resist.
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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A much needed day of reckoning a long time in the making!
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Accidentally hit post twice
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Great chapter, laughed out loud at the Don Quixote-esque image of Rick and the plunger sword. But now you have a dilemma — to steal a line from Fiddler on the Roof, a bird and a fish can fall in love but where will they make their home? Curious to see whether you have painted yourself into a corner and whether (how) you give them a future together. Good luck😂 I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters (Please!)
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More! I want more! Don’t wanna wait! 😂
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I just came across this today. It is developing into an interesting story. You have a very nice, accessible writing style. I look forward to see where this takes you.
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Thank you for a wonderful read. I am going to miss this but I trust you will be back soon?
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Please don’t be a stranger around here! Come back soon. You are good company.
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You are one of those very rare authors who I do not want to see posting stories — because it means we are one step closer to the end. Another beautifully written chapter.
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Your descriptions of the villages and countryside are so on the spot. It is a truly a gift to have this story back.
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What a delight to have you characters, villages and you back. I am looking forward to reading this.
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Fantastic!
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Perfect as written.
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Sorry but customer service comes with the supervisory territory, even if the customer is annoying and even if the cashier who should have handled it in the first place did not. Sounds a little whine-y and self-absorbed to me. Please no flames LOL. (Edit: to be clear, I like the story and I think you are spot on in capturing the reaction. I am just reacting to the character.)
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WOW! Great end to the chapter. Never knew or heard of this kind of power from any other story I have read. Great unique twist! Well done.
