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Fascinating chapter
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The best start to a story that I have encountered so far. Strands of love woven into every line.
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A conversation I hope never to have with my son……… it brought tears to my eyes.
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What a cliffhanger!
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Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
starboardtack commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
This was a marvelous story free from coming out angst but replete with love and respect. It was refreshing to encounter an older adult protagonist, someone with whom I can identify. Any chance of more characters like him in the future. (i.e. -- keep up the great work lol.) -
Welcome back to you and your family of characters.
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You have such a respectful and gentle touch with your characters.
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A really great story — well written and thought out. Until I saw the “complete” notice, I thought that the father was going to make a surprise appearance — something that would have been an interesting twist. I look forward to what comes next for these two? Whether your write it or not, lol.
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Sorry you have abandoned this. It is a good story. I imagine it would be a challenge to avoid cliche story lines but I think you could do it.
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So touching an end to the chapter. In spite of all that he does, he still is a little boy who needs to be comforted and know he is loved.
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Rich, this story is an incredible look back at what life, death, love, marriage, work, and play were in a bygone era. You have masterfully captured the language, described the trial and tribulations, and recounted how close to the edge people lived not so long ago (and even now, if truth be told.) It is agonizing to know that in less than a year they will be hit by the Great Depression. I looked back and saw that you have had few response and I am sorry that you are not getting the support and approbation that you deserve for your work and your skill at storytelling.
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I am glad you did decide to post this here. The dialogue is authentic in content and in tone, you have captured the life of millworkers and rural life as well. This is a thoroughly real, insightful and enjoyable read. Good work!
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So great to have you and the boys back! Intriguing start!
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Confessions and Revelations
starboardtack commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confessions and Revelations
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Sorry for the double post
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Fascinating juxtaposition between the horrors of the fire and the party atmosphere of the others.
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That last paragraph, especially the last sentence really caught me. So very touching.
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In some ways this is going to be a hard read as my son was deployed twice. Not sure I want to “know” but very sure I want to read what is shaping up to be an excellent work. I am not worried about being triggered — just an “ignorance is bliss” kind of situation.
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Isn’t there some kind of Writers Guild Code of Ethics that prohibits members from giving their readers heart attacks? LoL
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Your recounting of the way things “were” is a great reminder and the story is very well written. Looking forward to more of your storytelling.
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I am an adoptive father and this chapter really touched my heart! Thank you.
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I have only one complaint -- your stories end! Thank you for another beautifully written addition to the lives of these characters. I look forward to reading more work by you -- whatever the story line.
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Thank you for a great great adventure!
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Welcome back. You were missed.
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Welcome back to all of you!
