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Chapter 2 -- My 42-Buck Adventure
starboardtack commented on RichEisbrouch's story chapter in Chapter 2 -- My 42-Buck Adventure
This was so spot on descriptive it made me really anxious as it brought up memories of my last two flats. And AAA "less than helpful" in both instances lol. Good story. -
Sure thing — Oreos and milk?
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A Boyfriend In Need Is A Boyfriend Indeed
starboardtack commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Boyfriend In Need Is A Boyfriend Indeed
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Charming!
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Ok, this is a pretty sorry metaphor but it is the best I can do: Some people like silverware with intricate patterns and curlicues but I like clean and simple lines. So many mistakes can be hidden if you provide enough distractions but nothing can be hidden when the design is straightforward and clean. For me, your writing is the latter -- clean, very deceptively simple, unadorned but close to perfect.
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Your storytelling is just so darned good! Not only do you give us a great historical piece but you humanize it -- you bring these people into our kitchens, dens, and our hearts. Thank you for your work.
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Too bad that the title “Something Wicked This Way Comes” already has been taken!
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I just picked up this story today and the first two chapters are fantastic. The images your build are so clear and you convey a sense of unease to a point where it almost is intolerable — both in your characters and in this reader. I am looking forward to what comes .
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Seven Swans a-Swimming
starboardtack commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Seven Swans a-Swimming
This series started out beautifully and just gets better with each addition. It is amazing what you can do with such few words. Thank you for these holiday gifts. -
The Labors of Advent
starboardtack commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Labors of Advent
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A Wall to Hide it All
starboardtack commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in A Wall to Hide it All
There is so much more to the story than the point I upon which am about to focus — but it is the point most personal to me. I am the adoptive father to my now 25 y. o. son. At his request, we did do a birthmother search. I was able to find her and we did get to meet both her and my son’s half-siblings. It was a very tough experience as I was so worried about how it would affect my son. I guess I was my son’s Noah, in a way. It all worked out for the good, btw. You did a very very good job handling that part of the story. (Ironically, Noah is my middle name lol.) Overall this was a very good read. Thank you for time well spent. -
Fascinating chapter
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The best start to a story that I have encountered so far. Strands of love woven into every line.
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A conversation I hope never to have with my son……… it brought tears to my eyes.
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What a cliffhanger!
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Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
starboardtack commented on Altimexis's story chapter in Hiking Clifty Falls with Cliff
This was a marvelous story free from coming out angst but replete with love and respect. It was refreshing to encounter an older adult protagonist, someone with whom I can identify. Any chance of more characters like him in the future. (i.e. -- keep up the great work lol.) -
Welcome back to you and your family of characters.
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You have such a respectful and gentle touch with your characters.
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A really great story — well written and thought out. Until I saw the “complete” notice, I thought that the father was going to make a surprise appearance — something that would have been an interesting twist. I look forward to what comes next for these two? Whether your write it or not, lol.
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Sorry you have abandoned this. It is a good story. I imagine it would be a challenge to avoid cliche story lines but I think you could do it.
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So touching an end to the chapter. In spite of all that he does, he still is a little boy who needs to be comforted and know he is loved.
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Rich, this story is an incredible look back at what life, death, love, marriage, work, and play were in a bygone era. You have masterfully captured the language, described the trial and tribulations, and recounted how close to the edge people lived not so long ago (and even now, if truth be told.) It is agonizing to know that in less than a year they will be hit by the Great Depression. I looked back and saw that you have had few response and I am sorry that you are not getting the support and approbation that you deserve for your work and your skill at storytelling.
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I am glad you did decide to post this here. The dialogue is authentic in content and in tone, you have captured the life of millworkers and rural life as well. This is a thoroughly real, insightful and enjoyable read. Good work!
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So great to have you and the boys back! Intriguing start!
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Confessions and Revelations
starboardtack commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confessions and Revelations
Great writing and the way you are handling Joey’ storyline.
