Geemeedee
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I am loving this so much! I just read all the chapters back-to-back to catch up. It’s like a story from “Arabian Nights”!
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I’m glad you explained it! My goofy ass thought you meant you’d decided not to change the chapter after our feedback about “Boss Nanny.” 🙄
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You can always make the accident a bad dream, like Bobby’s death on “Dallas.” (Man, I hope somebody got that reference.)
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I legit was like, “well, we know he doesn’t go anywhere because Seamus hogs his phone.” Guess I shoulda said that when I first read it…
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1) Dumb move to drink in town. 2) I bet Finn owns that bar. Wait, maybe not — the family was drowning in medical bills. 3) I agree with the commenter who hypothesized River has come to an understanding with his mom. Otherwise, how would he even know about this place? He’s obviously been back.
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I had a VERY hard time reading this chapter because of Wren’s death. Kudos to you for making that character so indispensable. I’ve cried for two chapters now. Just a thought: Wyn creates life with his powers, so perhaps …? Take as long as you need, @Demiurge. But I do hope you decide to continue with this fantastic story.
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Fifty-two percent intimidating
Geemeedee commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Fifty-two percent intimidating
My favorite parts of the chapter: “ ‘Fuck!’ I jump when Jay slides his arms around my waist. I didn’t hear him come home.“ Loren considers his place their place! and “Those that have followed me for a while have probably noticed I’ve never posted about a boyfriend before. It’s hard to post about something you’ve never had. So be gentle with me. I don’t know what I’m doing—” Unprecedented vulnerability with his fans. Loren, who does everything so well, doesn’t know how to do this? Love it.- 67 comments
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I’ve always thought the postcards are fake. I hope Dan and Terry make this a regular thing! They’re pretty cute together. Can we start a GoFundMe to get Terry a smartphone? Because GOOD LORD.
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I can testify that 10 years is not enough. Fifteen to eighteen to function well, but the underlying trauma never goes away. But here we are at age 27. It’ll be good to close this chapter of his life. As far as mom is concerned, she’ll be her usual horrible self. Alec would regret it if he didn’t go, tho. I feel pity for her at this point — her life could’ve been so much fuller if she wasn’t steeped in religion and hate. And his dad is a waste of space. Damn, I wish this chapter was longer! What do they do for a living? Where do they reside? What do they do for fun? (Besides … you know.)
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I could not disagree more with the way Dex treated Jonathan. Edited to add: I agree with long1jo. And Jonathan should stay away from all these crude assholes — Maddox included.
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Then I had to ruin it once I got my thoughts together, lol.
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🥺 Dude spent the first seven years of his life surrounded by sociopaths. He was set up for failure, yet made his life a success. I wish he could see that he deserves only the best, and the best is Jay. Fantastic chapter.
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Sis, your readers are not as patient as Jay. You showed Loren’s growth in the interactions. You did the right thing. 😉
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So I’m the only one wondering if Loren’s sectional includes a queen-size bed? How the hell do two big guys lay there cuddling (and other activities) on the sofa?? I like how we zoomed through the five weeks. Nice way to move the story along. I was impressed that Loren was able to commit to having a boyfriend. He’s come a long way! My favorite part: It’s quiet as Loren turns off the lights. “Thanks for having my back,” he says as I follow him out the door and to the main house. “I had your back when I started reserving for you and your friends. You not telling them is on you, not me.” Loren doesn’t argue because he knows it’s true. I love when Jay calls Loren on his shit. #relationshipgoals
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You probably meant to reply to mine. I believe Alec was absolutely right to leave. Just wanted to make that clear.
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My heart aches for Finn because he still has to live there and face all the talk and looks and whispers every day. Alec gets to escape. I remember the happy puppy that Finn was and that boy is gone. I hope Alec comes to understand the full impact of what he’s giving up and the mess he’s leaving behind. Great writing.
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I hope Finn doesn’t come to regret his decision to stay (and probably skip college). It’s obvious that Finn’s family is his priority, just as Alec saving himself is his own focus. Alec is hella courageous for moving cross-country at only 17, especially after the sheltered life he’s lived so far. But self-preservation will make you brave in ways you never thought you could be. Both teens are naive, in different ways. It’ll be interesting to see how the loss of that innocence affected the men they’ve become.
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Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
Geemeedee commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Intractable Instincts
I figured it was Sarah, but I also figured she wasn’t really Dirk’s destined. That’s cold if she truly was. I think whatever happened to her in the past is what turned her against shifters. Interesting plot Wagner has found himself in. Looking forward to that coming to light. Great chapter! -
Happy birfday, Miz G!! I’m sitting here in awe of what Jay *really* had going on when he made his “Boss Nanny” appearances. I need to go reread sections to see if he shared any doubts with Seamus. You KNOW it showed on Loren’s face that he didn’t want to play that damn game, yet Jay did it anyway — probably while laughing inside.
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That’s what I was wondering — what happened to the rest of the family’s assets? Was this the real reason Jason was adopted: so that Margaret could get access to that money? I was also thinking that with a house so large, both couples could move in and share it.
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So. Effin. Cute. ☺️
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Chapter 8: Truck beds and Lockdowns
Geemeedee commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 8: Truck beds and Lockdowns
Yeaaaah his parents are going to do something drastic. Alec is a fascinating mix of bravery and shyness, of foolhardiness and fear. Looking forward to where this story goes.- 17 comments
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Even so, Jay is playing this whole thing perfectly. If I met a dude with this level of certainly and patience, I don’t know if I would embrace it or run.
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I’ve legit been wondering this the whole time. Esp. since Jay didn’t know anything about him.
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