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They're going back to the town with the bonfires and crazy folks, aren't they? I remember that. So Lahja is dreaming about kissing his panther...awwww Won't be long now. And where can I go to get a pool like that? Your description was beautiful. I'm not fond of water, but I can splash with the best of them. Great chapter.
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Mine! Part Two: Chapter Five
LadyDe commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two: Chapter Five
That was very intuitive of Park to know that Ritch wouldn't feel comfortable. And to volunteer to handcuff himself to the bed was such a mate thing to do and then BAM!!! You are so cruel. Couldn't the bad guys have waited till morning?? -
Can we kill Landon and then the King? Yes, I'm bloodthirsty and no one's given me a good drink in a while! Good chapter. Glad to know the guys have the people on thier side.
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No, no, no. That was way too short!!! Do we already know Xavier? What does he have to do with this team? Who are they? I thought Toby was a city cop? Is this a black ops type group? Arrrrrgh! You're going to drag this out, aren't you?
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Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
I read this yesterday but was so sleepy I couldn't figure out what I wanted to say. But here I am, ready to add my 0.50 worth. hehe. I loved "yes dear". I think that should be drilled into all men from birth. Be less stress in the world. I hope the pack sees the wisdom and benefits in moving to Morningstar and any method Clarence comes up with will be the right one. You've got me thinking that Kellar's parents aren't dead. Did they stage their accident? Did they know about the legend? Did the seer tell them they had to remove themselves from his life for him to be who he is now? So many questions and I know you won't answer not one of them. Thanks for another great chapter. -
Now I'm on the fence about Alexi. I still like Nathan but if Alexi is about to do what I think he's about to do, then maybe there's some chance that I will change my mind. I'm going to now be patient and let things unfold as the author planned (with alot of opinionated input from us)!! But can we keep Nathan in the story if Liam decides to give Alexi a 3rd or 4th or is it 5th chance? How many chances do you give a person? I thought 2 was the unwritten rule. And stop the talk about needing a walker. We're ALL to young for walkers.... canes and crutches are ok...but not walkers. My 92 year old Dad has one and he refuses to use it! He offered it to me when I was having leg pain at the beginning of the year and I almost choked I laughed so hard.
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When TJ met Sean, I knew he was Josh's crush. This is going to be so hard for Josh. I see lots of angst, resentment and anger with lots of deep heartbreak coming up. Are you going to make TJ get all noble and stuff or let them be a couple? I feel bad for Josh already. I'm so glad I found this story (thanks, Gary, for making me curious )
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Finally, somebody talked (and slapped) some sense into Kiorl. Bout time! So now they know they like and want each other except for that damn pesky 'heaven's light'. Why is that still working in Hell??? So, K likes to cuddle? Awwww Good chapter, SD. Thanks.
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Really sweet that they adopted Liam. He will make a good addition to the crew and get them all prepared for fatherhood. Plus no more spontaneous sex all over the ship with little eyes and ears around. Looks like Sifta has really bonded with the little one. Wonder what Caspian will find in the teddy bear? What plan will the twins come up with to get Nix back? Has Nix effectively won over his kidnappers? Good chapter.
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Logan!! Do the right thing, Vega . Great chapter ending. until next Monday!!
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I don't usually read poetry but the title grabbed me. I LOVED THIS. Truly,I did. It was so relatable, except for the hubby loving (sighs wistfully). I get doggie loving, too and then he goes home with my daughter....and leaves hair. I will have to read this at least once a week... especially on those dreary gray days. And I learned a new word. I'll put it on a post-it note in my cubicle to contemplate during my brain fart moments. Lol. Thank you for the vivid imagery.
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Chapter 19 Hospital Surprises
LadyDe commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 19 Hospital Surprises
Yay!!! A new chapter! This story makes me so happy and I've been waiting and waiting to find out about Michael. So glad Patrick heard such good things about his Mom. Please don't make us pull out the pitchforks,tar and feathers again by making us wait months for an update! -
l love Marty!! Just what the doctor ordered and maybe he can act as a buffer between Liam and Alek. I want Nathan to be the one to give Liam his happily ever after. Alek isn't good enough now for our Liam. Nope nope nope! He wants to make Liam his 'side chick (dude)'. I say that because he didn't say he was breaking up with his girlfriend but he loves Liam. Ugh.
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Yep. Should I keep a running tally? LOL
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Team Nathan all the way!!! The big Russian had his chance and blew it big time. Plus he drug Liam in the closet and that's so not cool. Nathan will treat Liam like he's the treasure that he is (or am I wishfully thinking?) Loved chapter 3 and Marty is a welcome addition to the cast. It's going to take some major groveling on A's part to make me want him in Liam's life again. So, if we're voting.... I vote for Nathan and Liam.
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Chapter 41 Looking Back while Moving Forward
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 41 Looking Back while Moving Forward
Wow, The story Delia was pretty much what I thought the painting was about. (pats self on back) This chapter was so informative and moved the story along and provided a mystery. What happened to Bill? Is that his real name? Are we sure that was the only hunter? And they really need to get moving. Ok, yeah we got to wait for Logan and now Bill to get better, but I'm feeling a sense of urgency here. I really hope Logan hasn't caused more damage to himself, falling over whatever he fell over. And where were can I find a healer like Kellar? This story gives me something to look forward to on the first day of the workweek. -
I'm jumping on the Nathan bandwagon!! Alexsi.... GO AWAY. He keeps saying he loves Liam but not enough. Can you just build the rest of the story around Liam and Nathan and let A pine from afar and kick his own ass? I really don't want Liam to end up with someone who doesn't have the 'balls' to stand up to his family. Plus he went and got himself a girlfriend. Even if he did stand up to his family, the girlfriend would get hurt. Am I being too harsh? Hummm let me think about that...nope. I think Liam should stay with Corey and Jason. And then Nathan can come to visit.
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Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
What a chapter. I loved the temporary merging of the packs idea. But the painting.... I've got two ideas about it. 1st it's prophetic...a vision of the future or 2nd it's a painting of the past....the big wolf is Kellar's father...grand-father or some ancestor and this is a depiction of a past exodus from another country. Delia is the Keeper of the history right? So that kind of makes more sense to me. OR.... I could be way off base. I would say 'who knows' but YOU do, right? LOL. This makes Mondays a better day than the Momma's and Poppa's said it was....way way back when I was a young kit. -
Wow, way to start a story off with a bang!! Liam better call Corey....like right now or he's gonna get an earful for very choice words. Alek ..... well everyone else has already said everything I am thinking about him...except..he's an ass! Has he ever looked into getting financing from a bank for his business? Depending on how long his business has been open, he should have a good history and business plan to show a bank or does his family own the only bank in town or something? I know Liam loves him, but Alek has a girlfriend so lets get Liam a love interest and have him let go of his feelings for closet dweller.
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Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
Have I told you lately how absolutely wonderful your writing is? Reading this chapter had me so tense. I didn't know how Logan would react and then the description of the seizure....so frightening. The evolution of Kellar's healing powers and the connection with Tobyn, even when he's sleeping was just mesmerizing Did some of those flashes of light jumpt into your brain? So I'm thinking that Logans going to be totally himself with maybe a little extra thanks to the blue lighting? I really can't wait for Tilly's reaction when she meets Logan. I want her to be so over the moon. And the Vega pack should pack up and move to Mornngstar. Safety in numbers and there are 5 couples that have to meet and somebody may get pregnant And then there'll be pups!!!! I feel so hopful for the packs. Are the boys going any further? Or will they take the Vaga pack back home first? Thanks for bringing the people in your head out to meet us. -
From sweet to scary to semi-sweet! The mean lady in black has No idea whats headed her way . hee hee. It's gon-na be a fun-ky good time (old 70's funk song ) Can the theives be reformed and join the crew? Good chapter. Now for some kick a**.
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So glad they were able to find Denver's old pack and that they believe the boys. But Logan....Tilly is going to be torn. Hope the tumor removal makes him a little more sociable. Gotta remember ...the earth mother doesn't make mistakes. C u next Monday.
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Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
What a wonderful chapter to end the year! I laughed at Elinor and her 'mother henning'! So real. A true mother's middle name is 'Worry' from the moment she lays eyes on her baby and Elinor applies it to Kellar too. Cabin time? Perfect. Happy New Year, Gary, and Blessed Be to you and your loved ones
