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I really like how this story is unfolding. Everyday, Rayn understands more and more about Daniel and how he views the world. It's been six months and Rayn hasn't met the mother yet?? That's strange to me. Question, is the father still in prison or out now??
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You made me tear up!!! So, Ryle wasn't sick? Aw who cares....HE'S GOT WINGS
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You really know how to write characters with extreme personality issues, don't you? And that's all the finger movement I'm giving to "Her Highness"!! I can wait to find out what Jared reveals. Will I need tissue?? Oh and no why in H*** is this gonna be a 'short' story. There's too much plot and stuff to resolve
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What a wonderful chapter. So Ethan is a hybrid Alpha water Mage? Too cool. I really enjoyed his first shift (and second shift) with EVERY one there. And the long hug Watch out bad guys, you really don't want to mess with this pack.
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Well, I'll be. You remembered!!!! Good Chapter. Gabe is coming out of the dark. Now, why does Ryle have to go in the hospital? Please, no more torturing your characters.
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So, Trey's coming home on Friday after a HEAD injury? Even if it's resolving itself, that's still pretty damn quick! Oh well, be that as it may, that's good news. But I see tough times ahead...or not?
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Annnnnnnnnd......we're off!!! Great first chapter. Carly needs a therapist and a couple thousand Valium I loved Mom and she's probably wondering how she raised such a shrew. She was switched at birth, right? Poor Jared probably realized he had feelings for Craig during the 'ordeal' and seeing him at the party was the straw that broke the camels back. You're about to take us on an emotional roller coaster, aren't you? Well, I'm buckled up and ready. (got a box of Puffs too!)
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Oh WOW!!! Merrick's on the war path!! I agree with everything everyone else has said. Great chapter. More, more, more.
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Great chapter The bad guys are going to be soooooo surprised when they 'invade' the pack lands.... Lions, tigers and bears, oh my! (sorry,Wizard of Oz ) Happy that the Alpha invited Alex and Nathan to join the pack. That kind of bothered me a few chapters back when I read that they weren't part of the pack. I like what Centaxhairysub said about Ethan maybe being an Egyptian Magi!! Maybe Darius is Ethan's protector or guide or familiar???? I was going to write poor Michael but then I'd rather call him an insane, deluded, rat-fink. How deep in the gene pool did the Alpha go to pull his genes out??? Can't wait till next Monday!
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I honestly thought I had read this when it posted..... then I realized I hadn't!! Duh! Anyway, great chapter. I wondered about that Friday timeline too. Thought we had moved to an alternate universe where time runs longer or stands still or something! Tony has got to STOP hitting his head (I've mentioned this before, ) Those headaches are serious and concussions are nothing to sneeze at. Ask the NFL and Will Smith Ok. its the New Year.... do you have time to update? And just so you know.... I've been reading this story since day one, so keep going....at least to the honeymoon.
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Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
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Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
LadyDe commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
I just got caught up and Awwwwww. Version 2.0 has begun!! I seriously don't remember being anywhere near that wise at 14!! Hell, I don't think I am now. The relationships in this story just keep getting stronger and stronger. I am so in love with this story...can it be "The Neverending Story"? -
I'm kinda speechless!!! Michael is insane and doesn't even know it. That was brutal. Things are about to get intense. I bet we find out what Ethan is now, right?
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Applause to you! The third alternative was an excellent idea and very fitting. I can't wait for the next story.
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I like this. It's different and from the viewpoint of God!! Wow. Ok, I'm on this ride with you. When will you post Sin's story?
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Glad Trey's alive. But the dreaded 4 letters, PTSD, will rear their ugly heads. Please let it be a mild case or maybe not at all? How bumpy are you going to make the rest of the ride? Hummmm?
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HaHaHaHa! Great ending. Just like Jackson to deliver important information as a throwaway line. Please revisit them or let them be in someone else's Chaptmistres story. thanks.
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Excellent ending to a great story. I'm so glad that Louis can now hear! Will there be a Book 3? Say yes, please??
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The King's Mate Series By Aditus
LadyDe replied to Aditus's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Wow!!! That was exciting and what a last scene. Thank goodness the Doctor and Moira are finally dead. The Doctor is dead right? One more chapter and then ....who's story is next?- 262 replies
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YOU LEFT US WITH A CLIFFIE!!!!!!!! Mean, Renee, that's just plain mean!
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I don't have anything else to add because all the other reviewers covered all the bases. But I love what you replied to Columbus Guy .... It would screw up the plot" LOL Indeed. So somewhere in the plot outline are the words..... "Michael dies"!!! Still loving this story
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Oooooo..... that made my toes curl. The beginning was the perfect description of how my migraines are!!! WOW!! Great story. I'll remember this one for a long time
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Poor Alpha and Luna. They raised a sadistic sociopath and everyone knows it. SMH. He needs to be 'put down'. And way to man up Tyler.
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Wow. What a chapter! I'm going to agree with Irishboy and say that Ethan's a water elemental. So who's going to give him training on how to use his powers? He needed a family and I'm glad he's found one that excepts him and loves him. Exiling Micheal will just put off the challenge between him and Aiden. And Aiden's going to be the next Alpha, right? Are we going to see the interrogation of Michael.
